Hiya all!
KoalaKiller here, just finished my draft on this little fic of mine, and I would love to hear your thoughts on it.
SMACKDOWN SERIES #1
By KoalaKiller
It was just another boring day in the life of little Miss Misty. The sun was bright as ever and there was no clouds insight, but with this crazy world, that would change in a flash.
Of late, the ginger-haired girl had noticed that both of her boyfriends, who were just friends, was acting strange of late.
For one thing, both had bought sunglasses, which she had to admit, looked cute on Ash and somewhat on Brock. The other thing that puzzled the little Waterflower, was that Ash was always pushing Brock and why was Ash repeatly saying 'What's up' to her each morning for?
And what's up with the those spay cans that Brock brought...
Anyhow, currently we're walking down a dusty path like always, Pikachu being as cute as it can, probably trying to outdo my little Togepoo.
Mmmmm, he is so cuuuuutttteeeeeeee!!!
Er, anyways, once again I was hit by that feeling that I was about to....
POOF!
...fall into a hole...
...
God I hate my life!
***
"Prepare for Trouble..."
"...And make it Double!"
By the time they had finished their speech, everyone was out of the pit. Misty and Pikachu had a bored look on their faces, Togepi was prancing around like a Looney and Ash and Brock were staring at them strangely.
"O.k Twerps, hand over the Pikachu!" Demand Jessie, or as Tracey would call her, 'The angry Woman'.
Misty for once, decided to speak up before Ash could, since she knew how to get on the redhead's nerves.
"Oh get a life, you old hang!" The scrawny one announced.
A pause...
"What did you call me!!!" replied the woman with the ever-short temper.
But before Misty could use the witch comment, both boys had pulled out their cool looking sunglasses.
Everyone stared at them.
Suddenly, Ash turned to Brock and pushed him while saying...
"Brock-o," shoving the boy, "get the TABLE!"
Blink... blink, blink.
That was the only response that the others could give.
No sooner had he dropped his backpack, he had pulled out a folded up table.
While everyone else stared at the table that had been spay painted with Jessie, James and Mewoth's names on it, Misty stood a few meters behind the table, in total confusion and Pysduck wasn't even out of its Pokeball.
By now Brock was standing infrond of the table, as Jessie remembered the comment Misty made and started running in a blind rage towards Misty, and towards the table.
Suddenly, sounds of a crowd could be heard somewhere saying...
"3D! 3D! 3D!!!"
Seconds later, Brock and Ash had just put Jessie face first through the table.
Jaws dropped, even Mewoth's charm dropped, as they stared at the knocked out Jessie.
But sadly, more pain was coming, as Bulbsausr was released.
BANG! BANG! BOOM!
A few moments later, James was on the ground, dazed from a Vine Whip Body Slam.
Mewoth meanwhile, was still staring at KO'ed Jess.
With James down, Ash had climbed up a tree, not to far from James. As he balanced himself on a large branch, the Dense one shouted...
"WAAAZZZZZZZUP!!!"
Down below, Brock had grabbed James's legs and before Mewoth's eyes as Ash launched himself, he prayed that would never happen to him.
WHACK!
***
It was late at night in the Pokemon Center, as Ash and Brock slept peacefully with dirty big grins on their faces.
Meanwhile, Misty and Togepi was watching something on TV.
"Mmmm."
"Toge, toge!"
An hour later, Misty had finally turned off the T.V and looked towards her sleeping Pokemon with a strange look on her face.
As she picked up the Pokemon, the flat-chested one muttered...
"DTA..."
The end... or is it?
KoalaKiller here, just finished my draft on this little fic of mine, and I would love to hear your thoughts on it.
SMACKDOWN SERIES #1
By KoalaKiller
It was just another boring day in the life of little Miss Misty. The sun was bright as ever and there was no clouds insight, but with this crazy world, that would change in a flash.
Of late, the ginger-haired girl had noticed that both of her boyfriends, who were just friends, was acting strange of late.
For one thing, both had bought sunglasses, which she had to admit, looked cute on Ash and somewhat on Brock. The other thing that puzzled the little Waterflower, was that Ash was always pushing Brock and why was Ash repeatly saying 'What's up' to her each morning for?
And what's up with the those spay cans that Brock brought...
Anyhow, currently we're walking down a dusty path like always, Pikachu being as cute as it can, probably trying to outdo my little Togepoo.
Mmmmm, he is so cuuuuutttteeeeeeee!!!
Er, anyways, once again I was hit by that feeling that I was about to....
POOF!
...fall into a hole...
...
God I hate my life!
***
"Prepare for Trouble..."
"...And make it Double!"
By the time they had finished their speech, everyone was out of the pit. Misty and Pikachu had a bored look on their faces, Togepi was prancing around like a Looney and Ash and Brock were staring at them strangely.
"O.k Twerps, hand over the Pikachu!" Demand Jessie, or as Tracey would call her, 'The angry Woman'.
Misty for once, decided to speak up before Ash could, since she knew how to get on the redhead's nerves.
"Oh get a life, you old hang!" The scrawny one announced.
A pause...
"What did you call me!!!" replied the woman with the ever-short temper.
But before Misty could use the witch comment, both boys had pulled out their cool looking sunglasses.
Everyone stared at them.
Suddenly, Ash turned to Brock and pushed him while saying...
"Brock-o," shoving the boy, "get the TABLE!"
Blink... blink, blink.
That was the only response that the others could give.
No sooner had he dropped his backpack, he had pulled out a folded up table.
While everyone else stared at the table that had been spay painted with Jessie, James and Mewoth's names on it, Misty stood a few meters behind the table, in total confusion and Pysduck wasn't even out of its Pokeball.
By now Brock was standing infrond of the table, as Jessie remembered the comment Misty made and started running in a blind rage towards Misty, and towards the table.
Suddenly, sounds of a crowd could be heard somewhere saying...
"3D! 3D! 3D!!!"
Seconds later, Brock and Ash had just put Jessie face first through the table.
Jaws dropped, even Mewoth's charm dropped, as they stared at the knocked out Jessie.
But sadly, more pain was coming, as Bulbsausr was released.
BANG! BANG! BOOM!
A few moments later, James was on the ground, dazed from a Vine Whip Body Slam.
Mewoth meanwhile, was still staring at KO'ed Jess.
With James down, Ash had climbed up a tree, not to far from James. As he balanced himself on a large branch, the Dense one shouted...
"WAAAZZZZZZZUP!!!"
Down below, Brock had grabbed James's legs and before Mewoth's eyes as Ash launched himself, he prayed that would never happen to him.
WHACK!
***
It was late at night in the Pokemon Center, as Ash and Brock slept peacefully with dirty big grins on their faces.
Meanwhile, Misty and Togepi was watching something on TV.
"Mmmm."
"Toge, toge!"
An hour later, Misty had finally turned off the T.V and looked towards her sleeping Pokemon with a strange look on her face.
As she picked up the Pokemon, the flat-chested one muttered...
"DTA..."
The end... or is it?