Molly meets a familiar face
Molly was nearly ready for a girls night in bath. She was meeting Jackie. It had been the first time they have met since molly returned from training afghan medics. When molly had finally finished getting her make-up on and hair done she headed for the train station. Her train was due to arrive at 4pm, and it was 3.50pm so she had to rush to make sure she got on the train. She looked down the middle of the train and see thought she could see fingers. Molly thought to herself it can't be why would he be going to bath, and anyway it been a long time since she saw him. The train started to slow down, molly looked out of the window and could tell that this was the station she had to get off at.
She had got off the train and only had to wait a few minutes before Jackie arrived. Molly asked Jackie "where do you want to go". Jackie said "let's go in the small pub across the road, then later we can make our way into the town and go in the night club". They had felt a bit Hungary so they ordered some food from the pub, before leaving to go into town. Jackie had persuaded molly to go into a night club which was just on the edge of the town. As molly walked into night club and shut the door behind her, she heard people shouting her name from the back of the club. As she got closer to them she asked Jackie what was going on. Jackie said "wait and find out". Molly started to feel nervous.
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