This is my first fan-fic and it's a Nessie/Jacob story. I hope you enjoy!!!!!!!!!!!!
Nessie POV
Jacob, what can I say? He is everything I could ever want. His Abs, his muscular arms and warm body and especially the way he hugs me like it's the end of the world; he never lets go. Daddy doesn't like Jake. When ever he gets the chance he tells me 'Date a vampire! I'm happy you found someone you love but there are many more people out there.' that is something every parent would say… besides the whole werewolf vampire part. My name is Renesmee Carlie Cullen and this is my life. I ran down the stairs and found my family waiting in the kitchen. They all looked like a mess. They had struggled to put up some decorations that said HAPPY BIRTHDAY or MAKE A WISH. I giggled at the thought. "Happy birthday Nessie!" every one screamed. Yes it was my birthday but sadly, Alice was out of town with Jasper (who knows what they are doing). That explains the decoration. All of a sudden, Jake came running in through the door saying "Am I too late for the surprise?" he looked at me and pouted. I hated to make him sad but he look so cute, like… a little puppy. At that point I remembered that my boyfriend had promised to take me somewhere special today in honor of my 'coming of age' as my dad liked to call it. I walked up to Daddy and put my hand on his face. Daddy do you know where Jacob is taking me? I asked him through my thoughts. He shrugged and smiled which meant that he knew, but couldn't tell me. "Hurry up Nessie, we don't have all day!" Jake shouted. With that, I ran up the stairs and into my room. I locked the door behind me and picked out a spring dress, and some flats. In my bag I put a bathing suit in case we went down to La Push.
Jakes POV
I ran straight in through the door and shouted "Am I too late for the surprise?" with the way everyone had looked at me I knew I was. I then looked at Nessie and she just looked at me and let out a little chuckle. I bowed my head and put on a pouted face.Edward, DON'T tell Nessie anything about what we are going to do today. I thought and looked at him. He gave me a small nod. Too small for anyone else to have noticed. Nessie walked up to her father and put her hand on his check; obviously asking about today's plans. I saw Edward shrug and smile. Good. "Hurry up Nessie, we don't have all day!" I was beginning to become impatient. She ran upstairs and I knew hat she had hear the tone in my voice. While she was upstairs, Edward began to talk. "Jacob, don't let anything happen to my baby. Because if you do, I guarantee something will happen to you." I swallowed very roughly taking note of what he had said. I nodded and Bella began to chuckle. "Come on Edward, leave the boy alone." He backed away and left to another room with Bella. That left Emmet, Rosalie, Carlisle and Esme. " now listen Mutt" Emmet began " Nessie is my niece and like a daughter to me, what ever Edward does to you, I will make sure it hurts twice as much". Rosalie pulled him back knowing if he got the chance, Emmet would beat me up right here. As Emmet and Rosalie left the room, Nessie stepped down the stairs. I gasped in astonishment she looked beautiful. Esme and Carlisle stepped out of the room in just enough distance so that they could still hear our conversation. When Ness was standing next to me, I ushered her to come and follow me. I held the door to the main house open and we both walked out.
Nessie POV
I was anxious to find out where we were going. But as we hopped into Jacobs VW, he kept silent. On the way to this 'Secret Location' the only noise made was the sound of the radio which didn't really have any good songs. "Ok we are here" He said. I looked around and the only thing I saw was trees. Jake came around and opened the car door for me. I stepped out and looked at him with a Are you serious look. "What are we doing here? This is the middle of no where." I said a bit confused. Then he simply answered "exactly". Still a bit confused I gave up. "We are here because this is as far away I can get from your parents without any one of them killing me." Right there, I finally understood. "Oooooohhhh". He laughed and then took out the food from underneath the one picnic table that was set up. The rest of the day was mostly conversation considering there was no water to jump into, or a Ferris wheel to ride on. Just us and the woods. We mostly talked about our families and vampires and wolves. It was a short stay there and as soon as we got into the car, Jake looked at the radio and saw he was late for something. As we rushed surely going over the speed limit, I had noticed we weren't going the right way. "uh Jake.." I got to say nothing else because all of a sudden, the car pulled to a halt. I looked around once again and saw how beautiful it was. Jake looked at me as if saying what do you think? I looked at him and squealed. " I made reservations about a month ago" Jake said. I was still speechless. There was a water park, a theme park and a spa. We spent the remaining of the day there going on rides and eating some snacks. Then, right before we left I took a trip to the spa. I made Jake get his nails done. While they were drying he asked me "So Nessie, you are 8 or 18 now. However you want to put it. What do you want to be able to do?" I thought for a while but nothing came to mind. I had my facial going on so I just gave him a simple nod.
About 10 minutes later, we went home and was so tired, that just went to bed and collapsed. I could tell that Jake stayed the night because when I woke up, he was lying down next to me just waiting for me to awake.
Jakes POV
I could tell that Nessie had a great time yesterday. Everything we did, she laughed and giggled. She told me that her favorite part had been when I painted my nails. The manicurist said they were painted 'French style'. I have no idea what that meant but a lot of people such as Edward Emmet and Rosalie told me that it's not my color.
Just then, Nessie opened her eyes. I kept staring at her and said " Good Morning" when she had finished stretching. I then left the room so she could get ready. Down stairs was Bella and Edward having a make-out session on the couch. I looked away and walked into their unused kitchen. I sat on top of the counter and waited a good 15 minutes before another Cullen came in. Esme walked in with a brownie recipe in her hand. "You're making brownies?" I asked "yes. But since no one in this family eats it will probably be for decoration. Do you want to take them to the pack?" I nodded "Sure. They'd love it. Thanks Esme." I walked up to Nessie's room knocking on the door before entering. "Come in" I heard Ness say. I stepped into the room and she was just finishing with her hair. Edward walk in with Bella and asked us how our day was yesterday. For about 10 minutes, Nessie was babbling about nails, slides, and rides. Each sentence was separated by the words 'And Then'. Right after Nessie's long explanation, the door to the front of the house opened. "Uncle Jasper, Aunt Alice". Renesmee yelped. She ran downstairs and I followed. At the door, Alice held at least 20 Japanese shopping bags and Jasper was dressed in a kimono. Everyone laughed when we saw him but Emmet laughed the most. Alice greeted all the Cullen's one by one and then walked up to me and asked "Hey Jacob how's it going?" Alice was always the nice one. She never called me a Mutt or a Dog. "Not bad Alice" I answered generously. Esme brought in the brownies and gave them to me. "Thanks." I looked to Nessie and told her "hey I will be back. I'm going to go ahead and take these brownies down to La Push." "Wait I will go with you." She rushed to Edward and asked if she could go. He knew should get her way no matter what so he just said "sure" We ran all the way there and when we reached La Push everyone had know we were on our way. "Hey bro, can I have a brownie" Seth said with a hopeful smile. Everyone was nodding their heads behind him. Nessie handed each person took a bit they said things like "Mmmm, Esme's cooking never lets us down." Nessie chuckled at those comments knowing it was true.
We quickly went back to the Cullen's house and went into Nessie's room. I looked into her eyes and saw her beauty. I was in love with her. I knew I was ever since she was born. She is my only true love and I will never forget that. "I love you" I told her. I leaned in and had a passionate kiss. After a minute or 2 we stopped for air but went right back to the kissing. After 6 minutes we stopped. There was something I knew I wanted to tell hr but I didn't know how. Just then I got a call on my phone. "Hello?" "Hey Jake, we need you on duty" Paul said. "Ok. On my way. I hung up and was pissed that I had to leave Nessie so quickly. "Nessie im sorry but I have to go." I said. " Its okay." I jumped out her window and transformed into the forest.
How was I going to tell Nessie how I felt? Just go up to her and say that I want to be with her forever? Does it work that way? Wow. Seth thought. Oh shit.I had forgotten they could hear me. Just tell her. He said. Its not that easy I thought. Then he was gone. He must have transformed back. Maybe Seth was right. I should just tell her.