I figured it would take me sometime to edit the whole thing. So, if you are newcomer you might as well start with this and then transfer over to the complete storyline when you reached the end.
Q: Why would I even bother with this?
A: There are some added details, grammar fixes, general fixes and other changes. They don't effect the majority of the storyline but they are tweaked to create certain effects within the story. No, I did not add five dewbacks on the background and called it the better version.
Q: Will I get lost if I start with this one?
A: No, Episodic numbers are still there, they're grouped under chapters for convenience. Once you reach the end, you can continue reading from the complete version without any problems.
Q: What is a Persona?
A: Persona is the list of people, places and other names. It was made to ease the reading experience by providing the reader with a fall back option. On top of it, there is a Memoria at the end of Persona. It's my murder list. The number of people I slew in this storyline. I expect them to grow larger as we go. In the last count there are seven Personas for Pierce Their Soul. I haven't decided yet how to post them because they might contain spoilers. Also it would be a baggage if I were to include them within the story. So, right now you only get the starting Persona. I might take the "novel" route and come up with a general non-spoiler version you see in many published books and add the Memoria to the end of the story. But I don't know...