Ok. I was watching That 70's show when this poem popped in my head, it was what Jackie might have been going through, please review and tell me what you think!!!


That drive that used to be in is long gone,

She no longer cares. She finally gave up, I mean why not? Everybody else already did.

They hadn't notice the 10 pounds she couldn't afford to loose were long gone, they were all to involve in their own shallow view of the world, they didn't notice she no longer
seemed angry. She seemed resigned the men that she loved no longer cared, her best friend was no longer there.

When they finally notice what they've done, tried to help it was much too late…that fire, her fire had been long burned out.

The girl they had loved was long gone....