Different than Normal
Sum: A fic of going against the cheesy, cliché scenes. Cuteness will be involved. Multi-chap. Rated M. OOC. AU. AH. Clace.
A/N: Okay, so for the past five days I've been reading fics like crazy, exploring every corner of this site, reading like three fics a day. And let me tell you, I have come across many bad, totally cliché and cheesy fics that I was disgusted with. Where is the originality?
So, I don't necessarily have anything against cheesiness, but it's the clichés that are actually killing me. Like full on bloody homocide with knives and scissors and flaming swords and all that brutal shit.
Today, we're going to be handling the way too cliché 'Clary goes on a date with Sebastian or goes to a room with him at a party to make Jace jealous and he's a pervert and tries to rape/assault her and Jace saves her heroically' scene.
LEAVE YOUR SUGGESTIONS of cliché scenes you want to see declichéd. I just invented a new word. How bou dah. But seriously. Do it. Here's a list of ones that I already have:
- Clary goes on a date with Seb to make Jace jealous
- Overprotective Jonathan and Jace are best friends.
- The perfect sex scene
- Jace cheats on Clary, Clary's pregnant and leaves where ever the hell they're currently living
- Clary is abused
Got any more horrific scenes you want to see changed by oh-so-magical me? Review or PM them.
This is a horrifically long author's note. I'll leave now.
!My laptop still does the double space thing, apologies for that!
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''What are you doing?'' Jace growled in her ear as her eyes scanned the room, looking for a victim.
''Clary!'' Jace hissed as her eyes landed on the perfect boy.
Sebastian Verlac.
''No, Clary! He's a pervert.'' Isabelle complained from where she on the other side of the table.
The cafeteria was full of hot boys who wanted to go on dates with her. After all, she was 'the cute virgin', on who all the boys placed bets.
But Sebastian would be perfect, seeing Jace hated him with a fiery passion.
Jace thought it would be okay to ignore Clary for days after she confessed her feelings to him, until she saw him kiss another girl in the hallway.
So, she turned to her plan B and decided to make him jealous. She herself had a status as the girl every boy wanted. So she would make him pay.
To originally impress Jace—but now Sebastian—she was wearing a tight tanktop and form-hugging skinny jeans, in which she sauntered over to Sebastian's table, making sure to sway her hips as she went.
She could practically feel Jace's eyes on her behind.
''Hey, Clary.'' Her name rolled off his tongue sexily. He was definitely flirting.
His eyes very obviously traveled up and down her body.
''Hey Seb. I was wondering if you'd like to go out with me?''
One of the boys at the table whistled as Seb looked over his shoulder at them, showing off.
''Of course,'' he drawled, making sure to cheekily bite his lip as he—yet again—checked her out, ''I'll pick you up at seven, yeah?''
She smiled, making sure to let her eyes travel appreciatively over his body as she nodded, making her cheeks red on purpose.
If she had a status as 'innocent chick', she had to maintain it.
To confirm the date and to make Jace even more furious, she leaned down and kissed him on the cheek.
''See you then.''
And then she walked back to her table.
Needless to say, Jace was furious. His face was flushed, his eyes glaring at Seb.
''What did you do?'' He hissed, not looking at her as she sat down beside him.
Clary ignored him, instead moving to talk to Izzy.
''He's picking me up at seven. Come over at five?''
''Totally. I'm gonna make you smokin'.''
''Clary!'' Jace spoke, interrupting their chat.
She turned to him, raising her eyebrows.
''Yes?''
''Don't.'' His voice broke a little, his eyes flaring with warning.
She stuck her tongue out at him, grabbing her bag and walking out of the cafeteria.
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Three knocks on her door notified her that he had arrived. Exactly at seven.
She waited a bit to not seem desperate before opening the door, being greeted by a handsome sight.
Seb was a really attractive dude, all sharp angles and dark, fierce eyes. His hair was super sexy, seemed so soft to the touch. It was a dark brown, not really styled, instead it sat messily atop his head. It made him all the more sexy.
''Have fun, kids!'' Isabelle called out behind them, grinning cheekily.
''Bye, Iz.'' Clary rolled her eyes at her bestfriend, before walking out the door and shutting it.
Seb was wearing a tight, black T-shirt that showed his muscles with dark jeans, holes in the knees. They matched, with Clary wearing a black skater dress and high heels.
He hooked his arm through hers, leading her to his black convertible.
''So...'' Seb started as they were seated.
''Why'd you ask me out? And don't lie, I don't like liars.'' He started the engine, driving off.
''Erm... because I like you?''
''What'd I just say, Clarebear?''
She sighed. ''I'ts partially true, I do like you. You're really handsome and stuff. But it's mainly because of Jace—''
''—as I suspected—''
''—I like him and told him, but he kissed another girl right in front of me.''
She looked down at her fidgeting hands.
He glanced at her with care in his gaze, grasping one of her hands with one of his.
''Jace is a weird guy. Trust me, he likes you too, but he thinks you deserve better, so he's trying to shut you out. I'd confront him about it, make him tell the truth.''
She smiled at him. ''Thanks, Seb.''
''No problem, Clarebear.''
They pulled up infront of a semi-fancy Italian restaurant. She heard her stomach grumble.
Seb grinned.
As soon as they were seated, conversation started to flow.
At one point, Clary decided to atleast mention it.
''Y'know, everyone says you're a dick and a pervert.''
He chuckled, scratching his head. ''It's the rumours. It's really a thing, you go on a date, maybe kiss and feel around a bit, then tell all your friends you screwed and other stuff. It happens on both sides and sometimes gets out of hand.''
''You're really not that bad, Seb.''
He smiled at her, a genuine smile. ''Thanks, Clare.''
After they had finished their dinner—Sebastian letting her order her own food, being as polite as could be—they walked a short distance to a playground, sitting on the swings.
''So, what're we gonna tell?'' He asked.
She hesitated. ''Well...''
And then she decided.
Unexpectedly, she stood up and pulled Seb up with her.
She leaned up as far as she could to his ear. ''We could kiss... then make up the rest?'' She whispered.
She felt him shudder, before he leaned down and captured her lips with his.
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''How was the date?'' Izzy shrieked as soon as Clary shut the door.
''Honestly? Amazing. He was such a gentleman.''
Izzy wiggled her eyebrows. ''Did you do anything?''
''We might or might not have fooled around a bit...''
Izzy shrieked, momentarily blinding Clary. Wait, no, deafening.
Needless to say, less than a week later Clary and Jace were dating.
Clary gained a new bestfriend after their date, something Jace wasn't particularily happy about.
But it was what it was.
A/N: How was that, huh? Different, right? Yeah. I know.
So, again, IF YOU HAVE ANY SUGGESTIONS for cliché scenes you want to see changed, go ahead and PM or review them.
Next chapter is the so called 'perfect sex scene'. Nothing is that perfect in real life. Trust me, nothing.
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