me and jacob are going on a date tonight i told mom oh really? she asked me

yeah he's taking me to a romantic little place in seattle well honey i have saved

you from many things but i am sorry to say i can't save you from this one. WHAT ONE?

alice.

oh she really had me scared for a second we both started laughing whats so funny?

alice asked we both stopped laughing nothing alice oh well come on renesmee we need to get

you ready you will need a new dress new make up new shoes what's wrong with my old stuff?

nothing but the fact jacob has already seen them besides it is your birthday and i am allowed

to give you more then one twenty things fine i said with that i was being dragged out wait alice i

changed my mind i don't want to go i don't want to go no way i am not letting you back out now

she made me get into her car we were going to seattle we first shoped at blooming dales and

i found a

skin tight black dress that came above my knees and then we went to a place called shoe biz and found

a pair of black heels that had a strap that raped around my ankel then alice said she had some make up at

home and i could go back i thanked the world for letting this end i did not mind just jacob was coming

early and i wanted to be ready when he got there we were home now

and alice rushed me upstairs put me in

my dress and then did my hair but left it down and applied a little make up got me a hand purse and

then i put my heels on i walked down stairs and everyone gasped at me they were amazed with how

beautyful i was i gasped when i saw me in the glass my mom would be crying if she could dad

was upset with alice for letting me get a dress that "revealing"i giggled just then jacob walked in

and his eyes went wide and his jaw droped ready he asked me alice had time to snap a few pictures and we

were out the door.

ok will not right anymore untill i have at least three comments even if they are bad or good or by the same person please review