Hello Eveyone! I missed you all! I'm sooooooooooo very deeply sorry for not updating for such a long time! I've just been busy unfortunately! But, I'm getting back into that mood, the mood of determination! I know a lot of few probably want to kill me for being so, so late, I'm again very sorry. I know you guys probably saw thae thing I posted about the new story and how I was going to be back sooner and I lied. I apologize. In fact I think at the time I was so desperate to please you guys that I thought of a stupid story that was supposed to be a cross between Bleach and Billy Madison...huuuhhhh...Forgive me... I was bored at the time and didn't understand... I'm probably going to scrap that loony idea, unless of course you guys want me to make Bleach: a Billy Madison Story, If so make a comment. Anyway! I'm back baby! I did not abandon my precious little babies, meaning you guys and my stories (Haha). Did you all think I was gone for good? Well that is wrong peeps.
So! The plan is that...I'm going to do updates of my stories first, meaning I am now more mature and more experienced with writing better quality stories than these (In my opinion) poorly made stories of mine. Seriously, I look back at these and I find it comical, good but not good. I had poor grammar, etc. and I need to fix that! So like I stated before I am first going to go back to my stories and refresh the chapters (make better, more understandable/professional). So I'm sorry but it might be a second before I actually make a new chapter to my 6 fanfics. ): I apologize once more. Just comment/yell at me if you really, reallyneed a chapter asap... Starting with the prologue of The Demon Within I am going to make these chapters spectacular! Now for this I didn't make to many changes, of course I changed the POV to 3rd person (because I started the fanfic 1st person, then like 3rd chapter I switched to 3rd person for some reason...) It's confusing, but what I'm trying to say is that this whole fanfic should be 3rd person!
NOW! I just really, sincerely, want to thank everyone who stuck with me! I know my absence was tough! Thanks for favoriting me, commenting on my stories, and just being a Soifool fan...it brings a tear to my eye. Just please stick with me through my refurnishing session! Check out all my fanfics, maybe you should grab some popcorn and a soda and read all my fanfictions while you are waiting for me! And yes, laugh at the poor grammar and concepts... I would love it if you guys would all post a little "What up Soifool" in the reviews, that would make me not only really happy, but inspired to work harder and never give up!
So, without further a do... Here is The Demon Within prologue!
Rated M throughout for safety may contain extreme gore, mature situations, maybe bad language.
Disclaimer: I do not own bleach or any of its characters...They belong to Tite Kubo.
Prologue
She felt the warm streams of blood run down her forehead, the crimson liquid oozing out of the long gash that went across her chest, the bones that hung loosely out of her flesh, the dark spots that blurred her vision, and then she heard...her mentor's frantic screaming…
"Soi Fon!" She called out desperately.
The captain, surprised that she was still standing after that thing attacked her, probably looked like the walking dead.
She tasted that dreaded metallic taste.
Blood.
The substance that covered her from head to toe.
Luckily...the younger woman didn't feel a thing, that must have been how horrible her situation was.
"How could I...be taken down...so easily. ..?" She thought.
She felt like ice, both cold and frozen.
She couldn't even turn her head to see who was calling her...
"Soi Fon!" She called again.
No answer.
She was Yoruichi Shihoin, her former mentor, one of the few people who actually really cared for the captain.
She had trouble hearing her, her voice muffled. Soi Fon was a little curious of what was constantly hitting against her jaw every time she struggled to breathe below where her left ear was. And yes… where her ear was…
Hesitantly, she lifted her left arm, with much surprise, and cautiously felt around to see what was tapping her jaw...and when she found out...it was gruesome.
Horrified by what she had just felt, she couldn't help but feel her body unusually react. She began to tremble vigorously, and started to hyperventilate.
Suddenly she felt a warm sensation on her shoulder which happened to be Yoruichi's worried hand. That's when it happened. Suddenly flashbacks of all the events that happened in her life surged through her mind. Her eyes rolled back revealing only the white of her eyes as her eyelids fluttered rapidly.
"Soi Fon! What's happening to you!" Yoruichi cried, scared of what was becoming of her former protegé.
All of a sudden Soi Fon dropped to the ground, and began to have violent spasms on the dirt. White foam poured out of her mouth, her fists would clench and unclench. Every single one of her past memories flooded her brain one by one in order, then one particular thing caught her subconscious attention...a black figure that she couldn't make out with piercing red eyes. But as quickly as it had come, it vanished into the dark depths of her mind. The spasms continued and very powerful reiatsu leaked from her flailing body. It was almost like her body was going to explode.
She heard Yoruichi's cries as the woman took hold of her arms, trying to hold her tightly, embracing her in a hug.
At that, everything stopped, the spasms, the thoughts, everything.
The captain felt like she was going to die, because after everything had stopped all the pain came, and it was the worst pain she had ever experienced. She managed to glance up into Yoruichi's frightened, golden eyes.
"Yoru...ichi...help...I need..." Before she could finish, everything in her world went black.
"Soi Fon!...SOI FON!" Yoruichi screamed into the sky.
That was when the captain truly regretted going on that mission...
Again! I sincerely apologize to you all! I love you guys deeply! Thanks for sticking with ol' Soifool (lol)
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