Not exactly sure what to say here o.O

Okay then, this is actually my second story that i put up, but i took my first one down because it was beyond terrible haha.

I want to be a proper writer, so any advice you could give would be greatly appreciated and i just want to let you know that comments make me very happy ^_^

The timelines a bit different from the original one in this story because i wanted A and B as well as the other Wammy's house kids, but i tried to keep their age differences as close as possible.

This chapter took me AGES to finish but i want to say a big thanks to Flik98 for getting me through it teehee.

By the way there is a mini fact file for my OC on my profile that will be updated as the story continues.

Disclaimer: I don't own Death Note, wish i did, but i don't, isn't the world cruel haha. I only own my OC Secret

ENJOY and please Review THANK YOU!


CHAPTER I

It was snowing.
I'd never seen snow before. No, I'm sure i had, I'd just forgotten what it looked like.
I opened my hand and caught a snowflake in my palm and watched as it melted into a tiny water droplet. It seemed so sad and i didn't know why, it just reminded me how lonely i was, like every snowflake, memories are unique and just like this little snowflake; my memories had now disappeared.

I raised my, now empty, hand to my head and placed the tips of two of my fingers onto my temple and massaged it slightly in some stupid attempt to regain my memories this way which of course didn't work.

"What's your name?" The older boy standing beside me asked.

"I can't remember." I whispered.

The boy frowned, "Where do you come from?" He then asked but i could tell that he simply expected the same answer, so i just shook my head to tell him i also couldn't remember that.

He sighed sounding frustrated at me having no helpful answers, but i didn't see the point in asking me questions when i clearly couldn't even remember who i was.

"Do you know who your parents are?"

I shook my head again "I don't even think i have any." I told him.

I didn't know why, but that's how it seemed, there had been no one there when i woke up, no one had found me and i just had a feeling that no one was actually even looking for me. I don't think i had anyone, no, i knew that i had no one.

"Come with me then." The boy then said after a moment of silence.

"Why?"

"Because i can't leave you out here in the cold." he replied

"But i want to stay in the out in the snow." i argued.

It wasn't something i could explain, but i felt...well i couldn't find the right word for it, but something like - better, i felt better.

"But you'll catch a cold." he muttered trying to persuade me.

"No i won't." I corrected - you couldn't catch a cold that way, it's a airborne virus.

"But it's night out, it'll probably still be snowing in the morning, you can come back out then." He told me.

I looked up into the dark sky. The tiny snowflakes continued to flutter down, it felt like magic, why would i want to leave this? I didn't think it would be the same in daylight.

But i nodded my head anyway. He didn't seem like he was going to give up, i don't think he actually cared though, i think it was because he would feel guilty if he left a little kid out in the cold at night as he had made points of it both being.

"Okay." I muttered.

He didn't smile or anything just nodded and gestured for me to follow him.

He led me to a large mansion sized house, he pushed open the huge front gate slightly, carefully so that it didn't scratch against the ground and make a noise. He opened it just enough to fit through, and once we were both on the other side of the gate he closed it again.

The house looked old, it had a long driveway leading up to it, and there was a large lawn either side of the driveway which was all lightly dusted with the snow.

"So you don't remember anything?" The boy asked as we walked up the driveway.

I shook my head, " I remember waking up in a white building, a hospital, but i ran away." i told the boy.

The boy frowned, "Why where you there?" he said

"I don't know." All i remember was the pain in my head when i woke up, and my mind being empty, like until that point i hadn't existed at all.

The boy snook me around the back of building because the front door was locked.
But when we got around there i couldn't see a back door anywhere, i frowned, how were we meant to get it?

"Here we are." The boy muttered standing by a window.

I stared at him blankly. Were we meant to climb though the window? But it wasn't even open!

The boy smirked after seeing my expression.

He lifted his hand and rapped on the window lightly and then seemed to wait.

After a few moments, the curtains in the room split slightly and a red coloured eyes peered through. The eyes examined us for a few seconds and after seeing the boy i was with, a hand slipped through the curtain and unlatched the windows lock.
And then suddenly the eye, along with whoever was attached to it, was gone.

The boy i was with didn't seem bothered by this abnormally coloured eye and its strange behavior and he simply lifted the window frame up wide enough to climb through.

"Your turn first girly." The boy muttered, as he all of a sudden grabbed hold of me and lifted me through the window.
i was tempted to scream as he did this, but i managed to control myself.

The room that i was placed in was very dark, i pushed my way through the curtains and waited for the boy to join me.

He climbed through the window quickly and shut it behind him.

He then wondered across the room, knowing his way so well as if it was lit.
I couldn't see what he was doing exactly, but the next thing i knew the room was filled with a dim soft glow from a bed side lamp.

We were in a bedroom. It was plainly decorated, with two single beds.

Suddenly i saw movement out of the corner of my eye, and quickly spun around.
I suddenly came face to face with the owner of the strange red eyes.

"Who's this Alternative?" Asked the owner.

"Someone i found outside." I heard the boy who had brought me here reply, but i didn't turn to see him, i didn't want to take my eyes away from this new comer, he looked too...sneeky, untrustworthy even. "She can't remember who she is?"

The owner of the red eyes raised one of his eye brows. And then for some reason he looked above my head and stared at the space above there for a few seconds. And then suddenly a huge grin appeared on my face.
"Now i know your name!" He sang slightly as he suddenly moved away and hopped onto one of the beds.

"Wait, what?" I asked suddenly "How?" I kept muttering.

"Not telling." He muttered as he crawled across his bed to his bed-side cabinet and picked up a jar of jam that was on there.

"Don't tease her Backup." I heard the other boy say.

The red eyed boy ignored him and just sat back down with his jam jar. He pulled his knees up to his chest and balanced the jam jar on them.

"Everyone here has a hard time keeping there real name a secret, maybe it would be better if you didn't know it at all." Muttered the red eyed boy and he slipped his hand into his jam jar and scooped some of the jam up with his hand. He then pulled his hand out of the jar and licked the jam off his fingers, "Don't you agree with me Alternative?"

There it was again 'alternative', and he had called the red eyed boy 'backup', surely these couldn't have been their names, although i didn't know my own name, i knew that these names were rather odd.

"Is that your name? 'Alternative'" I said as i turned to the other boy.

The boy nodded, "I prefer just 'A' though." He told me.

I frowned - so these strange words were their names.

"I'm B." Said the red eyed boy regaining my attention "And you're nameless." He muttered as he licked more jam off his fingers.

"No I'm not, you just won't tell me my name, you said you know it." i reminded him.

B chuckled, "Like i said it would be better if you didn't know it." He said "Besides, B nor Backup is my real name, same goes for A's names."

So they weren't their actual names, just aliases. I frowned.

"Will i need a fake name like you?" I asked

"Only if you're chosen to stay here." A answered "But it would be best to choose one anyway." He said

These two only had letters for themselves, and I'm not sure i liked that.

"I wouldn't know what to pick." I said

"Try and choose something that represents yourself best." A offered

I shook my head telling them that that wouldn't help at all.

"Can't you just tell me my real name." I said turning to B.

He shook his head, "No, it's a secret!" He replied

"A secret." I repeated, that wasn't very nice of him, keeping something as important as my own name a secret from me, i frowned.

"But i couldn't very well chose a new name based on myself, when i know nothing about myself." I complained

B made a 'oo' sound like he was excited "More secrets." He muttered "It seems your whole life is just one big secret from yourself."

I frowned again "I'm nothing but a secret." I whispered to myself.
I sighed "It's no use!" I exclaimed.

"Oh but it is." B suddenly said.

"What?" I questioned him

"You just found a name for yourself - Secret." He said, finally licking the last remains of jam off his hands and screwing the jar lid back on.

So that's what all that 'secret' business had been about, he was trying to lead me to the name he thought would be good for me.

"Secret." I repeated. I smiled slightly "I like that."

B grinned at me then, "Thought you would." He muttered.

He then tilted his head to the side "You're weird, you know that." He then commented all of a suddenly.

"I beg your pardon." I said frowning, that was rude of him to say such a thing.

"You can't be more then ten-years-old, and yet you talk like someone far older then yourself." He explained.

"Oh." I muttered - That still didn't give him the excuse to call me weird, if anything, based on the behavior he had displayed so far, i would be able to call him far weirder.

"Hey," B said suddenly jumping off the bed. he came towards me and suddenly started tugging at my hair. "Is that your naturally hair colour?" He asked.

I flinched away from him and pulled a face when i realised that he had left sticky bits of jam in my hair. "Yeah" I replied.
he cocked his head again "How odd." He muttered "Its black, but like blue at the same time."

I frowned and pulled at strand of my short hair forward to examine it more closely, after all i hadn't looked at it properly since i had woke up. He was telling the truth, i was the strangest shade of black, almost like a dark grey-like blue.

I looked at B, he had raven black hair himself, which was untidy and seemed to naturally spike up everywhere. A had quite dark blond hair, which was shorter then B's and A seemed to actually brush his.

"Come on then our little secret wonder, let's take you to Roger." A said tugging at my jacket sleeve to tell me to follow him. "I think L might like to see you as well."

I frowned "Who's L?"


Okay so that's chapter I :) So what do you think?

Please hang in there i know the first chapters short and boring but it will get better i promise, it's just the stories going to have a slow start :/

If people like it, I'll hopefully have another chapter soon

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