Here's a little poem on Toshiro's thoughts on Momo. I planning to write a story about them together but I am wondering what you guys think about this first.
Ash like Snow by Blue Fire Kitsune
Ash falling like snow
From the sky or clouds
I wouldn't know
Snow like crystals
shaped into hearts
aiming water pistols
turning into beautiful art
She arrived in flames
with hair shinning like gold
and eyes aflame
who starred at me so bold
She was like a child
full of light and cheerfulness
like a flame gone wild
and a moutain gone ageless
She annoyed me
with her bubbly smile
I am sure we wouldn't agree
on what's more worthwhile
Her joyous out look of the world
or my cautious ways
Light and warmth is her spirit
that I so despise
I am sure she's the culprit
that took my eyes toward the skies
Maybe I should ignore her
but she wouldn't leave me alone
like a sticky burr
or a constantly ringing phone
No matter what I do
she wouldn't leave
If I only knew
on last nights eve
that she would only be
some one I wouldn't deny
She forced her way
into my heart
on the very first day
even though I wished she was an eye chart
broken and gray
Time would only tell
that my heart would be
not in living hell
but with her heart that's free
She's like ash
falling down as snow
that would only splash
on waters that know
that she would only be
something I wish I could live without
Maybe one day though
I wouldn't see her as a child
but someone with a warm glow
and some one not purposely wild
Who knows
maybe she could
make me smile
freely someday.
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