Hey everyone. I am back with a new story. It has a different concept and other characters.
It's my first try, hope you all will like it.
Introduction
It's a story of 6 people who used to study together in medical college. They are good friends but have different kinds of relationship with one another.
Characters.
Aniket: A surgeon completed his studies shortly. Has started doing a job in a hospital and is currently engaged to bhavika ready to get married in a short span of time.
Ansh: A general physician. He is heading his dad's hospital currently.
Bhavika: An opthalmologist. Engaged to aniket.
Bhavyaa: A pediatrician. Lives in USA with her family currently came India to attend aniket and bhavika's wedding.
Brij : A neuroscientist works in a research institute. Lost his parents in an accident a few years back. Only family remaining is his younger brother.
Urmi :A forensic specialist works in CID forensic lab.
The story
Raat ka waqt aur July ka mahina. Asman se bunde zameen par takrate hui. Raat ka saaya odhe mujrim toh chup gaya par jurm ka saboot use raasta pe chod gaya. Khoon ki Iktalah milte hi Waha CID pahuch gaye.
Sachin : kisi ladki ki laash hain. Purvi zara pockets check karo kuch milta hain kya.
Purvi ( after checking the pockets):Sir ye driving licence mila hain. Iss ladki ka naam hain Bhavika agrawal.
Sachin : Iske ghar walo ko khabar do aur laash forensic lab bijwah do.
Purvi : yes sir.
Sachin was scanning here and there for an evidence and found something on the body's neck.
Purvi : Kuch mila sir.
Sachin : Haan ye baal mila hain bohot chota hain iss ladki ka toh nahi lagta shayad khooni ka ho. Tumhe kuch mila.
Purvi : Haan sir ye gadi mile haan waha gir gayi thi iss pe khoon bhi laga hain.
Sachin : Ye sare evidence bhi laash ke saath forensic lab bhej do.
At the forensic lab
Sachin and purvi along with the body reach the forensic lab. There they find the lab assistant.
Sachin : Dr urmi kaha hain unhe inform nahi kiya murder ke bare main.
Assistant : Woh maine unhe phone kiya tha woh abhi aati hi hongi.
As they were talking Dr urmi entered the forensic lab.
Urmi : sorry aap logo ko wait karna pada itni baarish thi aur uske upar se traffic aap log toh jante hain.
Dr urmi came towards the body and was about to start the PM but her face turned pale.
Sachin inquired about the sudden change in her expressions on which he get to know that urmi and Bhavika were college friends and Bhavika and aniket were getting married in few days.
Sachin asked if she was comfortable in performing the PM of her friend and analysing the evidences of the case for which he got a positive answer from Dr. Urmi.
Urmi : Aap log chinta mat karo ye main evidences analyse karke aap logo ko report bhejwati hoon.
Sachin : Thank you doctor. Tab tak hum baki sabse baat karte hain agar aur kuch janna hoga toh aapko bulayenge.
In the CID bureau
Aniket, ansh and bhavyaa were present at the bureau. Sachin and purvi were trying to gain information about Bhavika her friends and foes through them. They firstly asked aniket who was crying bitterly still not able to believe that the person whom he was gonna start a new life is gone forever leaving him all alone.
Aniket : Jaha tak mujhe pata hain Bhavika ka koi dushman nahi hain. Woh kabhi kise se zyada uchi aawaz main baat bhi nahi karti thi aur nahi woh kise cheez ko lekar pareshan thi balki pichle kuch dino se toh woh bohot khush thi itne intezar ke baad hamari shaddi hone wali thi. Woh bohot excited thi shaddi ki har cheez ko lekar din main mujhe das baar phone karti thi plans sunane ke liye. Agar woh zara si bhi dukhi ya pareshan hoti toh mujhe Zaroor pata chalta.(And he burst out into tears. )
Bhavyaa(trying to console him ):shant ho jao aniket tumhare itne rone se bhi Bhavika ko hi dukh hoga woh Jaha bhi hogi dukhi ho jayegi.
The interrogation shifted towards bhavyaa and ansh.
Bhavyaa :Mujhe India aaye hue kuch hi din hue hain. Main yaha shaddi attend karne aayi thi. Main aur Bhavika aksar baat kiya karte the Lekin usne mujhe aise koi pareshai wali baat nahi bataye.
Ansh : Bhavika mere saath zyada touch main nahi thi kabhi kabhi koi occasion pe baat ho jaya karti thi baki mujhe kuch nahi pata.
Meanwhile, pankaj entered with bhavika's call records. After analysing the call records they found that the last call was done to brij. Sachin asked everyone about brij and came to know that he is their common friend who also studied at the same college and he presently works at a research institute as a neuroscientist.
Sachin ordered pankaj to take DNA samples of the three and send it to forensic lab for matching it with samples found as evidence.
Meanwhile they tried to call brij but his phone was unreachable. Sachin sensed something fishy so he drove off with his team to brij's house. As they reached his house they belled at the door but no one opened it. After frantically knocking the door for five minutes brij opened the door. He was looking anxious and teary.
Brij :Ji aap log?
Sachin : Hum log CID se hain aap darwaja kyu nahi khol rahe the.
Brij : Actually main andar tha to iss liye.
Sachin : aur phone kyu nahi utha rahe the.
Brij :Woh mera phone silent pe tha main kuch kaam main busy tha iss liye. By the way officer aap yaha kyun.
Sachin : aapki dost bhavika ka khoon ho gaya hain, use case ke silsile main aapse kuch baat karni thi. Aapko humare saath bureau chalna hoga.
At the CID bureau
Brij was sitting on the chair with his head facing down towards the table. His hands were shivering a little after every question by the officers.
Sachin : iss tarike se agar kisi sawal ka jawab nahi doge toh mere liye nahi apne liye musibat khadi karoge.
Brij : dekhiye maine jo kaha wahi sach hain.
Sachin : unfortunately Dr brij apne abhi tak kuch kaha hi nahi hain. Kya jante hain aap Dr Bhavika ke khoon ke bare main.
Brij: Main kuch nahi janta. Mujhe he kuch nahi pata.
Sachin : agar aapko lagta hain ki hume in bhi kuch nahi pata toh aapko galat lagta hain.
Bhavika ne aakhri call aapko kiya tha. Aakhri baar Bhavika ke phone Jaha switch off hua tha aapka phone location bhi wahi tha. Ye watch Bhavika ki laash ke paas se mile hain ye bhi aapki hi hain. Iss liye Behtar yahi hoga ki aap sach bata de varna sach ugalvane ke aur bhi tarike aate hain hume.
Bhavyaa(interrupting in between): dekhiye aap iss tarike se kisi pe bhi ilzam nahi laga sakte sirf iss liye ki aapko khooni nahi mil raha aap brij ko forcefully murderer nahi bana sakte.
Sachin : hum kya kar sakte hain aur kya nahi ye hume aapse jaane ki zaroorat nahi hai. Aur rahi baat kisi pe ilzam lagane ki toh bina evidence ke hum kisi pe bhi ilzam nahi lagate. Aap chup chap baith jayiye aur hume apna kaam karne dijeye.
Toh Dr brij aap kuch bolenge ya mujhe hi bulwana padega.
Brij : Ha. Maine hi Bhavika ka khoon kiya hain. Main Bhavika se pyaar karta tha maine use kaha bhi tha Lekin wo aniket ko chodne nahi chahti thi us din main use manane ki koshish kar raha tha. Woh nahi maani mujhe gussa aa gaya.
Sachin : aur gusse main aap ne uska khoon kar diya kyun?
Brij: Haan.
Aniket was losing his temper as his best friend just confessed that he killed his fiancé. He stormed towards brij holding his collar.
Aniket : teri himmat kaise hui meri Bhavika ke saath aisa karne ki. Dost hain na tu mera, dost thi na woh teri toh kaise mar dala tune use. Pyaar karne ka dawa kar raha hain aur uski jaan le Li. Ise toh aacha hota ki tu mujhe mar dalta kamse kam tujhe Bhavika, Bhavika ka zindagi aur mujhe uski laash Dekh kar bhi jeene ke dard se rahat toh milti. Kya mila tujhe itne login ki zindagi bigad ke.
Ansh( holding aniket's arm):Chodo use aniket. Chalo yaha se.
Ansh took aniket and bhavyaa out of the bureau. They dropped aniket at his house while they were heading towards their house ansh found bhavyaa in deep thought. He asked for the same.
Bhavyaa : mujhe nahi lagta brij ne aisa kuch kiya hain.
Ansh : Abhi usne khud confess kiya tumne dekha nahi.
Bhavyaa : dekha Lekin shayad tumne nahi dekha uski aankhein. Kitna dara hua aur majboor lag raha tha aisa laga jaise kisi bade musibat se haar gaya hoon.
Ansh : Ha aise musibat jo sirf tumhe hi dikhte hain.
Bhavyaa : tumhe bharosa nahi hain mujhe maine kaha na maine dekha uski aankho main.
Ansh : aur kisi ki aankho main toh tumhe kuch dikhta nahi hain.
Bhavyaa : Tum kehna kya chahte ho.
Ansh : Kuch nahi.
He took a U turn on the road on which he was questioned by bhavyaa for which he told they are going forensic lab to meet urmi as they would need a forensic expert to re - analyse the case.
At the forensic lab
Bhavyaa and ansh entered the forensic lab where they found urmi sitting on the chair with a file in her hand. She saw them and stood up in surprise as they were unexpected guests.
Urmi : bhavyaa, ansh tum dono yaha pe.
Bhavyaa : Ha woh kuch baat karni thi. Brij ke bare main.
Urmi : Ha mujhe pata hain. Sahi nahi kiya usne.
Bhavyaa : mujhe madad chahiye. Brij ko innocent prove karne ke liye.
Urmi : khooni ko inoccent to Bhagwan bhi prove nahi kar sakta toh main kya kar sakti hoon.
Bhavyaa : tumhe bhi lagta hain usne khoon kiya hain.
Urmi : mujhe lagta nahi hain mujhe pata hain.(angrily moving towards the table and picking up files) ye Bhavika ki PM report hain gala ghot ke mar dala use. Uski body pe se jo bal mila ye uski DNA report brij ke DNA se match karti hain. Aur ye brij ki watch jo crime spot pe mile hain. Aur kya chahiye use khooni sabit karne ke liye.
Bhavyaa : Tujhe trust nahi hain.
Urmi : mujhe pura trust hain Lekin physical evidence pe kyun ki woh insano jaise domuhe aur joothe nahi hote. Aur rahi baat madad karne ki toh woh main Zaroor karungi Lekin kaanon ki khooni ko saza dil wane ke liye.
And she walked out of the lab.
Plz review kyun ki first time maine aisa koi try kiya hain.