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The episode is Forgiveness and Stuff. It's about the ending where Lorelai says you look good and Luke ask looks good how. So here we go.

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Oh, you need to know Luke met Rory when she was six. Thoughts are in italic.

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"You look good"

"Look good how?"

Lorelai wondered how to answer this question. He really did look good. Really Good. He always looked good. Should she tell him that? It could change there friendship. Wait what about Max. Aren't they together. I mean they only went on one date and it was an ok date but Luke looks so good.

"Lorelai, Lorelai are you ok?" Luke asked. She hadn't said anything in a few minutes and it wasn't like Lorelai to be quite.

"Yeah just watching the procession," she didn't really know what else to say.

"Ok"

"So do you like your hat?" Lorelai asked trying to make small talk. Maybe if I find out how he feels, then I can figure out how I feel.

"It's great, I like it." Luke said "My other one is getting old."

"Well now you don't have to go get a new one." That wasn't really the response I was looking for. Oh, god he smells so good. Wait did I just smell him. Lorelai stop we made a rule not to date Luke a long time ago.

"Well I better go" Lorelai said needing to put distance between Luke and her.

"I thought you wanted to watch the procession?"

"Well once you've seen one procession you've seen them all right." She said as she started walking backwards to the door. She trip over a chair but caught herself.

"You ok, you're acting a little weird."

"Well you know what they say about weird people"

"Um, no I don't, what do they say about weird people?"

"Just that everyone is weird and no one is normal so if you're normal you're weird and if you're weird you're normal because everyone is a little bit weird." Lorelai said rambling.

"And who says that?"

"You know people, I have to go." Lorelai said as left the diner in a hurry, leaving a confused Luke behind.

When Lorelai got home, Rory was on the couch studying.

"Hey what's up?"

Lorelai being lost in her own little world didn't hear Rory.

"Hello, did he like the hat?"

Still she got no response.

"MOM!" Rory yelled.

"Oh, Rory you scared me" Lorelai said.

"I've been talking to you for the last five minutes. Did something happen between you too?"

"No, everything is fine I'm just tired."

"Ok, well there's pizza in the fridge." Rory said.

"I'm not hungry." Lorelai said going upstairs.

"No, that doesn't worry me at all" Rory said sarcastically.

Lorelai was lying in her bed thinking of the night she promised she would never date Luke.

Flashback

"Hey Rory what happened to your knee?" Lorelai asked.

"I fell off my bike" Rory said.

"Oh my god, are you ok"

"Yes this nice man came out and helped me"

"Out of where?" Lorelai asked.

"The diner"

"What diner?"

"The diner you and Mia go to" Rory said.

"Luke's diner?" Lorelai asked.

"Yep"

"Oh, who came out and helped you."

"A man in a baseball cap. He was funny; he had his cap on backwards."

"Luke, Luke came out and helped you"

"Yeah, isn't that the guy Mia said you should go out with." Rory asked.

"Uh… yes he is"

"He's nice I like him"

"Well I don't think me and him are going to go out."

"Why not, is it because you still love daddy?" Rory asked.

What could Lorelai say to her six-year-old daughter? She didn't love Chris like that anymore and she did like Luke but with Rory, she didn't think she would be dating anyone for a while.

"Because Luke and I are friends and if we date we might break up and then we wouldn't be friends anymore"

"Oh, then I don't want you to date because I like him."

"Me too"

Luke and I can just be friends. We don't have to date. It's possible for a man and a woman to be friends and not be anything more. Rory likes him and I can't just disrupt her life. I promise to keep my dating life away from Rory. To do that I cannot date Luke, no matter what.

End Flashback

It had been a long time since she had made that promise. She had broken her promise. Not the promise to not date Luke but the promise to keep her dating life away from Rory. She was dating her teacher. What was wrong with her? You can't date Max he's Rory's teacher.

Lorelai picked up the phone and dialed a number that was getting to be familiar. After the third ring, he picked up.

"Hello"

"Hi Max it's me"

"Hey Lorelai what's going on"

"We need to talk"

"Ok what is it" getting more serious

"Your Rory's teacher"

"I know"

"I'm Rory's mother"

"I still know this"

"And we're dating"

"Yes we are," he said. You could hear the smile in his voice.

"I can't date my daughter's teacher," Lorelai said

"What"

"I can't date you Max"

"Why I mean we new it would be hard to date but we are trying. Where is this coming from?"

"I'm sorry Max but I have to go"

"Lorelai wait…"

She didn't hear the rest. She hung up and she felt good.

"This is a good thing, this is for Rory."

Then she lay down and went to sleep it was peaceful first but then she started to dream. A dream that was unfamiliar but so great.

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Lorelai started to wake when she felt lips on hers; she didn't want to open her eyes because the feeling was so great.

"Hey baby that was a great wake up call"

"I thought you would enjoy it." Luke said kissing his wife again.

"I love it when you kiss me"

"I love you"

"Oh you do. I'm so glad you told me because after being married for three years and two kids I just thought it was for my body"

"Well I do love that part of you"

"Really I couldn't tell after last night"

"Really maybe I should show you again," he said climbing on top of her and kissing her like crazy.

Lorelai loved how playful Luke got after they got married, And how much more she got you know what. Luke defiantly had a talent in that area. Gold stars all around for him. But it was not just sex it was love and she could have an enough of Luke and his love.

"Hey Luke"

"Yeah" he said and stopped kissing her neck and looked in her eyes.

"Let's have another baby"

"Mom"

"What?"

"Mom"

"What kind of response is that?"

"Mom wake up or you'll be late."

Then she was awake in her room with Rory standing over her. No Luke kissing her; just Rory yelling at her to get up.

"Mom you're going to be late for your meeting"

"Oh crap" Lorelai said as she jump out of bed and rushed to the shower

Lorelai was so busy all day that she didn't have any time to stop at Luke's for coffee and food and for him. The only good thing of not going to Luke's was that she acted like and idiot the night before so she doesn't have to face him yet.

Lorelai walked into the kitchen to get her fifth cup of coffee today.

"Hey how many cups is that?" Sookie asked

"What are you trying out for your Luke impression?" Lorelai asked.

"Sorry"

"No, I'm sorry Sook, I'm just a little stressed."

"Did you get any sleep last night?"

"Oh I got sleep" Lorelai said.

"What does that mean?'

"Nothing I just have to get back to work."

"Do you want anything to eat cause I could…"

"I'm not hungry." Lorelai said cutting Sookie off.

Lorelai left the kitchen leaving a worried look on Sookie's face. Sookie had known Lorelai for a long time and it wasn't like her to turn down food.

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"Hey Rory I'm home" Lorelai said after a stressful day at the inn. Now she just wanted to sit and relax with her daughter.

"Rory"

That was weird Rory wasn't responding.

"Rory are you hiding cause you just went shopping for mommy's Christmas presents...No, where are you"

It wasn't like Rory to go somewhere and not leave a note. Where could she be? She could be at Lane's but she's grounded, Sookie's house but Sookie's still at work. Dean's, of course her boyfriend what else.

There was a knock on the front door. Lorelai went to answer it and to her surprise, it was Dean.

"Hey Lorelai is Rory home?"

"I thought she was with you"

"No she said she would be home all night"

"Rory!" Lorelai yelled just to make sure she wasn't in her room. She wasn't there.

This was the second time she couldn't find her daughter. Last week her sixteen-year-old daughter stayed out all night with a boy and now she's gone but the boy is here. Now Dean is tall but I don't think Rory could be hiding behind him.

"Lorelai" Dean questioned.

"Have you seen her at all today?" Lorelai asked.

"No, when's the last time you saw her."

"When I woke up this morning."

They heard the door open and slam.

"Mom"

Lorelai raced in the other room, hugged her daughter, and wouldn't let go.

"Mom I can't breathe"

"Where were you, I was worried."

"Mr. Medina held me after school so I missed my bus and had to wait for the next one."

"Why did he hold you after school?" Lorelai asked.

"I don't know mom, maybe because you broke up with him and he wasn't too happy about it."

"He held you after because of me, I going to call him" Lorelai said angry.

"No, I'm not mad I just want a nice burger from Luke's"

"You want to go to Luke's?" Lorelai asked.

"Well I definitely don't want you to try and cook"

"Hey you don't know I could be a great cook and just haven't found out yet"

"You've burned water" Rory pointed out.

"I did that once and I think it was cool"

"Whatever can we just go to Luke's?" Rory asked.

"Sure let's go"

The walk to Luke's gave Lorelai a lot of time to think. She decided to just play it cool and pretend nothing happened.

As they walked into Luke's she decided to do her trademark bit.

"Hey sit anywhere?" She asked

"Yep" he replied as he cleaned off a table

She walked up to the nearest table and said, "Hey would you move so I can sit here?"

Luke grabbed her arm "I hate it when you do that, you know I meant sit anywhere there is not people already sitting."

"Oh sorry" She said trying to cover the spark she felt when he touched her.

"What do you want?" Luke asked once Lorelai, Rory and Dean were seated. Luke was glaring at Dean the whole time.

Ever since Luke and Rory met, they liked each other. Since Christopher was never, there Rory looked up to Luke as her father. And Luke looked at Rory like his daughter. And a father would definitely be mad if his little girl didn't come home one night and Dean had something to do with it.

Luke took there orders and went to the kitchen to make there food which she felt bad for Dean because Caesar wasn't cooking today. Which meant Dean might not want to eat his food.

Lorelai ate in silence not really thinking about anything.

"Hey you ok?" Luke asked

"Yeah I'm… hey where did Rory and Dean go"

"They told you, Dean had to go home and Rory had to study so they both left"

"Oh" Lorelai said looking around.

The diner was empty. It was just Luke and her.

"Where is everybody?" Lorelai asked.

"Well you've been sitting there for about two hours I was about to start closing"

"Oh, I'm sorry, I'll just get out of your way"

"No stay we could talk have few beers" Lorelai didn't know that before Rory left she asked Luke to find out what was wrong.

"Um…" She knew she should go. She shouldn't be alone with Luke but why not. "Sure I would love to."

So Luke locked the doors and Lorelai and him headed upstairs.

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Lorelai woke up in someone's arms. He smelled like Luke. Oh not another dream. Why do I keep thinking to Luke like that he is just a friend. Then Lorelai realized her pounding head. Wow, I have a headache. Wait in my dream. When the arms around her tightened she realized it wasn't a dream. She tried to sit up but she couldn't She opened her eyes to see a sleeping Luke next to her. He was naked, she was naked. There was only one thing going though her head. SHIT!

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