Yes, I decided to redo this. I'm fairly satisfied, and fell pretty good about it. Read the bottom of the fic for an explanation.

"Mom, please!" I yelled, trying to get my mom's attention. She simply shrugged me off and continued to talk on the phone. Why wouldn't she pay attention? I stopped trying, and sat down next to her.

"Fine mom, just be here later today ok? No, I mean…" My mom kept talking on with my grandma, completely ignoring me. It made me upset, I hated it when she did that. I wanted to do something, I was bored. Freddy and the others were still singing down there, and all of my new friends were having fun.

"Mom will kill me for this…" I thought to myself. I got up, and slowly tiptoed through around the hall where she wouldn't notice. Finally, I was home free! I chuckled happily as I ran down the hallway, entering into a party room where Freddy was performing for a little girl slightly younger than me. She was probably 9, a year younger. I sat in the corner and watched with a smile as Freddy sang happy birthday to the girl, with Bonnie and Chica singing too.

"Let's sing it again kids!" Said Freddy in his usual happy voice. Everyone started to sing again, and Chica came in with a big cupcake for the girl. I smiled at how cute it was. This place was my favorite; I tried to convince my mom to come here every chance I had. This was the first time I had come in several weeks, which felt like an eternity to me.

"Happy birthday to yooooooooou!" Freddy finished. I couldn't help but giggle at that. I started to walk out of the room, when I bumped into something. I looked up to see a tall yellow bear looking down at me, holding a big birthday cake in his hands.

"Hiya kid! Wanna help me pass out some birthday cake?" He said. Could it be true? Golden Freddy really wanted… my help? I jumped in excitement, happy that I was actually talking to Goldey.

"Yes sir, oh I would love to!" I said with a grin. Goldey patted me on the head gently, his paw feeling kind of warm. It felt good.

"Follow me!" He said enthusiastically. He then turned and walked out the door, me following closely behind him. We walked down the hallway into another party room, where two kids stood jumping for joy at the sight of the cake.

"Hey kid, help me give out the cake slices!" Goldey said. He bent down with the cake in hand, and I picked up the knife and cut the cake slice. I then handed it to the first kid, and then another slice to the second. They chomped down on the cake first thing, with smiles across their face.

"In a few minutes, you guys should head to the storage room! I've got a surprise for ya there!" He said, making our eyes widen.

"What kind of surprise?" Asked one kid.

"It's one I think you'll be dying to see!" He replied with a chuckle. He then walked out of the room, followed by me. We walked past the prize counter, and past the music box with the puppet. I could have sworn it was looking at me, like it saw something in me. It sent shivers down my spine. I looked back at Goldey, and kept on moving. We then walked into another party room, met with the same expressions. One of the two kids was a girl, the girl from earlier. I smiled at her, and she smiled back.

"Want some cake?" I asked, Goldey kneeling down again for me. I cut a piece of cake, and handed it to the girl.

"Thank you." She said sweetly. I blushed a little bit. I then cut more cake, and handed it to the next kid. He was shy, and didn't say anything as he slowly took the cake. They both ate it up fast, and Goldey got back up.

"If you want an awesome surprise, head on down to the storage room!" He said. The girl nodded, but the other boy just stood there shyly. We then walked out of the room, where Goldey looked at me.

"What's you name kid?" He asked. I blushed a bit.

"J- Jonathan, Jonathan Moore." I said with a smile.

"Jonathan, I just want to thank you for helping me today. Come with me, let's go to the storage room for your surprise!" He said enthusiastically. I blushed, feeling good about helping. I felt like the surprise would be really exciting, and I couldn't wait to see it!

We walked down to the door of the storage room, and heard laughter inside. When I say walked, I really mean skipped.

"Come on Jonathan, let's go see your surprise!" He said. I jumped out of happiness, and ran inside with the others. Inside were the other 4 kids, all jumping around and playing together. A big box sat in the middle of the room, big enough to hold several people. It was wrapped in a big red ribbon, and I could only guess what was in it.

"Come on Mikey!" Said the girl, dragging her little brother out of the corner of the room. He pushed her away, and backed up right next to the door. He was really shy, that was certain. The door swung open, and Goldey walked in carrying what was left of the cake. I looked at him with a smile, and noticed Mikey slipping out the door secretly. I chuckled.

"Ok kids, I'm sure you've all had a good day today!" Goldey said, putting the cake down on the floor gently. The others cheered, and I joined in. I walked over to him, and stood at his legs looking up at him with a smile. He patted my head, and turned towards the door. He shut it, and made a *click* sound telling us that we were locked in. What was he doing?

"Unfortunately, that's coming to an end." He said, this time with a much different voice. We looked around at each other, confused.

"What are you doing Goldey?" I asked in a whisper. What he did next shocked us all. He opened a zipper on the back of the suit, and let it fall down to the floor. There stood a tall skinny man, dressed head to toe in a purple outfit.

"Sorry kids, but I'm not Freddy." He said, reaching down to the cake and pulling out the knife. H licked it clean, then walked towards one of the kids on the far side of the room.

"And now, for your surprise!" He said. I closed my eyes in fear, letting out a tear for how stupid I was. When I opened my eyes, a kid lay there on the floor, blood coming from his chest. I cried harder, backing up against the wall in fear. He then walked towards another kid, and I closed my eyes again. There was a muffled scream, and the little girl started running around the room in a panic. I tried to open the door, but didn't have the key. I looked back, and another child lay dead on the floor. I kept my eyes opened and watched as he stabbed the little girl in the chest. I closed my eyes and started to cry, knowing I was next.

"You know Jonny, you're a good kid." He said as he walked towards me slowly.

"Without you, none of this would have been possible. Unfortunately, I can't leave any witnesses. You know why, don't you?" He added, I closed my eyes, and my mind raced. I kept thinking about my mom, and how I should have listened. If I had just listened to her…

"Say bye-bye to mommy Jonny." The purple man said. I tensed up my muscles, and felt a sharp, cold pain in my gut. I let go of the door handle, and fell back on the floor in pain. I felt this warm, runny liquid on the floor, and everything started to turn dark. If I had just listened to mom… All I had to do was listen…

I closed my eyes and let out a tear, feeling the man grab me by the shirt and pull me over to the corner of the room. As I slowly bled out, I paid no attention to my surroundings. I kept hearing a voice in my head, a strangely soothing voice.

"It's ok Jonny, you're a very brave little boy. Everything will be different soon, I promise…"

With those thoughts in my head, the last thing I remember seeing was a black and white figure bend down in front of me, and rub its cold, white fingers across my forehead.

"Oh, the joy of creation…"

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Ok, so yes, I decided to change a good bit. This is mostly inspired by The Living Tombstone's new FNAF 2 song, "It's been so long." Yes, I made the characters younger. All of them range from 9-10, Jonathan being the oldest at 10. Tell me what you guys think of this version!