Alice songfic/fanfic from watching the movie...
Category: Writing and Poetry
This is my first work so please review and tell me if you like it. I do not own Alice in Wonderland nor do i own the song used in this work.
~suddenly something has happened to me as I was having my cup of tea~
I was sitting alone drinking my tea in silence and solitude as I had been since the day she left
~suddenly I was feeling depressed~
I missed her so much. So much I was missing my muchness. A few even say I have gone madder. Quite impossible though seeing as how I am seeing things with more clarity than ever.
~I was utterly and totally stressed~
The more I thought about her, the worse I felt. She left me, left me feeling things I had never felt before. Can't blame her though... I was too cowardly to tell her how I feel or even go with her.
~do you know you made me cry? Do you know you made me die?~
As I thought about this tears streamed down my face dripping into my tea. I feel so empty it's like im dead inside, even more empty than the time I lost my hat.
~and the thing that gets to me is that you'll never really see~
So she will never come back and I lost my chance to tell her how I truly feel about her, how I would gladly give up my precious tea and my hat just to be with her.
~and the thing that freaks me out is ill always be in doubt~
If she did ever come back which I don't see happening it wouldn't be for me. Maybe me as a friend but never more...who would want a pale orange haired mad man with cat like green eyes anyway...
~it is a lovely thing that we have it is a lovely thing that we it is a lovely thing the animal instinct~
At least I still have the memories of our time together and her dazzling bright smiles...Goodness she was so beautiful, caused stirrings in me I had never felt before.
~so take my hand and come with me we will change reality~
I was sitting there so long, so lost in thought, I never noticed the shadow overcoming me. Suddenly I felt a hand atop mine. I startled and looked up to see...It couldn't be...could it? My Alice looking down at me sweetly.
"Alice...how..." "I told you i'd come back" she said smiling. I took her hands in mine and stood. 'It's now or never' I thought and I leaned in to kiss her, pleasantly surprised as she kissed me back. After I remembered how to breathe I asked how long she would stay, fearful of her answer, staring down at my shoes. She took my face in her hands and blushing said, "if you let me I would stay for good...with you." this shocked me and I stared at her dumbfounded for a moment before blurting out "you would stay with me? This cant be real..."
~so take my hands and we will pray they wont take you away~
she said yes and we kissed again. "I love you hatter" she whispered and I said I love her too. "Nothing will ever take me away from you again" we said in unison and we laughed together.
The endness
After some advice form a reviewer i broke the story up more. thank you reviewers!
