AN: Hola amigos! So, I'm The Ultimate Divergent (previously Mockingjayflying456). The last story I did was a Hunger Games story, which is still on my profile, and it totally stank. I'm hoping to start over and try again with this story. So, please, if you will, review and tell me how I'm doing! If you have any criticism, please make it constructive.
Also, I'm sorry if the chapters are a little short. They will get longer as I post more. Until then, enjoy UD2!
Ultimate Divergent, Ultimate Danger (UD2)
Chapter 1: Custody
If looks could kill, then I'd be dead now.
Her cold eyes pierce into my heart and I feel like it's going to shatter.
Jeanine Matthews stands across from me in this bare, hospital-style room giving me a look that makes me shudder.
"Get a blood sample, and then we'll view her brain scan," she says, walking over to one of her "students" and handing them a syringe.
I tense up. I've not really much enjoyed needles, especially when I am not told what is going to happen to me after they use them.
The student steps next to my left arm, my dominant arm, and inserts the syringe. As they continue taking blood from me, I feel tears creep into my eyes.
Not here, Grey, I tell myself, not around them. Crying would be a sign of weakness, something I wouldn't dare do. Not where I am.
In Erudite, under control of Jeanine Matthews, breaking down is out of the question. When they are done taking my blood, I am escorted to an empty room. "This room will be your cell," my escort grumbles. I look at the plaque on the door before I go in.
It reads, Grey Alixa Rigor, Subject 004. I set my gaze on the floor as I enter the room. After my escort shuts the door, I break down. I sob uncontrollably, my tears dampening my hands and making them slick. After the uncontrollable sobbing reduces to a slight sniffle, I recall why I'm here in the first place.
When I was 14, someone at school watched me go through my school days for a while. They detected unusual behavior and sent me to Erudite to have tests run on me. They were as inconclusive as results could get. It turns out that they had run a version of the aptitude test on me. My result had me testing positive for all 5 factions. Seeing this as an opportunity to quench her thirst for knowledge, Jeanine took me into custody of Erudite, and began to study me. I'm 16 now, and now the conclusion of her studies is bound to be near. The Choosing Ceremony for the factions is in 3 months.
She'll have to release me then. For now, all I can do is hold in the rest of my tears and fall asleep as I stare at the blue walls.
AN: Reviews are appreciated!