Hi ok so this is my first fanfic in Rosalie's point of view. I found it quite hard but I hope you still review even if you think its crapola. I might do another chapter but I'm not sure if I will.
Disclaimer: I don't own Twilight (Well I do own a copy of twilight obviously but I mean the idea of twilight and jasper etc.)
My golden eyes stared out from the mirror unblinking. The loathing for them was easy to see as it made them smoulder. Ug! They're disgusting! And why the hell are they golden? Eyes aren't meant to be the pigging' colour! My eyes turned from their stupid yellow to a coal black. This colour was no better and I snarled at my image.
Unfortunately this brought my attention to mouth. My lips were curled back over my perfectly straight glistening teeth; behind them I could see my pale pink tongue. I closed my mouth in disgust at the pureness of them; this didn't help though because now all I could see were my plump red lips. I ripped my gaze away from my mouth flaring my nostrils.
This made me look at my nose and I frowned at the straightness of it. I walked away from the dresser and into the walk - in – wardrobe, hoping to get away from the mirrors and my reflection, only to be confronted with a full-length mirror. I stopped, fuming. Damn Alice! The stupid pixie, why did she have to put bloody mirrors everywhere!? I took in the sight of my body: fluid even in stillness, no bits of fat, a perfect hour-glass figure. I knew lots of girls were jealous of me and normally I basked in their envy but today I wished I was one of the pathetic humans pining after my family. My long legs sparkled in the dim electric light above me. Emmett came in the door whistling and walked over to me. He wrapped his massive arms around my waist making me feel better instantly.
"You're so beautiful" Emmett murmured in my ear just as Edward and Alice yelled from down stairs
"NO!"
My previous irritation returned. I frowned as Emmett inhaled my scent and repeated his observation. I growled and ripped my self away from Emmett's grasp just as Edward, Alice and Jasper burst in.
Ok how was it? Tell me pleaseums good and bad reviews welcome even if it's just a happy face or something!!!