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CH.1 Knucklehead and Cajun.
"Pant… it's… over… Madara… you… lose." Said a tired Naruto looking at a bloody and dying Madara.
"You… stupid… brat… I won't die alone!" Madara exclaimed as his eyes changed to the mangekyou sharingan.
Naruto and the rest of Konoha's forces, including their allies' armies noticed it too late. Madara used his sharingan to open up a vortex portal. Each of the ninjas jumped out the way quickly, all but the one who was too tired to move. Naruto was pulled through to who knows where.
Elsewhere on another planet, one called earth. At Muir island in a hidden lair, we find Rogue lying motionless on the table, a woman with blue skin crying her tear out, while the man wearing a trenchcoat with a card in his left hand watches with a sad look. It was a sad moment until rogue woke up.
"HHHHHHHHH." Said Rogue waking up, the blue skin woman stop crying and began to smile.
"Rogue! Oh my god, you're alive!" said the blue skin woman who see rogue sitting up.
"Wait. What happened to me? Where am I?"
The man smile at his beloved while the blue woman began to tell her. "It was destiny, my beloved Irene. Strain88, the hecatomb, she saw it all. And what it would take to save you. A terrible price, but it worked. It was all worthwhile. That was what her diaries were for: To make this happen." Said the blue skin woman.
"What price?" said Rogue. "To move everyone—sinister, the X-man, the marauders—into the right places so I could do this." Said the blue skin woman.
"WHAT PRICE MYSTIQUE?" said Rogue with a little more force.
"The baby I had to use—" she got cut off. "You killed a child?" she got in Mystique face.
"No it—survived your touch somehow. It's alive."
"And then what? A—A happy ending?" said a very angry Rogue.
Rogue gave in and slaps the taste out of Mystique, knocking her down. Rogue took off her gloves. "This has to be the last time, mother." Mystique screams her forgiveness.
MEANWHILE INSIDE THE PORTAL
"Where am I? It feels like I'm being pulled toward that light." Said Naruto, who is being pulled towards it.
BACK WITH ROGUE
Rogue and the mysterious guy stand over a not moving Mystique. "You got nothing to say, Remy?" said Rogue.
"None of us pure, mon chere." Said Gambit.
"She ain't dead." Said Rogue. "But—I saw your hand—" said gambit on rogue right side.
"Ah touched her, yeah. And Ah got her memories. But ah realized even as ah was doing it—ah didn't have anyone else's."
She looked away from gambit. "The baby washed me clean, Remy. Strain88—the death touch—and all the minds ah absorbed over the years. Ah was just me for about a minutes. Now it's me and her."
"But—that's wonderful, mon chere!" said gambit trying to comfort rogue. Rogue put her hood on over her head. "Ah don't want to see her again. To be anywhere near her. But – she's in my mah head now…Ah-ah gotta go some place quiet. Ah gotta think." Said rogue as she walked away from Gambit and through the doorway.
"If you still care for me, Remy—don't follow me." She warned him as she left her lover and exited the room. Gambit who is lost in his thoughts, fails to notice a glowing light until it got too big.
"What—What dis?" as he noticed it open up. And a sixteen year old blond, in a yellow and black jumpsuit came through head first on the floor.
"Where the hell am I?" shouted Naruto.
"Hmm. Dat boy came through that light. And now he is speaking Japanese." Thought gambit as he watch the portal closed.
"Hey boy, you're on Muir Island—" said Gambit in Japanese before Naruto stares and growls at him.
"You're an Uchiha! So this is Madara's final tricked. Well I'm not falling for it!" Naruto shouts at him.
Naruto charge at him, Gambit quickly pulls out his staff and struck Naruto hard in his gut. Naruto fell on the floor gasping for air.
"Well friend, you on Muir Island and I'm not an Uchiha whatever that may be, and I'm Gambit not this Madara fellow." Said Gambit.
"But your eyes… Are red. Only someone from the Uchiha clan have red eyes." Gambit was smiling at him. "I'm guessing these Uchihas are the bad boys from where you from in Japan." Gambit said to the boy.
"Japan?—what's that?" Gambit stares at him for a brief moment. "Where ya from?" Gambit asks him.
"I'm Uzumaki Naruto of Konohagakure no Sato in Hi no Kuni which is in the Elemental Nations." Said Naruto. Gambit deeps in his thoughts. "Hidden leaf village? Elements countries? Where on earth is he from?—unless he isn't from earth."
"I'm called Gambit, former thief, former X-man from the planet Earth."
"You're a thief wow—what Earth?" ask naruto.
"I think you better explain how you got here." Said Gambit.
Fifteen minutes passed of Naruto explaining how he ended up here. Gambit believed he from another planet, with Naruto staring at Mystique's body.
"Don't fret over her, she just napping that all." Said gambit
"Oh—ok. So I'm on another world. What about my friends? How will I get back?" asked a worried Naruto.
INSIDE TSUNADE'S OFFICE AT KONOHA
"What do you mean Naruto is gone!" yelled a pissed off and worried Tsunade.
"Hokage-sama! Madara used his mangekyou sharingan to transport Naruto somewhere. That ability can send you to other worlds and other realities." Said Kakashi who didn't faze under her look.
Everyone in the room started getting scared when they saw a tick mark appear on Tsunade's forehead, that is to say, everyone but Kakashi. Tsunade got up and with one arm picked up her desk, throwing it out the window and about 20 miles away with her strength.
"I don't care if it takes you your whole life! Find a way to bring Naruto back to us!" yelled Tsunade.
"But Hokage-sama I don't know how to master that ability yet." Reply Kakashi, finally getting scared.
Tsunade sent a cold death glare that promised such an amount of pain Jiraiya himself hadn't felt it's equal when he was alive. She began to crack her knuckles. Everyone in the room except for Kakashi and Shizune left the room fearing for their lives.
"I'll get on it right away, Hokage-sama!" Said a nervous Kakashi who quickly shunshined out the room.
Tsunade looked at Shizune very angry. "Milady I'll go get your table—so—see ya." She ran out the room faster than Minato himself. Well… At least it seemed faster.
Tsunade sat down in her chair and stared out the window. "Naruto please be safe out there, we need you. I don't know why but we need you, I have a bad feeling about these things." She said to herself.
IN AN UNKNOWN LOCATION
"Where am I?" said a raven haired boy.
"My boy you are where you need to be." Said a male evil-sounding voice.
"Who's there? Show yourself." Said the raven hair boy.
The man stepped out the shadow, revealing himself to be a man or metal man in a blue outfit, this man oozing of evil. He wore a belt with the Letter A on it. "Who are you? What are you?" said the raven hair boy.
"I am what I am, a god among mutants far more ancient than any living being. I am the first mutant, you may call me Apocalypse. And what I want is your body—Sasuke Uchiha." Said Apocalypse as he began to approach Sasuke with some machine.
OUTSIDE THE ROOM
"AHHHHGGGGGRRRRHHHHH!" Sasuke screamed in pain, his voice echoing throughout the lair.
BACK WITH NARUTO AND GAMBIT
Now Gambit was thinking down the line of ditching him, but he got over it when he saw the sadness in Naruto's eyes. The sadness reminded Gambit of the pain he went through when he was a child, all alone. He made up his mind.
"I may know someone who might be able to help."
"Really really tell me tell me!" Said Naruto with hope and excited. "Man, you remind me of myself when I was six. Ok first we leave Muir island and head to Texas. We need to see Forge at his eagle nest place, he might have a gadget to get you home. Come on let go." Said Gambit as he left the room.
However fate decided to punish them, because right in front of them with theirs back turn are both X-men teams and the New X-men. Standing over Professor Xavier's body, who seemed to be dead. Gambit knew only the professor was aware of him pretending to be a marauders, so he can help the X-men from the shadows, he stood with the marauders for Rogue's sake only. Too bad the X-men don't know that.
"Naruto let sneak out of here—Naruto… Naruto…" whispered Gambit. But Naruto had other things on his mind.
"Hey who are you peoples? I think…" Said Naruto loud enough to get their attention.
They looked at Naruto and didn't understand what he said except for Wolverine and Surge who can speak Japanese and understand it. Gambit palmed his own face behind how stupid Naruto did that without listening to him. The X-men see Gambit and ready themselves.
SNIKT! Sound of claws coming out.
"Well well Cyke. Gambit brought another friend for us to punch around with him. How nice." Said a smirking Wolverine, While naruto stared at him and X-23 with their claws out.
Gambit had one thought in his head that make Shikamaru very proud. "Troublesome."
END CHAPTER.
A.N. Send your review and tell what you think of the first chapter. I got this from the messiah complex saga in the X-men comic book. It be awhile when I update this story, still working on Master of the guild. The pairing in this story is GambitXRogue , as for Naruto you decide in your review someone from Konoha, the marvel world {Naruto's age range} or an OC mutant chick. And keep reading true believer lol I had to say it. Oh yeah no harem sorry but I can't think of a way in this story remember Naruto is on the marvel world they don't do that. And incase you wondering Gambit is putting together a team that why this story called X-ternal, In the age of Apocalypse series gambit had his own team. So far the members are Gambit, Naruto and later Rogue. I let you fans decided also who you want to joined the team that include Naruto future girlfriend. See ya.
B.N. Ok, honestly, WTF? You use far worse spelling and grammar then the other one I beta'd. Having a beta is no excuse for not using spell-check. Oh, and I do want to have this as part of the chapter. This part must be posted or I will not beta for you anymore.
Also, why are you making Naruto an idiot? I mean, sure he's an idiot in canon, but in Shippuuden he is at least a bit mature. Naruto hasn't fought Madara yet to my knowledge. So that means he is at least 16 at that time.
Making a 10-12 year old a bit immature? OK.
Making an adult immature? You're an idiot. No offense intended.
I find it very stupid to make someone act like a 6 year old when they are 16. It's just stupid
AN: I cannot denies what is being said here and my beta does have a point, my cannot denies the fact my grammars isn't all that, and as for my spellings I cannot also denies the fact that I overlooked some things. However, Naruto in this story is different from the actual manga. Yes he fought Madara which did not happen in the manga, and he bit of immature for his age. But what you failed to noticed, is that he immature in the manga with a lot of questionable choices. For example, He still chasing after Sasuke to save him, knowing that Sasuke is international criminal toward all other nations, and what does he do in return? He begged people like the Raigikage to forgive Sasuke when he clearly knew that Sasuke supposedly captured Kirabi/Killer bee. He took an ass whooping in hope that Kirabi's female student rage will diminish, and it took Sai to save his ass. Although Sakura was lying to him, she really did wanted him to stop going after Sasuke; He replied that he will bring him back no matter what and even to the point that if he must give up his life to stop Sasuke's darkness along with ending his life, then so be it. Tsunade usually leave him with certain things he can handled, going far to trust him to hold his own. However, since he almost got capture by Pein; Tsunade realized that she can take no risk with him and send him a way on a moving giant turtle. By the way the Raigikage and even Gaara both talked about how Naruto and Kirabi act with their behavior, and it wasn't in a good way when they describe each of them. Gaara himself told Naruto to his face that you're going to have to make a decision when it comes to Sasuke, which in this case he still doesn't want to cross that line. I can understand that and somewhat respect it, but with too many lives hanging in the balance and he and Kirabi are the keys to making the ten-tailed demon. So let look at it in another way, what if Sasuke(and it a possibly may happen or not) decide straight through that he want to stay in the darkness, and even with those who are close to him and somehow his own brother, he still does not want to be save. And Naruto refuses to give up and risks everyone lives around him (causing a lot of deaths), just so he can still tries to save him when everyone is telling him and showing him that he beyond help. What a billion lives(on his planet) or saving Sasuke and losing the fight while allowing the bad guy to win…what a terrible choice, but the answer isn't going to be pretty if he can find another option. Oh and let forget when it comes to dealing with teammates and fighting his opponents, although Sai and him wasn't friends in the beginning he did made a lot strong point toward Naruto about Sasuke and later again toward Karui who unleashed her anger on him violently. Naruto on both account refused to accept the facts about Sasuke and even far to lashed out against those who deem him as a traitor or a bug. I understands about certain bonds people have with each others, but if one of your elders is giving you advice on what they went through and its happen to be the same thing, years later you grow up and you still have the same mind set as you did when you were a child, then you really haven't grow up. Deidara, my favorite Akatsuki's member, he was able to easy taunted Naruto and if it wasn't for Kakashi backing Naruto up, Naruto would have loss against Deidara. I give Naruto credit he because he was able to use his head against Kakuzu, but before then and after that event (for the exception of Jiraiya's death) he act too much stubborn and immature, especially when it came to Madara. That why Madara does not take him seriously, because of the way he acts, but because Naruto is having other people helped get stronger. I will admit that he gotten a lot better than he was when he was thirteen year old and that was thank to Jiraiya on that part. However his immature level when he 16th year old is still pretty low, it just not low like he was 13th. To be honest most people on write about an Oc Naruto the most because they cannot stand the facts on the way he acts. That why we have a lot of Dark Naruto/Evil Naruto's stories on this site. You're right when it's come to my grammars and my spellings however but when it comes to Naruto's behavior in Fox of the Xternal, well let look at it. Unlike most of my other stories which are dark stories, this Naruto did not lose himself to the darkness. This Naruto still keeps keep his goofy behavior as a shield to cover up whatever bothering him, in other word he play the fool so no one can see the real him. Plus in the first chapter he just has been relocated to another world where he seeing some interesting people. Although he met Kidomaru back then when he was a preteen, he never really seen people like Nightcrawler, Beast, Angel, or Iceman. So for him to leave Gambit side and walked up to those people in curiosity would not be unheard but expected from him. How was he supposed to act? He not even fully an adult in this story, in fact he still a teenager who believe he can still save his friend, Sasuke. Fox of the Xternal is a story where he meets Gambit and some other Marvel Characters (because there aren't many crossovers with him and Gambit), Naruto is pure and not dark, and once in awhile I like writing a good Naruto here and there. Unlike in Hatred born from fire, he evil in a Joker kind of way, and Master of the guild and Unforgiving, he's dark with revenge on his mind and driving him forward toward his goals. And the same is said for Fox of the dead, except he have a few people now that trying to prevent him from fully crossing over to the dark side while he battle the undead heroes and villains. Moreover, you're correct when its comes to my grammars and spelling, I have no really good excuse other than my spell-check program does not catch everything, and even so that still no good excuse. I keep what you posted on the first chapter, but I will keep this posted up because attack like wasn't really call for out in the open however, I respect what you done in going about it.