Chapter one: The Mystery Girl:
So this story is based off an original film called "On The Line" now I am not taking any dialogue or characters from this movie. I'm only taking some plots of the story but not all. Also, the characters and dialogue will come from me.
Lucas Friar caught the eyes of every girl he met, he had the beautiful green eyes, that girls loved, that million dollar smile that girls adored, and a built body that girls drooled over. Even though he had all of these girls wanting him. His insecurities and the feeling of being unloveable always got the best of him even though he had it all. Or so he thought. He was the co-owner of a Guideli Property Management company. He had a beautiful home. He thought he had everything but after a weird day, he didn't think he did.
Lucas's POV:
"Okay, we can set up an open house for Thursday the 26th and I will be sure to give Mr. Hunter your message. Talk to you soon. Bye." I said as I hung up the phone and walked into the coffee shop. After I ordered my coffee, I went to go sit down at one of the small tables. I was looking down at my phone when all of a sudden, a brown hair girl walked into the coffee shop. She was beautiful. She had fair skin, brown hair, beautiful brown eyes. She was wearing a simple white t=shirt dress with strapped sandals. She was so beautiful. I wanted to go up and talk to her but I wasn't that confident. I know I have girls all over me, but I still lacked confidence because I felt as if I was un-loveable. Besides, there was no way a beautiful girl like her could be single. I couldn't keep my eyes off of her, while she stood in line, ordered her coffee, etc. There was something about her that I was intrigued by. Then she looked over and noticed me staring. She gave me a warm smile and that's when my knees began to feel weak.
She got her coffee and took one last look at me before she left. After I finished my coffee, I headed off to the subway to get to work. Once I got onto the subway, I saw the girl again, so I took a deep breath and made my way over to her. "Do you mind if I sit?" I asked her. "Well it is a free country." She smiled. I sat down next to her and as soon as I did, there was an instant connection between the two of us. "So, you're a knicks fan I see." I said as I observed her phone case. "Yes I am, are you?" she asked. "No way, I'm a bulls fan." I said. "Good game last night," she said. "Yeah, you guys beat us for the first time ever. You do know that we have beat you every time we have played you right?" I teased. "It's not our best year, so do you have a job that goes with that briefcase?" she asked. "Yeah, I'm the co-owner for a property management company. Do you have a studio that goes with those paint brushes?" I asked. "Those are not mine, I'm actually a student at Parson's." she said. "Interesting." I said. We continued to talk and I realized that we had a lot in common and she was absolutely amazing. I was so lost in the moment that I didn't realize it was time for me to get off. I quickly said goodbye and got off the subway.
After I got off, I had realized that I never got the girl's number or not even her name. I knew I wanted to see her again. There was something special about her. It was driving me crazy knowing that I didn't get her name or her number. I couldn't even focus at work. All I could think about was her. The way she talked, the way she smiled, that cute little laugh of hers and those beautiful brown eyes. I haven't quite seen anyone as beautiful as her. After work, I went back onto the subway hoping I would see her again. But she wasn't on the subway this time. I reminded myself that tomorrow was a new day. So I went back to my house, as soon as I walked in I saw my brothers; Mark and Nick fighting over the football game. Their apartment was flooded so I let them stay with me while it was getting repaired. "Do you guys have to do this every day?" I asked as I hung up my coat. "No, but Nicki here can't seem to admit that the Steelers are going to beat the Raiders." Mark said as he put Nick into a head lock. "Both of those teams aren't even that great and you can't say anything back to me because I'm letting you guys stay here while your apartment is getting fixed." I said. They both stopped fighting and sat up. "Nice one." Nick said as he rubbed his neck. "You look like you're glowing and we've only seen that look when you really like someone. So who is she?" Mark asked. "This girl I met today, I saw her in the coffee shop and then I saw her on the subway and we talked. I didn't think I could get to know so much about someone in such a short period of time. But I'm hoping I get to see her again." I said as I sat down on the couch next to them. "What's her name?" Nick asked. I looked down. "I actually didn't get her name… or her number." I said. I already knew what was coming. "How could you miss getting the two most important things when it comes to knowing a girl?" Mark said. "I was mesmerized by her beauty. She's so gorgeous." I said.
"Do you think you're ever going to run into her again?" Nick asked. "I'm hoping." I said as we continued to watch the football game. But then my mind started to wander and I kept fantasizing about her. All of a sudden, someone hit me with a pillow. "Stop fantasizing, that's my hand you know," Mark said as he held up the hand I was holding. I quickly let go. "My bad." I said. "Well, if you ever see her again. Get her name and number." Nick said. "I'm hoping I do get to see her again." I said. I don't know what it was, but there was just something about this girl that I liked. She was a real human being, girls like her are hard to find in this cruel world.
The next day, I did the same routine, I went down to the coffee shop but this time she wasn't there. So I tried the subway again, and I still didn't see her. Maybe I just had bad timing. But I was going out of my mind, I had to see this girl again. I just had to. But where could she be?