I am going over this story to try and improve the grammar of my story, thanks for the help of shire folk to point out my mistakes.

This has nothing to do with Kingdom Hearts or Final Fantasy but might have reverences from it.

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Main focus Sora

"Hey Sora wake up!"

"Hey what was that for?" Sora shouted rubbing his head that had a few seconds ago had a tennis ball thrown at. He watched his friend, Riku laugh as well as everyone else on the coach, turning his face a slight red out of anger and embarrassment.

"Hey if I didn't wake you, up you might have missed the competition, were nearly there!" As soon as Riku had finished talking Sora looked out the window seeing nothing but snow, he was going to take part in a skiing and snowboarding competition. And because he came from Destiny Islands where it never snowed, he needed to practice as much as he could. In his opinion he was the best skier and snowboarder throughout destiny islands, and nothing was going to stop him from getting gold not even his best friend Riku.

Also after the competition he would have two weeks, just with his friends in the cabins at the top of the snowy mountings next to a few other people who would be competing. Because he was a young adult in his early 20's, he could finally go out on his own without his parents there to bother or embarrass him in front of his friends. Staying with him would be his friends Cloud, Leon, Tidus, Wakka, Zack, Demyx and of course his best friend Riku he couldn't wait. Just then he got another hit on the back of the head with Riku 's hand, which made Sora turn back around and give his so called best friend a glare.

"Stop day dreaming we're here and you don't want to get the worst bed in the cabin do you?" He then noticed that most of the people had already gotten of the coach and had already started walking up the slope. Seeing this he quickly got his bag, slung it over his shoulder, and got his suitcase at the back and joined Riku whom had already started walking up the mountain.

"Riku wait up" Sora shouted trying to catch his breath as well as to catch up to his friend. And when he finally caught up they had already reached the sky lift. They both quickly got on and watched the other people snowboarding down the mountain, as they headed up to there cabin. Apparently there was another group up in the cabin next to them consisting mainly of girls and a few boys. He just hoped that these girls weren't those type of people who start screaming loudly at anything, and talk nothing about makeup. Pushing that aside maybe just maybe, they might be the fun partying type of people who you would like to hang out with, they must be ok if any boy steps anywhere near them. He had just stopped daydreaming by the laugh of one of his friends.

"Sora I didn't know you liked riding that thing so much!" shouted Zack who was walking next to his best friend Cloud up to the cabin.

"Looks like someone's been day dreaming to much ya!" Wakka laughed nudging Demyx. Sora then noticed he was ascending down the sky lift and it was to late to get off now he was defiantly going to get the worst bed in the cabin, he would now have to wait at least ten minutes for it to get back around.

"Dammit" When Sora finally reached the cabin it was already dark, and he was stuck with the worst bed possible the one closest to the door, which let in a slight draft. The cabin was pretty big though; it had a fireplace in the other room. There were four rooms all together which was the bedroom, the living room/ kitchen they even had there own bathroom with a separate toilet. It was a good thing because Demyx would take hours getting ready; he was so vain and would be so childish if he didn't get his own way. Some times Riku would take a long time getting ready he thought he was god's gift to women, but he wasn't really no matter how many times he said so.

All of them decided to go to bed and get an early start tomorrow because in the afternoon would be the competition and they needed to get as much practise as they could get. Even though they all came, not all of them would be competing only him Riku and Wakka would take part the others came for fun and to support there friends.

The next day they were all up by 6:30 and ready to go at seven. They had practised for hours mostly Sora, Riku and Wakka as they were actually competing. But now it was nearly time for the competition. And they were on their way there after taking a quick break to get their strength back, and could see the starting line.

Sora eyed his competition and he thought to himself that this would be an easy win for him. He also saw the people staying in the cabin next to him, two of which were competing. One of them had his helmet on so you couldn't see who he was, and the other had short blond hair and an eye patch. One of his friends with spiky long red hair wearing a black long coat called him Gippal; he didn't seem that tough to beat he smiled to himself.

Next to the redhead was another but with short hair and a really long ponytail at the back. There was also Yuffie and Selphine the loud mouths who love to party. Yuna, Rikku and Paine a.k.a the Gull wings they earn quite a bit of money from singing, nothing to fancy though, who didn't know them! Whether it was the quite annoying duo or the singing trio. Lastly two women one with past the shoulder length brown wavy hair, the other with long black hair that went down to her waist. She owned a bar somewhere called the 7th heaven, which was five stars, he thought to himself "need to go there some time".

He wondered what life's they must lead. He then noticed Cloud was trying to hide for some reason. He then averted his eyes back to the other group same as Riku who was just looking at the girls, causing them both to trip over causing everyone to laugh at them.

"Riku I think your spending too much time with Sora" laughed Tidus

"Shut up," said Sora and Riku straightening there clothes they all got to there starting lines, and the friends waited at the top and the bottom getting ready for the race. Sora started putting on his goggles and saw the racer number 5 the one with the helmet give him a thumbs up as a sigh of good luck, he just mealy gave the ok sign and wished his friends good luck. That racer sure did have a lot off support on his side, but no matter how much support he got, Sora was not going to let him win.

Just so you know I know nothing about snowboarding I just thought of the story one day and just had to right it.

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