Hi, so I know this is new and all, but I really want to try doing fanfiction, so any kind of review wouldbe seriously, seriously appreciated, if there is any sort of response, then I will add some more chapters, but for now, this kind of picks up where The Elite leaves off, but I'm going to add in more action than the books normally contain, at a later stage, thank you so much!:D
From my bed I could see the dawn break early the next morning, the colours enchantingly beautiful, and I smiled, remembering where I was, what I had with me. My heart was still in perfect alignment with my body, I belonged here at the palace and this was where I was meant to stay, with Maxon, until the end of my days.
As thoughts waltzed about my head, my maids came bustling into my room ,holding what looked like a ball gown, a shimmering red material that seemed to change colour in each different light. Lucy smiled as she caught my eye, and after a second I realised my mouth was hanging open in awe. Mary giggled " it has been suggested to us that you start the transition into ball gowns permanently, the regal air is a good one to demonstrate,"
"And we thought," Lucy grinned "seeing as it worked so well last time, maybe red was a good start? Maxon obviously loved you in that colour." I couldn't help but beam in reply, my maids were such wonderful schemers, their plans diabolical, but so intelligently thought out, with so much potential to do good. I slipped out of bed, and allowed them to dress me, Lucy pulling my hair up into some sort of curly updo, and then hugged them all. With maids like these, there was so little area for error. I looked like a queen, a genuine queen. The material of the dress was so shiny, it appeared like little rays of sunshine were bouncing off me as I moved, and my red hair only enhanced the look of sunlight. I was ready for the day ahead.
The breakfast room was unusually quiet, the king and queen seemingly the only ones willing to talk. I paused, half hidden behind a corner, to gather my thoughts before entering the room. Kriss, Celeste and Elise the last three in the room ,meaning Maxon, true to his word, had let Natalie go. Unfortunately, the other three's maids had apparently the same idea as mine, the rest of the Elite in extravagantly regal dresses. Mine however, was easily the most beautiful in the room, and with my new found confidence I entered the room, only looking up to see Maxon's awestruck impression, and Celeste's fuming one. From the venom in her eyes, I could tell today was not going to be easy.
I know it's quite peaceful at the moment, but if you could please please please review and follow and favourite this, then I will definitely add more chapters, and they will get verryyyyy eventful :D THANK YOU A MILLION FOR READING THIS, YOU LOVELY PEOPLE :)