Hey! This is my first fanifiction! It's not so hot right now... but I'm hoping that you will like it! I'm still not wuite sure how long this story will be, but ifyou guys want me to keep writing, then I will! NOw on to the first chapter of Undeniable Love!
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BPOV- Bella's point of view
It was a week before school started. It was my senior year. I was kind of relieved that it was my last year of high school, but at the same time, sad that it was almost over.
My sister Alice has already picked out our outfits for the whole first week back. She is a crazy obbsessed shopper whom i love. She sits with me every day at lunch, though i tell her every day to go sit with her other friends, she says that she would rather stay with me any day.
Our mother Renee and step-father Phil are gone away most of the time on "business trips". Like we don't know they go rent some fancy hotel suite every weekend.
Our real father, Charlie, passed away about two years ago. He died of a heart attack. it nearly broke me, Alice, and Renee apart. If i did not have them, i might have not been able to get through it.
"Bella! Would you please come here? I need to know what you think about your outfit for Friday!" She trilled in that chirpy voice. Alice has already changes the outfits for next week seven times.
"Be right there Alice!" I called.
"Haven't you already gone through these outfits about seven times Alice?"
"Yes, but Angela just texted me and told me that there was a new family in town!And from what she heard, they are the biggest things to hit Forks,
well... since ME!" You had to give it to her, she probably was one of the most popular girls at Forks High School.
Angela. She was my best friend in Forks other than Alice.
"Yes, Alice, because Forks was just so swept up in your fashion goddess presence.... Do you know their names yet?" I asked.
"Yes." She replied. "There is one girl named Rosalie, aboy named Emmett, a boy named Jasper, and a boy named Edward." Hmmm. Edward. He sounded interesting.
"How old are they?" I asked.
"They are all seniors, just like us." Woa. I wondered if i might get the chance to see them before school started, since Forks was such a small town and all...
"Well let's worry about the outfits later, Alice. I need to run to the grocery store and pick up a few things. You need anything?"
"Ooo yea! Will you get me some of that cookies n' cream ice cream?!"
"Of course Alice! I know thats your favorite!"
"You know me so well Bella! Ok, well i guess i will see you when you get back... And then we MUST decide on outfits!"
Ugh. Alice knew i hated discussing fashion. But she insisted that i loved it, and it made her happy so i just went along with it.
"Sure Alice. Whatever you say."
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One of the many things I loved about Forks was that it was easy to get around. If you had only stayed here for about two days, you would already know your way around town.
"Hey Bella!"
The down side was that you always saw someone you didn't want to see,
"Hey Mike..." Mike Newton has been my crazy obbsessed stalker since freshman year. I was just about to the point to where i wanted to punch him.
"Funny seeing you here today, huh?!"
O yes, very funny indeed. I mean we live in one of the smallest towns on the planet. How could i ever run ointo you here?
"I guess s-" My sentence was cut short when i saw an unfamiliar caralmost as extravagant as mine a few spaces down. I had never seen that car before, and believe me, I would have remembered it. It was actually a little more extravagant than my BMW. A shocker for Forks.
Most of the cars here were old. but my family was the only one to have really nive cars.
Well not anymore.
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As I walked into the store, I was searching the people to see if I could find anyone out of the ordinary.
As i was walking i bumped into someone. I was about to sat "I'm sorry' when my eyes found a pair of stunning, emerald green orbs. I was captivated by them. I was lost in their presence. And even though i tried to talk i barely could. They were hypnotizing.
"Sorry...." i mumbled.
"Get the hell out of my way." he said. When he said that, his face looked as if it had been chizzled from ice. And, although his words were harsh, his voice was like a composition of the most beautiful sounds i had ever heard.
But then i looked at his face and his body. His face was clean cut and his jawline defined like none other. His body, which you could see the planes of because of his very fitting shirt,
was astinishingly toned, though he wasn't too toned. Then, I took a look at his hair. It was a startling shade of bronze and very dissheveled. It was perfect. It looked styled, although you could tell it was not. But it was still beautiful none the less.
Then i came back down to reality and gave himmy worst glare. His face was hard as stone and ice cold. It astonished me at how hostile he was acting. So i just glared at him for a moment, and then i left. O could feel his stare boring into my back.
I finished up the shopping while trying to avoid him, but after i paid for my tings and walked out the door, he was walking behind me. But being my clumsy self, i tripped, and my bags went flying.
I hears beautiful laughter and could already easily identify it though I had nevr heard it. He was standing there, laughing. Not even offering to help me. So i stood up, grabbed my things, gave him the worst glare that i had seen Alice use. He stopped laughing and glared right back at me.
I was surprised at the intensity i saw in his eyes. But i also saw something else that shocked me.
because i had seen it all too mn=any times in my eyes.
I saw bitterness.
For what he was bitter, I have no clue.
But since i hadn't seen him around, i assumed he must be a Cullen.
When i get home will have to ask Alice about this boy and try to figure out why on earth he would act so bitter and cold.
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EPOV- Edward's point of view
I was pissed.
I was pissed that we had to move to this damn town.
I was pissed for what happened years ago.
I was just plain pissed off.
Forks was a small little town where, apparently, everyone knew everyone. Me, my sister Rosalie, and my brothers, Jasper and Emmett, would be starting Forks High School in about a week.
I didn't want to leave New York, but Carlisle and Esme made me. I hate it here. It rains ALL the time, i don't know anyone, and its too fucking small.
"Dude! Dad said you had to go to the grocery store to get the food! I'm starving!" Emmett boomed.
"Well why can't you go? What the hell are you doing that is so important that you can't go get some food?"
"The Red Sox are playing the Yankees! This ame is EPIC. I can not miss it!"
"Edward dear, could you please just go to the store and not make a fuss?" Esme chided.
Esme was the only real mother i ever had. My other family weren't so forgiving of my mistakes. I never wanted to see them again as long as I lived.
"Fine. But I am not going next time."
"Make sure you be careful out there! Remember that the roads are really slick around here!"
Yea. Everything was either wet, soggy, or slick. But what else is new here?
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When I got to the store, I noticed there was not too much to chose from, not like New York.
I was probably one out of three people in the store, including the salesgirl, who eyed me appreciatively.
I was just walking around... minding my own business ,drowning myslef in the bitterness i felt, when suddenly, I felt someone bump into me.
I turned around to see a strikingly beautiful girl with milk chocolate colored eyes and dark brown hair almost to her waist. She was absolutely beautiful. The most beautiful girl i had ever laid eyes on. And I came from New York so that's saying something.
"I'm sorry..." She mumbled.
Her voice was beautiful.
But i had been too angry over the past few weeks about moving that i just couldn't help but lash out. I knew i might regret it later, but it sure felt good right now.
So I told her "Get the hell out of my way."
I looked at her stunned face and suddenly felt a strike of regret. But it didn't last too long. When the realization of what i said hit her, she turned and glared at me. It astounded me that she could look so intense when before that shhe had just looked lost and gentle.
After she walked away, I stared after her. I knew I didn't feel bad yet, but I was pretty sure that would come soon enough.
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I had just paid for my things after "her" and i was walking out and she was in front of me. I noticed that not only did she look good in the front, but she looked good in the back to. I just couldn't help but to admire.
But then she tripped, groceries flying everywhere. It was hilarious. I started laughing and i noticed as the most beautiful scarlett blush crossed her cheeks.
When she heard me laughing, she picked up her groceries, turned around, and gave me the iciest glare i had ever seen from a girl. I was stunned to silence at how much this struck me. She did not look like the kind of person who could muster up enough anger to look that way.
But she did.
And it pissed me off.
So, after a moment of shocked silence, I gave her a glare that I was sure matched her own.
When i got into my car and was driving home, i could think of nothing but that girl from the store. How beautiful she was. How beautiful her eyes were. How I wanted to touch her. How sweet she smelled. It was floral somehow. Very enticing.
What are you thinking Edward? You don't even know her! Get a grip! And I got the impression that she didn't lok O so happy with you.
But then again, I pretty much started it. So i guess it was mostly my fault. Hmmm... maybe if I could somehow find this girl and apologize and get to know her. I hope that she will forgive me.
Wait a minute. What am I sayoing? I don't know her!
.. But then again I bet I could know her. If I apologized and tried! Yes. That is what I will do. Find her,
apologize, and try to become her friend.
I was about ninety-nine percent sure that she would be attending Forks High School next Monday.
Now, instead of dreading for this day to come, I was actually looking forward to it. Because there was a possibility that i might get to see her face again. And maybe, just maybe, I could actually talk to her without getting walked away from. Because that has happened too many times... not just by girls I've dated, but by the poeple i loved most. When the poeple you love the most walk away from you and leave you on your own, you turn bitter. But i was going to try to not be bitter towards this girl. I had no idea why I didn't want to hurt her, and it confused the hell out of me, but I wanted to get to know her.
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OK! So there was the first chapter! i have a pretty good idea of what I'm going to be doing with the story, but i you guys have any ideas tell me an i will see if they fit into the story!
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Keep looking for more chapters! The next one should be up tomorrow!
