me:Hey this is my first story so tell me if it's good or need's improvements.
Disclaimer:I don't own any characters they are owned by sega
i do own Star
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Stars Pov
I felt a small breeze of wind go by as I started to regain conciseness.I opened my eyes alittle to see my vison was blurry all I knew that it was probably night because everything was dark.
My vison was getting clearer cuz now I started to see blue and it was saying somthing but I couldn't hear it that good.
Hey are you alright say somthing.
I blinked twice now seeing what was in front of me,It was a blue hedgehog wearing white glove's and red/white shoe's,his eye's were blue too.
Umm.. who.. who are you
The blue hedgehog then did this weird pose and said
I'm Sonic Sonic the hedgehog
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Sorry this chapter is way too short but i promise next one will be longer