Hi, I said that I might make a sequal to my first story... this isnt it though :D This is a story that kind of just popped into my head, but I don't know if it's a good story. This will be the first chapter or prologue, if you think this will make a good story then please review or personal message me :D hope you enjoy...
Diclaimer: I don't own Danny phantom... (sighs)
...Can't Just Watch...
A human with no family, a ghost with no home. A half-ghost with nowhere to go, that's me, or that was me...
I was 10 years old, a little curious, a little naive, yup those we're the days. Until that one fateful day in my parents' lab. My parents were scientists/inventors. They studied the science of ghosts, ghostology it was called, so everything in their lab was ghost related.
Everything was like any normal day to me, my parents tinkered with their inventions downstairs, I ran rampant around their lab, laughing and playing like any little girl would in a room of strange glowing objects, well I would anyway.
Anyway, while I was playing, I came across a strange portal, unfinished and left abandoned. Me, being as curious as I am, I decided to check it out. Most of their inventions were very impressive and always worked properly, but this was different, this portal was new technology, and it was very unstable, but I didn't care.
I slowly approached the strange arc and stared in awe. As I entered the large machine, I heard my parents dropped what they were doing and ran towards the now charging portal to try to get me out, but it was too late. "Krista, get out of there, it's too dangerous!!", I heard them call out. That was the last time I heard their voices...
June 3, 2003
EARLY MORNING, the sound of a large explosion had awoken everyone in the neighbourhood. The house of Maria and Darian Hunt was blown to pieces by an unstable invention of their's. Maria and Darian got out with a few broken bones, concussions, and bruises, but none of those injuries compared to the loss of their 10 year old daughter Krista. She was apparently playing in the machine when it exploded. The explosion reacted with the other inventions, causing a massive flare of green, and blue to fill the morning sky. Unfortunatly, her body was never found...
Well, what do you think? Is it good, is it bad? Does it need improvement?
Please review :D Sorry for any mistakes...
I got over 300 hits for my first story!!! I'm so happy :D (does happy dance while handing out cookies to all!!) Thank you, thank you to all who read it !!! more cyber treats will be handed out to those who review this :D
If anyone has a better title for this, please write it in the review, because I don't really like the title much myself...
-Kate