A/N:Hey this is just something that came to me I am not so good with this type of writing, but I thought I could make it better if someone gives me tips. I hope it isn't too bad, I can't really judge it. Anyway as I said any handy comments will be received with hugs.

Dawn

Dawn lightens the sky chasing away the grey,

Golden sunshine lighting the world anew,

The Firstborn are witnesses to this day,

As they have witnessed most things in their long lives.

Yet each time is like the first,

They keep a childlike wonder of the world,

But have the wisdom of ages past,

Their faces may not age but their souls do.

They live long,

They work hard,

They enjoy life and suffer greatly.

The Firstborn must watch those around them age and die,

A person they love, but who leads a mortal life,

Can be their destruction and their salvation.

They need to feel for without emotions the senses dull,

Life lacks reason and direction,

But it is possible to feel too much to hurt too much.

One day they will all hear the call of the sea,

There will be no more Elves to witness the dawn,

No more Elves to keep the world in balance,

On that day the world of men will fade,

Made less through loss.

But the Elves will be at peace at last.

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A/N Please review and help me become a better writer! Please, because at the moment I suck at this kind of writing.