The Tatsumakigan
(The Tornado Eye)
AN: Here is the edited chapter enjoy.
Steve: WE WON THE WAR YAY. THE HOWLER MONKEYS HAVE BEEN EXTERMINATED AND THE WALL HAS LOST. ALL REJOICE FOR THIS TIME OF PEACE. Wait… what's that? It can't be… IT IS! THE VAMPIRE CHEARLEADERS ARE ATTACKING!
Me: can't I ever catch a break around here? *sigh* Steve shut up and do the disclaimer.
Steve: OK. *cough, cough* Swolio does not own Naruto or Bleach. If he did, Naruto would not have been a complete and total retard with no skills besides Kage Bunshin and Rasengan. Oh and Ichigo would of gotten him some with Yoruichi, Rukia, Orihime, and Kukaku.
Me: thank you Steve… that was… enlightening… umm… well anyway… on with the story…
Speech – "Troublesome"
Demon/Summoning speech – "Ah so my jailor finally decided to visit"
Thought – "Hmm he seems to have changed"
Demon/Summoning thought – "Hmm the kit might actually be good for something"
Jutsu in speech – "It's the Kage Bunshin No Jutsu"
Jutsu in use – "Futon – Daitoppa"
Chapter 1 – Gennin Exams and the Forbidden Scroll
BEEP! BEEP! BEEP! BE- SMASH!
An alarm clock suddenly slammed against a wall in a run down apartment stopping the annoying beeping noise it was making. The boy that had smashed it had just dragged himself into the small run down apartment. He wore an orange track suit with blue trimmings and looked like he had been running for a few hours. He had a golden mop of hair on his head, piercing blue eyes, tanned skin, and six whisker like birthmarks, three on each cheek.
Said boy was Naruto Uzumaki, academy student of Konoha and the villages' pariah. He sighed to himself and changed into a clean version of his jumpsuit before grabbing a few things of cup ramen for breakfast and then walking towards the academy for his Gennin examination.
As he walked down the street he was met by glares and sneers of almost everyone around him, read 98%. The rest just seemed to ignore his existence or gave him a little nod. He just smiled like he was oblivious to them and kept walking towards the academy, though he was grateful for the people that didn't treat him like trash. But inside his head he was thinking, again, about why all these people seemed to hate him. 'Why. Why do they look at me like that? Why do they treat me like trash? Why do they act like I don't exist?'
Now you may be wondering why a perfectly normal teen would be glared at constantly and hated by almost his entire village. You see when Naruto was born on October 10 the demon Kyuubi no Youku attacked his village. The Fourth Hokage had no other choice than to seal the demon into Naruto's stomach as he was the only one born that day. Thus all the villagers, except a few that see him as the hero he is, hate him. The Third then passed a law so that no one could tell Naruto what was in him. Though this still didn't stop them from discriminating against him.
He was banned from restaurants, stores, the library, and other places that normal people were allowed in. When he was let into stores he was sold the worst possible items at the highest possible prices. So he had resorted to sneaking around to get the items he needed to live. He had so far stolen varied items from furniture to food to shinobi equipment. He had also dug through trashcans to find discarded scrolls from which to learn from. He had even found a few scrolls still in their packaging, which seemed a bit weird to him but he wasn't going to complain.
He made it the rest of the way to the academy with no incident and quickly slipped into his 'mask', the loud idiot blonde knucklehead with no talent, that seemed to be unnoticeable, unless you where Shikamaru Nara and Shino Aburame. They were the only two who ever saw through his mask. So with a resigned sigh he walked into the room and took his usual seat and waited for the Super-Fan-Girlish-Screeching-Banshee to show up. 15 minutes later said Banshee arrived with The-Bossy-Bitch from Hell, aka Sakura Haruno and Ino Yamanaka. "Hey Sakura-chan how are you today?"
"Shut up dope and get up so I can sit next to Sasuke-kun!"
Grumbling Naruto slowly got out of his seat and walked to the back and plopped down next to Hinata, knowing she would start to blush. "Hey Hinata-chan how are you?"
"I-I'm G-go-good N-nar-naruto-kun."
"You really need to stop stuttering Hinata-chan. Even though it is a little cute," Naruto said teasingly.
Hinata just blushed and sputtered out an apology. "You don't have to apologize you know."
Hinata just repeated her apology. Naruto sighed. Then he heard Iruka-sensei walking into the room shouting at everyone to shut up. "Ok class when you here your names come into the adjacent classroom for your exam."
After an hour of testing it was finally Naruto's turn. He walked into the room to see Iruka-sensei and that ass hole Mizuki waiting for him.
"Okay Naruto all you have to do is create at least 3 clones, replace with anything in the room, get 7 out of 10 on the kunai throw, and do a henge correctly."
"Ok here I go."
Naruto started by throwing kunai and shuriken at the targets, careful to do just enough to pass. He then used a henge to change into the fourth. Iruka stared at how similar they were almost like father and son. Then he thought about it, 'Nah who am I kidding if he actually was Naruto's father then he would have had better treatment in his life, also he would be better at this stuff *sigh*'
Naruto then replaced himself with Mizuki, sending the teacher to the floor with the unexpected switch. Then he tried to do his clones, but overloaded them once again. All he got was a sickly looking clone that would no sooner fool an enemy Nin then it would get up and tap dance.
"I'm sorry Naruto but you fail."
****Scene Break****
"Hey Naruto."
Naruto looked up from his spot on the swing to see Mizuki talking to him. He then proceeded to talk to Mizuki and pretend to be excited by the 'substitute' graduation exam. Laughing inside at how gullible Mizuki seems to think he is he agreed to do it. Later that night Naruto used his amazing stealth skills to sneak into the tower and steal the scroll. On his way out he came across the Hokage and proceeded knock him out with his Sexy Jutsu. Sighing loudly Naruto jumped out the window and sped off.
Arriving at the designated meeting area Naruto proceeded to learn some stuff from the scroll. Opening it up the first technique he saw was Kage Bunshin no Jutsu. Reading the description Naruto smirked semi evilly, semi mischievously and got to work.
****Time Break****
Naruto sat down for a quick breather before looking at the scroll again. "Um, let's see. I've got the Kage Bunshin no jutsu down. Hmm… next is the Shuriken Kage Bunshin no Jutsu, Kunai Kage Bunshin No Jutsu, Bunshin Bakuha. I'll copy these down to learn later," He thought. He quickly reached into his hideous orange jacket and pulled out an empty scroll with ink and brush. 'The benefits of being a prankster and being into seals' he thought.
After copying down the three techniques, he quickly skimmed through the next part of the scroll. He then had clones start copying stuff out of the scroll that was either interesting, or really useful. Naruto also joined them and practiced assimilating information from clones as he waited for them to finish copying a few things before dispelling them and replacing them with another. He got slight headaches when he dispelled more than one at a time but it got less and less each time it happened.
About an hour later and Naruto had copied everything that he thought was of use from the scroll. He stood up and shut the scroll making sure to stuff his copy into his pants pocket. He then began to wonder whether or not his sensei would show up, when he heard someone enter the clearing, huffing from having run a long distance. "You!" said an angry voice from behind him. He quickly turned around and smiled when he saw his academy teacher Iruka.
"Heh, hey Iruka-Sensei, I found you," Said Naruto.
"Baka, I found YOU," Shouted the teacher.
"Ne, Iruka-sensei you can pass me now. I only managed to learn one of the techniques on the scroll but you'll have to pass me for sure," said Naruto playing along with his dope persona till Mizuki got here.
Now this confused Iruka as he pondered, 'He's been training, no wonder he's so exhausted. But what's he talking about graduating…' "Mizuki sensei told me about the alternate graduation exam," continued Naruto, "he said if I learnt a technique from the scroll I'd pass".
Iruka's eyes widened then he started to say, "Naru-," but he was quickly cut off by the sound of six kunai heading towards him. He quickly turned around but wasn't fast enough to dodge the projectiles. He stifled a gasp. "Mizuki" he breathed out venomously. "Why?"
Mizuki simply snorted and said, "I see you found the gaki for me. Congratulations, you just signed your death warrant along with the demon gaki over there."
Naruto could not believe what he was hearing… mostly. The teacher who was always smiling at him wanted to kill him. (Damn fake smiles) He heard the voice of Iruka telling him "Get away from here Naruto, just don't let Mizuki get his hands on the scroll, he's using you to get it for himself."
Naruto made to get up and run. But before he could make a step, Mizuki took six shuriken from his equipment pouch and flung them at Naruto at an incredible speed.
Iruka saw the attack and tried his best to remove Naruto from its path but in so doing ended up with three of the weapons in his chest and shoulder while the others missed and lodged themselves into a nearby tree.
"Why do you protect him," sneered Mizuki, "after all the things that this demon did you still stand by his side? Why do you protect a demon that killed hundreds of innocent people?"
"Stop it Mizuki!" exclaimed Iruka, "You know we're not supposed to speak of this. It forbidden for a reason!" stated Iruka. He tried to stop Mizuki from telling Naruto about it.
Mizuki however had no intention of stopping and continued on. For years he had wanted nothing more than to wring Naruto's neck or stick a kunai in his throat. Now that he got his chance, he definitely wasn't going to pass it up.
"Naruto, do you know why everybody hates you, why everybody treats you so bad like you did something, why nobody wants to be your friend? Off course you don't know it's an S class secret after all. Listen well you little demon, twelve years ago the Yondaime didn't kill the Kyuubi instead he sealed it into a baby. And do you know who that baby was? Can you take a guess or are you too dumb to figure it out?"
"Please Mizuki, stop it". But the cry fell on deaf ears as he continued on. "You were the one chosen to contain the Kyuubi; you are the Nine Tailed Demon Fox!"
Naruto just hung his head and pretended to be scared. Mizuki, seeing his chance took a Fuma shuriken from his back and flung it full force towards the paralyzed Naruto while screaming out "die".
Then something happened that neither of the chunnin, nor the watching Hokage, would ever forget. Naruto just laughed like a maniac and caught the Fuma shuriken in midair. Both of the teachers were looking at him like he had lost his mind. He just continued laughing before he looked up and said, "Is that it? Is that why? Figures you and the dumb fucks in this village would hate me for something I had no god damn control over. Well since that didn't work Mizuki-teme want to try something else?"
"Fine I will," responded Mizuki while turning and throwing his other Fuma shuriken at a still shocked Iruka. Naruto was in shock. He didn't want Iruka-sensei to die he was the only one to ever care for him at the academy. Suddenly, it seemed like the world slowed down and a pain built up in Naruto's eyes. He somehow tracked the projectiles path and flung the Fuma shuriken he had in his hand at it, knocking it into a tree right as the pain in his eyes stopped.
He looked up at them and they cringed slightly. His eyes had become completely slate grey. It seemed as if the color was swirling around his pupil, like a tornado sucking you into its endless black depths. He then said "If you lay even one finger on Iruka-Sensei, I'll Kill You"
Mizuki simply laughed out loud, while still kind of freaked out about the eye thing, and said "You and what army punk!"
Here was the dead-last of the academy threatening a Chunnin with death. The very thought was laughable at best. It was downright hilarious to him. While being caught up in his own musings, he failed to notice the faint outline of chakra that began to seep out of Naruto while he prepared himself for his jutsu. He still continued to taunt Naruto by saying,
"Tell you what; I'll give you a chance before I kill you."
Naruto, not wasting anytime time said, "Whatever you dish out, I'll send it back at you a thousand times harder, Kage Bunshin no Jutsu!" Numerous puffs of smoke later and a sea of orange was the only thing that could describe the scene before the two academy teachers.
Both stood with their eyes bulging out of their sockets as they gazed upon the technique performed by Naruto. Never in their lives would they have expected the dead-last of the academy to be able to perform an A-ranked Kinjutsu in the span of mere hours let alone master it to such an extent! Here was the same person who couldn't even create a Bunshin even if his life depended on it mastering a Kinjutsu.
Mizuki was in an entranced state, he couldn't believe his eyes or Naruto's for that matter. Taking advantage of the situation Naruto and all his clones brought their hands up and shot numerous little wind blades at Mizuki completely instinctively.
Before long, all that was left of Mizuki was a bloody pulp for his body. Naruto, who was completely tired from doing that last attack, then said "Ne, Iruka-sensei, do you think I went a little overboard?"
Iruka having had little time to process all that he had seen immediately perked up and just smiled at his favorite student. Here he thought that Naruto was a slow learner and would probably have to repeat the academy another year, but it seemed that he earned the right to be called a Gennin and he would be sure to honor what Mizuki had told Naruto, even if it was with evil intentions.
"Come over here Naruto" he said. "Close your eyes Naruto."
Naruto did as asked and closed his eyes and was about to ask what the matter was till he felt cold metal against his forehead and hearing his teacher say "You can open them now."
Naruto already had an idea of what it was but opened his eyes to look at Iruka's bare forehead just incase. "Congratulations on passing Naruto, I expect great things from you" said the Chunnin.
He almost didn't have time to complete his statement before he was enveloped in a bone crushing hug from Naruto.
"Oomph" stifled Iruka as Naruto literally crushed him. "Easy there, we've got to get to the hospital and get this looked over ok."
"Sure thing Sensei" replied Naruto.
The two then began their slow trek back to the village proper, both wearing identical smiles on their faces while dragging an unconscious Mizuki and the forbidden scroll behind them.
**** Scene Break ****
Sarutobi sat in his office after turning off his spy ball from the limping forms of Naruto and Iruka. He had watched throughout it all as Naruto learned most of the truth of that night. He watched as Naruto accepted his burden and activated his Kekkei Genkai to save Iruka. He smiled when Iruka graduated Naruto and called off the search for the scroll as soon as they started heading back.
He was brought out of his musings as his secretary called that Naruto and Iruka wanted to see him. He told her to let them in.
When they entered, Naruto was in the front literally dragging his Sensei behind him. "Oji-san" he yelled out as soon as he entered.
"It's been a while eh Naruto?" Sarutobi said while maintaining an impassive face. This cause Naruto to smile and the elder Hokage finally gave way and let a small smile spread on his lips.
"Please be seated," he said gesturing with his hand. "We have much to talk about." And so began a recollection of the night's activities by Naruto, with Iruka adding in bits and pieces where necessary. Naruto though carefully omitted the parts where he received the scroll and copied the other techniques.
After completing their tale, the Hokage just shook his head and chuckled deeply. You could always count on Naruto to provide entertainment in the village. Just yesterday he had painted the Hokage Mountain and would have gotten away with it had it not been for Iruka finding him. It was still a mystery to him how Naruto seemed to outrun and outwit most of his Chuunin, Jonin, and even the occasional ANBU sent on his trail.
"Now Naruto," the Hokage began, "This incident will be labeled as an A-rank mission and your payment will be deposited into your account. It will be in your records and Iruka's as well. Also I know about the 'mask', and I am not telling you to drop it but I am telling you that it might be a good time to finally show the village your true self. Of course you could wait for the Chunnin Exams but I'd rather you didn't as it could affect your missions between now and then." Iruka was a little confused at this but remembered that it is Naruto so you could never be sure what would happen around him.
"Fine Hokage-sama I'll drop it, but you have to deal with the repercussions, not me, got it?"
"Of course now I know you want to know about your Kekkei Genkai that you just activated and to get some sleep so I'll make this short. Your bloodline is called the Tatsumakigan and it gives the wielder an instinctual grasp on futon jutsu, allow you to track high speed movements, and makes it easier to use one handed seals. This bloodline comes from your mom's side of the family, the Uzumaki Clan. Her name was Kushina Uzumaki and she died in childbirth. I cannot tell you about your father till you make Chunnin per his request."
"Thanks Hokage-jiji I'll see you around, and Iruka-sensei I'll see you in 2 weeks for team assignments okay."
"Yeah later Naruto," replied Iruka absently as he was still going over everything he had learned in his head and being shocked at Naruto using the Hokage's proper title. Chuckling slightly Naruto made his way home for the night.
****Scene Break****
The next morning Naruto woke up early feeling fresh as a daisy, despite having been up late last night helping deal with a traitor and the shocking revelations that followed. He stood up and stretched out, working out some of the kinks he had gotten from the night before, and after that he started to get ready for the day, getting showered, getting dressed, eating his ramen and then heading for the library.
Since he had decided to drop his mask he started as he walked down the street. Now he no longer wore his "happy mask smile" he just settled for a neutral look and only allowed small smiles for the ones that smiled at him, which seemed to make them a bit happier seeing their savior show a real smile and act like a real ninja.
Making his way inside the library he was met with shelf after shelf of books. Shaking his self a little at the ensuing headache he made his way to the shinobi section.
As soon as he made it to the shinobi section he created ten clones. Nodding to them he sent them away, as they already knew what he wanted. Then having another idea he created three more clones. "Hey I want you guys to go to the civilian section and read up on stuff like politics and economics. Seeing as a Kage has to handle things like that."
They nodded and hopped over to the required section. Naruto smirked as he saw his clones grab books on chakra, seals, hand seals, basic shinobi equipment and techniques, taijutsu, kenjutsu, and a guide called "Shinobi Tactics and The Basics of Missions Equipment."
Smiling to himself, literally, he walked off to Higurashi's Weapon Store, the only store he knew of that didn't throw him out for being him.
Arriving at the store he saw that it was open so he opened the door and went in. He noticed that there was no bell on the door and he saw a shadow over by the counter so he headed that way. When he got there, though, he was frozen in shock with a massive blush and a little blood coming out of his nose. Sitting at the counter in a Chinese style button up shirt and brown pants was Tenten.
But that's not what was so shocking. What was shocking was that her shirt was unbuttoned and her bra pulled down bellow her breast, with her pants around her knees while she fingered and fondled herself and moaned softly. He stood there transfixed as she continued her ministrations seemingly unaware of his presence. This continued for a few minutes, with her giving the occasionally loud moan, before she finally had her orgasm. He was stiff as a board and completely inattentive as she pulled her clothes back on and turned toward him giving a saucy smile.
"Naruto-kun" Tenten said smirking, "Oh look I broke him… what to do, what to do *smiles sexily*… hmm well he seems to be fine… just a little hard *giggle*… *sigh* and I can't play with him *pouts*… might as well see what he's doing here." She then slapped him on the face gently a few times to wake him from his stupor. He then started stuttering out an apology.
"It's okay, I mean it's not like you came here just to see me masturbate right?" It was so fun teasing him.
"R-r-right, I-I'm l-looking f-for a whole new wardrobe." he stuttered trying to get the image of her hot sweaty body out of his mind. This of course only made him think of it more, causing a certain part of his body to twitch, and Tenten just had to notice and smirk at him about it.
"Well Naruto-kun, you came to the right place. The Higurashi's weapon store is one of the best in Konoha."
"I'm going to need a lot of help because I've never really done this before," said Naruto a little shyly.
"Really now," Said a deep voice from behind him.
He quickly whirled around to face a tall man who looked to be in his late thirties and if looks were anything to go by then he was definitely related to Tenten. He blushed even more know considering just what Tenten was doing when he arrived.
"Hi, I'm the owner of the store Iroshi and Tenten's dad." He said extending his hand for a handshake with a small smile on his lips. In his mind however, an entirely different set of thoughts were being processed.
'So this is the one that the Yondaime choose to seal the Kyuubi in. Come to think of it, he does look a lot like…hmm I wonder. I'll have to have a talk with the Sandaime sometime soon.'
He was broken from his thoughts when his daughter asked
"Hey Dad, would you mind manning the cashier for a while, I'm going to help Naruto-kun pick out his clothes."
"Sure thing Pumpkin, just ensure you don't do anything naughty alright." He said at the expense of his daughter.
"Don't worry dad, nothing more than kissing and groping I promise," teased Tenten.
"Of course pumpkin, but don't corrupt him to much he is still a little innocent." He replied, knowing that she was just kidding, or so he thinks.
And so they began their trek throughout the store past various weapons as Tenten Babbled on about virtually every weapon that they passed until they arrived at the clothing department. "OK, we're here. Now what exactly do you want," asked Tenten.
"Uh, I'm not sure, why don't you just decide. Your better at it than me," Replied Naruto.
"Ok. Hmm… Uh huh… Nah… Hmm" Tenten mumbled, "Ok strip to your boxers so I can see what I'm working with." Blushing slightly he did as he was told and stood stock still as Tenten's fingers wandered over his skin, her smirking at him the whole time. She then started going threw the various clothes around them. As she went along picking out clothes she contemplated just groping him then and there and seeing what happens.
After a few minutes of incessant mumbling by Tenten she finally emerged with a large bundle in her arms which she flung unto Naruto who had a hard time keeping his balance until he finally stabilized.
"Go try these on," she ordered. And that's how the next hour continued for Naruto, with him trying on different outfits and Tenten either voicing her approval or disapproval, while occasionally groping him.
Eventually she found a style that fit. Now Naruto was wearing dark black shinobi pants with a lot of pockets that tucked into a pair of black steel toed combat boots instead of shinobi sandals. He had a black sleeveless Chinese style shirt like hers but with a dark orange trim. His hands were covered in fingerless gloves that had metal knuckles that he could channel chakra through to increase the damage done. His arms were also covered in black bandages up to his biceps. Over this Tenten threw on a black cloak that covered his form down to the ankles. He also had a belt that had small compartments on it that was used by Fuinjutsu users, the compartments were made so that they could hold at least three times as more then what you could tell by its size. Lastly she changed the strap to his head band, giving it a long black fabric that could be folded like a bandana to hide his hair when on stealth missions.
"There, you look much better now," Tenten said, smiling at him. Indeed he did look much better, now that she was seeing him without all the orange he actually looked cute. "Now you like a real shinobi."
"You think so?" Naruto blushed as he scratched the back of his head.
"Of course! So will that be all?" Tenten asked.
"Yes I-" Naruto paused for a moment and his eyes glazed over as the memories of one of his clones hit him.
"Hello, anybody home?" Tenten asked.
"Actually I do need some more things," Naruto said, turning his attention back to Tenten who was looking at him with her head tilted. "First do you have any training weights I can buy?"
"Of course," Tenten said, leading Naruto over to one section of the store. She went up to a shelf and grabbed a box. "This has a two pair set of training weights, one for the arms and one for the legs. To change their weight you just channel chakra into them and to release the weights you just hold your hand in the release seal and say 'kai'."
Naruto nodded at the explanation as he grabbed the box in her hand. "Next up I need a standard set of kunai, shuriken, explosive notes, smoke bombs, and ninja wire, flash tags, sealing ink, blank scrolls, and a sealing scroll to put it all in." Naruto closed his eyes as the information of another clone hit him, this was going to take some getting used to.
His requests were quickly filled out and before long they were ready to head back to the counter to pay for the items. On the way, the two continued to engage in small talk about different things. He had told her that he recently graduated and was waiting to be placed in his Gennin team along with their sensei.
Naruto on the other hand learned that she had been in a team for almost a year now and was teamed up with a 'stuck-up Hyuuga' and two spandex wearing, Taijutsu freaks. Naruto roared with laughter at her description but was informed that though they were weird they made a great team.
As they neared the counter Tenten's Dad, Iroshi couldn't help but smile when he saw the two teenagers enjoying their time together. It wasn't often that his daughter had the chance to enjoy company since she had so many duties as a kunoichi her time was limited. He almost did a double take when he saw Naruto since he was now decked in full Shinobi attire including the gloves and wrap. He would definitely be a heartbreaker in the near future.
"Hey dad, we're done now," Said Tenten as they walked to the counter.
"How much does it cost," asked Naruto
Iroshi started thinking as Tenten began to count the total. She showed Naruto the price and he immediately put the cash on the counter with a little extra and a note for Tenten. He knew what Iroshi was thinking and he didn't want the stuff for free.
After saying thank you to the Father and daughter many times, he finally left with everything except his orange jumpsuit. Speaking of which, as soon as he removed it Tenten quickly took it and burned it faster than he could react and waved him a victory sign. Finally the Orange monstrosity was destroyed, although there were three identical sets at his home but alas, they would meet a similar fate.
Smiling at Tenten as he left he wondered how she would take to find the note. Smiling to himself he jumped away to a free training ground to get some training in.
**** Scene Break ****
Meanwhile Tenten was just getting to the note that Naruto had left her. It read:
'Dearest Ten-chan,
Thanks for the little show earlier, I put a little extra money in there for you. Anyway I was just going to ask, but not in front of your father, if you wanted to go on a date sometime. If so we may be able to do one of your 'activities' after a few. I'll come over the day after teams are decided to see your answer.
Ja ne,
Naruto'
Blushing slightly at the implied meanings she just took the extra cash and went to ponder on a blond haired blue eyed enigma.
**** Scene Break ****
Hiruzen sighed. He just couldn't find a place to put Naruto after he had come out of his mask. Sighing, he once again rearranged the teams before he saw the perfect formation. Smirking evilly he knew that this would work. Now all he had to do was get a certain Jonin to agree and he was all set. Oh yes this was going to be good, even if he would have to up his Anbu for possible assassination attempts.
AN: so I hope you liked… this is of course my new story… put that little Tenten scene in there per request… going to have a harem just a small one… Fem Gaara or Tenten will be main girl… but both will be in… only one or two other girls… ya'll can fight over whom… no Sakura… anyway it's late and I'm tired… Steve's actually asleep *shocked*… so I'll see ya next chapter…
Ja Ne