It's me, Chrys. By the way this is my FIRST ENGLISH FIC. So, I'm sorry if my english was bad... :/

But I hope you enjoy my story :)

Disclaimer: Hot Wheels Battle Force 5 and the characters (except Theo and Nyna) does not belong to me.


The Battle Force 5 was gather around the infirmary. Tezz broke his upper left arm during the last battle. "Dude, it must be hurt!" said Spinner loudly.

Tezz—whose sitting on the bed—said cutly, "Shut up you just didn't know about the pain!"

"Keep calm, Tezz. I'm sure you're gonna get well soon." said Sherman.

Zoom standing beside him, rolled his eyes, "No hope, Sherman. I often seeing fracture victims in my martial arts academy. It takes about several months to get better."

"Great. I can't go out for the missions!" Tezz grumble.

"No worry, Tezz, you can stay on Sage's side. We need you for communicate with her." Vert said wisely.

"Battle Force, I need you. There's something I would to talk. Come here, fast, please." Sage exclaimed through the intercom.

"Bah! Mission—again?" Stanford mumbling.

"Okay everyone, let's go to Sage! Tezz, you stay here with Sherman and Spinner 'kay?" Vert said running to get dressed as well with others.

*In the battle zone*

'Ice. Why must be ice?' Zoom muttered in his mind.

They went to the Icy Battle Zone. And Zoom know it doesn't match for him. He already shivers on his vehicle.

"Zoomy, are you 'kay? Ya look like an ice cube." A.J feels worried.

"A living ice cube, maybe?" said Stanford.

"N-no need to w-worry, I'm f-fine…" Zoom still shivers.

"Oh, stop it, Stan. Zoom, I hope you can stand it, we must found that sentient's cursed box. Sage was so worried about that thing. I don't even know what kind of box it is." Vert said seriously.

"Hold on guys, look who's coming here!" Agura point at the distance.

A large amount of Sark driving their vehicles towards the Battle Force. Stanford said loudly, "What?! Why the hell those weirdo robots always follow us?!"

"Geez... C-c'mon just track that box, and go out from t-this zone!" Zoom muttered.

"Battle Force, I've found the box. It's located on top of the cliff about 500 meters behind you." Sage's voice coming out through the communicator.

"Let's get the box, dude!" A.J moving his vehicle, and followed by the others—and Sark.

"Look! The box?" Stanford point at something that floating up on the top of a cliff.

"It must be the box! Zoom, Agura, go get the box! We take care of them." Vert gives them command.

Both of Agura and Zoom went for that box. Agura climbed over, and Zoom already on his Chopper, flying with its propeler.

Zoom easily grabbed the box, but one of the Sark shot a laser around Zoom's chest. "Agh!" Zoom yeld in pain and fall down the cliff, but before it happens, he already toss the box to Agura whose catch it nicely.

"ZOOM!" Vert said loudly, watch in horror that Zoom's falling down the cliff into a deep gorge. He surely want to follow Zoom but how? The Saber can't climb the cliff. "Agura! How's Zoom? Where did he fall?"

"About the box, I got it, but Zoom... I don't know. I can't see him down there. The cliff is too high!" Agura feels so worried.

Suddenly, Sage's voice is coming again, "Guys, go back to the earth now!" as she said that, a portal opened, "You guys are surrended by Sark! There are too many of them!" she continued.

Vert shock for hearing Sage's command, "WHAT DID YOU SAY, SAGE?! How about Zoom? We can't leave him, we must foud him, he fall down to the gorge!"

"I SAID GO BACK! You already get the box and you must go back NOW! The Sark may defeat you and I don't want they have the box! Go back now, I said! NOW!" Sage giving command loudly.

"Come on Vert, Sage is right, there's no hope for us to fight a large amount of Sark! We must bring the box for sure. Let's go back, Zoom's gonna be just fine!" said Agura.

With no hope, Vert and The Battle Force go through the portal—to the earth, leaving their scout.

ZOOM's Point of View

That laser shot burned my battle suit, and I feel I become a grilled BBQ meat. And I remember the sensation of falling down from a cliff, and landed on a snowy land. I know it's good because the snow protect me for breaking my backbone to the ground, but the snow does freeze me up!

I take a deep—cold—breathe, hold my pain. I just lay on the ground because I can not move, and waiting for the others save me.

I see the Chopper from the corner of my eye, it landed beside me, half broke.

One minute, two minutes, until almost a half hour, they haven't show up.

"W-where are you guys? V-vert, where are you? I'm freezing d-down here..." My voice seems so froze up, before my eyes were too heavy and I fall unconsious.

To be continued...


A/N: how is it? There's so many mistakes, right? So sorry... :( and I hope you guys understand my fict.. :/

Review please? =D