Alternate endings:

So, I had this idea while I was in the car, and I kind of liked it. All my stories are ended and i'm kind of bored so I figured, why not make some

alternate endings to one of my favorite stories? Spoiler alert, not all of them will have a happy ending. I'll try to upload one a day, but not sure. Ok,

hope you like this first one. OH and they all won't be long, they might be short. This first one starts in the second chapter, where she wakes up

and...you know. OK Now i'll start. Enjoy!

Chapter 1

Alternate ending #1

I wake up way before I would like to. My eyes shoot open, my limbs working by themselves. I look around, seeing my friends acting similarly. I get ready, my mind still

waking up since it feels very early and I went to bed late last night. I try to get myself to go back to bed, starting to panic a little. I finally give up, letting myself see

where my body took me. I get into a line of people, shuffling slowly, one foot in front of the other. Finally, I wake up fully, just as I pick up a very heavy gun. I try and

fail to look around frantically, wondering if anyone else was aware of what we were doing. I move outside, heading into the train, helping people in as well. After a while

of standing, not sure how long since I feel nothing, we finally get off. My stomach drops as I realize we're in Abnegation. I realize that my gun is slowly being raised, and

that i'm pointing it at a leaders head. Before I have time to react, I shoot him in the head, his lifeless body crumbling to the floor. Then, i'm off to someone else. If I

could cry I would, but all I can do is kill. I kill what seems like hundreds, but is probably only five, which is still to many.

"Tris. Are you ok?" I turn sharply, my gun raised. I see Four, my instructor. Why is he not like all of us? Did this have to do with what we were injected with yesterday?

"Oh my god Tris, you've been shot!" I can't feel anything, so I guess I was shot some time without noticing. By the time all of this is over I'll be dead, and I'm ok with

that. I've killed to many people, I'd never be able to live with the guilt. Wait, why haven't I shot Four yet?

"Four, get away man. She's going to shoot you." I turn around at the sound of a voice, and see Uriah. He has a gun pointed at me, and he looks ready to shoot.

"Uriah, wait!" Four calls. Bang! The last thing I hear is my name being called out before everything turns black.

A/N

That made me really sad to write, especially the ending. I might cry, what is wrong with me? Well, I hope you liked that chapter. I'll try to have a new

one up tomorrow. I have some ideas for tomorrow's one, but other ideas are accepted! Anyway, have a good day and goodbye.

-Grace