Denied Love
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A/N- This is my first fanfic thingy, and it's prolly not too good, im trying not to focus on the song so much, but moreso the story. ^_^ BTW, the song is 'One in a Million' by Aaliyah (Rest in Peace 'Liyah, bless her heart 3) Told in Aisha's POV, and 3rd person. i might make anover' chapter if good reviews ^_^ R&R!!
'italics' - thoughts
… - lyrics
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Chapter One- Feelin' It
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(3rd Person)
A pair of deep blue innocent eyes stared up at the night sky, watching the sparkling stars, a soft smile pulled across her face. Her long white hair trailed down her back, ending with that golden ring, she had her knee's pulled to her chest, resting her chin on her knee-caps. Aisha was perched on the bridge, just outside the hatch leading into the Outlaw Star. She sighed, she had come outside to escape the presence of a certain redheaded outlaw, whom she had currently discovered hidden feelings for. She had found, that, she truly did have feelings for… Gene Starwind, and, with the way he had been acting towards her recently, made her think he felt the same way. She felt uncomfortably around him, and she could feel herself blush every time he would brush against her when passing by, or look at her with those beautiful eyes of his, or speak to her in a gentle voice, which wasn't very often. She cursed herself under her breath. 'Dammit… why now? Why'd I have to fall in love with him now?' She smiled to herself then.. 'Well, Aisha mah' Dear, because he's handsome, he's irresistibly handsome, and, and.. He's fun, and caring… and, he isn't going out with anyone!' Her ears drooped slightly. 'That's reason enough to love someone, isn't it?' She thought back to the day they had met, and she had tried to kill her now beloved Gene, she smirked slightly… 'If only I had known…' She shuffled her feet a bit, she could hear the others, Jim said something about being so immature, she figured he was addressing Gene. A slight giggle came from Aisha… 'Jim's so sweet, he's cute too, it's a good thing he isn't older, then I'd be in love with two guys, and would have to choose between the two…' Next she heard was some mumbling, and then Gene's voice rising above the rest, making a joke she didn't quite catch, but laughed with it anyways, and then she could hear Melfina laughing as well, and she paused, thinking for a moment. 'Melfina's a nice girl, she really is, and she's already confessed her love for Gene to me and Suzu (Suzuka)…Gene always seems to act more… caring around her…more, more…' She paused as she found the word she was looking for, and dreaded it wasn't his true feelings towards Mel. 'More…loving towards her…' A look of concern and worry had now crossed Aisha's face, her ears dropping as she almost whimpered at the thought of Gene being with Melfina, and suddenly, Aisha felt as though she had a new enemy… 'Maybe if I can talk to Gene, tell him the way I feel before she does, he'll choose me first… he'll choose me before Melfina even gets a chance to tell him…' Then, an idea struck her, and she knew exactly how to express her feeling to Gene, she jumped down from her perch, and entered the XGP3, with a grin crossing her features.
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Heheh, Corny, right? R&R, Chap. 2 coming ASAP! ^_~ I dun care if you like it or not, I'm gonna' finish this story!!!!
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A/N- This is my first fanfic thingy, and it's prolly not too good, im trying not to focus on the song so much, but moreso the story. ^_^ BTW, the song is 'One in a Million' by Aaliyah (Rest in Peace 'Liyah, bless her heart 3) Told in Aisha's POV, and 3rd person. i might make anover' chapter if good reviews ^_^ R&R!!
'italics' - thoughts
… - lyrics
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Chapter One- Feelin' It
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(3rd Person)
A pair of deep blue innocent eyes stared up at the night sky, watching the sparkling stars, a soft smile pulled across her face. Her long white hair trailed down her back, ending with that golden ring, she had her knee's pulled to her chest, resting her chin on her knee-caps. Aisha was perched on the bridge, just outside the hatch leading into the Outlaw Star. She sighed, she had come outside to escape the presence of a certain redheaded outlaw, whom she had currently discovered hidden feelings for. She had found, that, she truly did have feelings for… Gene Starwind, and, with the way he had been acting towards her recently, made her think he felt the same way. She felt uncomfortably around him, and she could feel herself blush every time he would brush against her when passing by, or look at her with those beautiful eyes of his, or speak to her in a gentle voice, which wasn't very often. She cursed herself under her breath. 'Dammit… why now? Why'd I have to fall in love with him now?' She smiled to herself then.. 'Well, Aisha mah' Dear, because he's handsome, he's irresistibly handsome, and, and.. He's fun, and caring… and, he isn't going out with anyone!' Her ears drooped slightly. 'That's reason enough to love someone, isn't it?' She thought back to the day they had met, and she had tried to kill her now beloved Gene, she smirked slightly… 'If only I had known…' She shuffled her feet a bit, she could hear the others, Jim said something about being so immature, she figured he was addressing Gene. A slight giggle came from Aisha… 'Jim's so sweet, he's cute too, it's a good thing he isn't older, then I'd be in love with two guys, and would have to choose between the two…' Next she heard was some mumbling, and then Gene's voice rising above the rest, making a joke she didn't quite catch, but laughed with it anyways, and then she could hear Melfina laughing as well, and she paused, thinking for a moment. 'Melfina's a nice girl, she really is, and she's already confessed her love for Gene to me and Suzu (Suzuka)…Gene always seems to act more… caring around her…more, more…' She paused as she found the word she was looking for, and dreaded it wasn't his true feelings towards Mel. 'More…loving towards her…' A look of concern and worry had now crossed Aisha's face, her ears dropping as she almost whimpered at the thought of Gene being with Melfina, and suddenly, Aisha felt as though she had a new enemy… 'Maybe if I can talk to Gene, tell him the way I feel before she does, he'll choose me first… he'll choose me before Melfina even gets a chance to tell him…' Then, an idea struck her, and she knew exactly how to express her feeling to Gene, she jumped down from her perch, and entered the XGP3, with a grin crossing her features.
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Heheh, Corny, right? R&R, Chap. 2 coming ASAP! ^_~ I dun care if you like it or not, I'm gonna' finish this story!!!!