It's Complicated

So here's the first chapter of my first story, CONSTRUCTIVE criticism is welcome,

hope you enjoy!

Chapter 1: Unfriendly Visitors

Jewel opened her eyes to find Blu's unconscious face right in hers. She sighed

as she pushed him off her gently.

"Blu... Blu!" She rasped, still half asleep.

"Wha.. what?" Blu replied in the same sleepy voice as he forced open his eyes.

"What is it Jewel?"

"Will you go and get breakfast today? I don't feel to good" Jewel said, rubbing her stomach.

"Why, what's up?" Blu began to look concerned.

"Oh it's not a big deal, i just feel a little sick, I'll be fine after I've had

something to eat" Jewel explained as she rubbed her head.

"Okay then, just gimme a minute while I wake up"

"Alright" Said Jewel as she laid her head back down and shut her eyes. Blu

looked at her for a minute before standing up and stretching out his wings and

yawning.

"Um, hey Jewel?" Blu asked nervously.

"Do you want to feel how hard I can punch?" Came Jewels muffled reply.

"Okay then, I'll leave you" Blu laughed before spreading his wings and launching

himself into the sky.

Not too long after Blu left did Jewel awake from her slumber. she stood up and slowly shuffled to the entrance of her tree hollow and plonked herself down on a branch close to it.

Everything seemed so peaceful. It was amazing how quickly the atmosphere could

Change with the call of other birds getting on with their lives and the gentle rustle of leaves in the trees. She sighed, her life was no longer simple and free.

She did not love Blu.

And Blu knew this, they weren't together, it took Jewel so long to explain that what happened after he jumped out of the plane… that was in the heat of the moment, they were just den mates, nothing more, no matter how hard Blu wished, she had let him down gently, but he was just too overprotective. It annoyed her. She knew he was just trying to be kind and caring and she knew that he was desperately trying to earn her love, but she just wanted independence. Maybe one day she would be able to say 'I love you Blu', and mean it, but she never believed that she would, Blu was just her friend. She hoped it would stay that way.

At that moment she looked up in shock at three bulky, sinister looking Hyacinth Macaws diving towards her. She attempted to jump out of the way but failed, and was grasped by the largest Macaw and dragged into her own den. As the two other smaller Hyacinth Macaws entered the den, Jewel was flung against the wall by the one grasping her. But he then walked up to her and grasped her talons with his own and pressed his wings against hers, pinning her to the ground.

"Hey there sexy", he whispered in a chilling tone.

"Get off me you little bastard!" Jewel spat.

"Whoa there, she's feisty isn't she?" the macaw laughed.

"What do you want?" Jewel asked, in a nervous yet strong voice.

"Well what else would I want with a babe like you? In short, I'm gonna fuck you", Said the Macaw with a sinister smile on his face.

"Ugh you freak! Get away from me!" Jewels feeble attempts just excited the macaw. He pressed his body against Jewels and prepared to penetrate.

"Help me! Someone help me! Please…" Jewel cried, but it was no use, the macaw started to thrust his hips, and he began to lick Jewels neck as he did, moaning with pleasure.

"No!.. help!" Jewels cries faded as she began to weep.

The Macaw went faster, and faster, and faster, but just then, the two macaws guarding the entrance were flung into the wall of the other side of the den as another bird entered with force.

"What the fuck?" The Macaw on top of Jewel looked around but didn't stop thrusting as he was about to climax.

"H… Help, M.. Mee!" Jewel stuttered, but the mysterious bird was already one step ahead of her. He quickly ran over to Jewel and smashed the bird off of her with his powerful wings before the bird was able to climax.

Jewel was to breathless to thank him. She couldn't tell the colour of his feathers or what he looked like because he was wearing a black protective suit with a tinted mask, Jewel had no idea where he would get such a thing, but one thing was for sure, he clearly didn't want anyone to know his identity.

The mysterious bird held out his talon to Jewel but noticed one of the two smaller Macaws stirring, so he placed his talon on the ground, curled his covered wingtip, spun round and punched him in the face.

He then turned round and again offered Jewel his gloved talon. She grasped it with her own and shakily stood up.

"Wh… Who are you?" She managed.

There was no reply.

The masked figure just turned around and jumped out of the den.

Jewel walked over to the two smaller birds and pushed them out of the den one by one, they fell to the ground with a thud. she then walked over to the largest Macaw, he was stirring and then opened his eyes at the sight of Jewels raised talon, it was brought down onto his face and deeply pulled across his tender flesh.

"Gah! You bitch!" He exclaimed as the red stream of liquid trickled down his beak.

Jewel did the same to him as what she did to the other two smaller Macaws, pushed him out of the den, but when he landed, his neck made a popping noise, signalling his death. Jewel did not care however, she was just traumatized. She walked back into her den, fury plastered onto her face, sat down and wrapped her wings around her knees.

It wasn't long after when Blu returned with some berries wrapped in a leaf. He saw Jewels state and suddenly dropped the bundle.

"Jewel! Jewel… what's wrong… Jewel?"

"Fuck off!" Blu was cut off by Jewels incredibly harsh tone. He stepped back with surprise and worry on his face.

"I was raped okay! Some bastard tried to fuck me!" Blu's worry turned to shock.

"What! Are you okay?" He exclaimed.

"Do I look okay? Do I look okay to you Blu?" Jewel spat.

"I'm Sorry, Jewel, I… I just want to help you…" Blu started.

"Well you can fuck off! You're too late! Someone already has! The one time I needed you and where the hell were you Blu?" Blu started to tear up.

"I'm… I'm sorry… who helped you?" Blu stuttered.

"I don't know some random guy in a mask, does it matter? Whoever the hell he is he's certainly a lot more useful than you ever were!" Blu looked down and silently cried. How could he be so stupid? The one chance he could prove his love to Jewel, and some other bird already took it away from him. He was never going to win Jewel over now!

"Males!" Jewel scoffed.

"all you all want to do is shag me! Even you!" Jewels words just now finally made Blu crack. He spread his wings and flew out of the den, bursting into tears as he did.

Jewel looked after him, she knew she had been way to harsh on him, it wasn't his fault what happened. She decided to go after him. She sighed.

"Blu! Wait!"

Well, that's it for the first chapter! Sorry if I went into to much detail in the rape part, I just wanted it to be realistic and human-like (if that doesn't sound weird)

I'll try to update ASAP but I don't know how long it will take, preferably within three days.

Make sure you review, more reviews=faster update!

Thanks!