this is my first fanfiction construtive critisisum welcome.
The night of the prom,
Beck, Andre, Tori,Robbie and Jade were all sitting 'round ther usual table in the Asphalt cafe, when cat came bouncing over giggling. "guess what last night my brother ate the stuffing out of a pillow and then drank a gallon of milk hehe" cat said giggling. Robbie said"Is every one excited for the prom tonight? comleatly ignoring cats previous coment "ye i think we all ohh and tori do you have a date for tonight" Andre asked inqiuizivitly "as a matter of fact i do his name is dan and he is one of the friends i stayed in touch with from oakwood high he is really great"tori bubbly replied. jade said i dont thinks hes that great if you know him do you ? tori just sent her daggers and beck let out a little ha as if to say she told you jade. bring bring, which ment end of lunch,the gang departed to there lockers. Cat ran up behind Tori and asked her if it was still ok for her to come to hers after school to get ready for the prom. " yes thats fine" tori said squeeling alittle in excitment " im really excited now were going to look beautiful" tori added. "ye but you'll need a lot of makeup" Beck joked tori playfully punched him in the arm ..
(2 and a half hours later)
Andre tori and cat all walked out of school and the conversation qiuckly turned to dates. Cat and Tori both asked Andre who his date was he replied Erica the girl i'v been crushing on you know the one with baby blue eyes warm golden hair and all that",
"wow i didnt know you liked her that much cat said and they split cat and tori going on way and andre goin another. when they both got to tori's house all they could hear was trina singing in the shower and her mom shouting at ther for taking a 30 min shower. " wow trina's loud and i thought my brotherv was loud" cat respondede to the sound that could only be described as someone swinging a cat against the wall. The girls both finnished ther snacks and whent to get ready.
i know this chaper was really rubish but the story will pick up i promiss