× English is not my native language. I'm Brazilian, so I usually work with Portuguese. As most of my favorite stories in the category (One Piece) are here and written in English, I decided to risk and try to post my story here. I'm using the translator, so sorry for the mistakes. I correct what I can, within the little of the language I know.
Chapter One
Sabo, why did Ace break the promise?
Luffy had his big, wet eyes. The boy cried painfully. Her small body trembled. The images of Ace in his arms. There was blood, a lot of blood. Then everything went dark.
"Luffy" Chopper shook him, trying to wake him up. The doctor was worried about his captain. It was days, Luffy had these nightmares. Their cries broke the silence of the sea and woke up the whole crew.
"Ace?" He opened his eyes, looking for the warmth of his older brother. He wanted to hear his voice again. Feeling safe in Ace's arms.
"It was just a nightmare, Luffy," the moose put his little paw on his captain's forehead, feeling it warm. "Sanji, bring me a water compress."
"Go to sleep. We'll help Chopper today, "Zoro told the others. They retreated slowly, still worried about the captain's condition.
"He'll be fine ... Will not you?"
CROSSFIRE
"Do not worry, Chopper. I know what it's all about. Just tell me where he is. "Sabo strode across the deck toward the room where Luffy was being treated.
"Chopper," Usopp asked. "What does Luffy have?"
"Our Captain's disease is not physical," the doctor said. "It's worrying. Precisely because it is something that can not be cured with any kind of medicine. "
"Is it that bad?"
"Luffy is wounded in the heart, Usopp."
CROSSFIRE
"Luffy." Sabo scooped up his younger brother's body, feeling it cool in his arms. Luffy's appearance was horrible. The state his body was in was decadent. Deep dark circles and purplish spots covered his face. Her ribs were sampled and her legs had red marks of nails.
"Onii-chan?" The boy seemed to awaken from his shock at the sound of his brother's voice. Using the rest of her strength to open her eyes and see Sabo by her side. "V-Are you really here?"
"I came back for you, Luffy. I promised I'd come back, did not I? "The blond felt his hands touch his cheeks, checking if he was right there.
"S-Sabo, why did Ace break the promise?" Sabo pulled him into a tight hug, not allowing him to continue. In silence, the brothers wept together for the loss of Ace.