A/N: My old usernames on fanfiction were CubicleMiyuki, and KokoroKiseki55. If you know me from then, you probably remember Broken and Disabled, as well as Assassinated Love... let me explain. Assassinated love was my earliest works, I was 12. And I really loved writing, and went with my heart...it wasn't proper. I got harshly criticized for it and lashed out like I shouldn't have. I apologize from my heart for it.
I deeply regretted it at that time, and made a new story to redeem myself. 'Broken and Disabled' it got many views, and I got many wonderful comments saying how nice the writing was. And how I even made some people cry. It was a few months shortly after Assassinated Love incident. I grew to dislike 'Broken and Disabled' and so I deleted it without thinking. I disappointed a lot of people, and I deeply apologize but at that time I was going through the roughest points of my life and I still am.
Now I restart both stories, they both will be produced side by side updating somewhat around the same time. (More info for 'Broken and Disabled' *renamed to Broken in Your Heart* is on that prologue)
I was criticized for a lot of things in Assassinated Love, and felt honestly humiliated and embarrassed. With that I insulted people back and quickly deleted it, I was acting irrational. Although eventually I shook it off, and now I regret to what I did. I apologize greatly. When you all criticized me I was 12 years old. I am now 14, and have been writing for officially 9 years. I took your criticisms to heart and acted irrationally, I apologize, but I will not tolerate if my story is called 'horrible' without treason.
When I was 12 I had no thought to what I was going to do with the story, now I do. The concept is the same, but the plot will be increasingly different. With that, I begin the prologue of "Assassinated Love".
Prologue
A knife is a blade. A blade can be described as many things, a blade of your own words even. People use knives for daily life things….or questionable things.
Knives, allied with a gun, hand in hand they are menacing. Hand in hand, they are a team. Hand in hand, they are a pair...to kill of course.
"Good work." smiled a girl with ocean teal hair, as she applauded her partner for his excellent work.
A dead victim's head beautifully oozed with red blood, he was slumped. Seemingly stabbed, as the blade shined brightly.
The blonde, ponytail boy smiled back at her, "Same to you."
That's right...a pair. A pair to kill…
But what if that pair is false? What if...someone could use those two harmful weapons, to help others?
"Hold it right there." a girl with short blonde hair aimed her gun at the culprit.
She shot, the culprit collapsed. Though alive, he was damaged in the leg. The girl walked over to the child, "You're safe now." she smiled.
But what if a third weapon comes in? That's our words. Whether in love...
"I love you." she looked up at her beloved, searching for love in his eyes.
The boy scoffed, "Love? Love is just an illusion. You and I know this."
In hate…
"You goddamn know I hate you! You fucking bitch!" He shrieked, and threw a vase at her. The girl narrowly dodged the vase, as it crashed into the wall breaking.
"..Fine." the girl shuffled out of the door in a hurry, and slammed it behind her. The boy fell to his knees.
Aren't we too young to use these words?
"You're too young to be a detective."
"As of you're too young to be an assassin."
Yet, that third blade, will be the thing that slices everything. And everyone. There are two roles. The assassin, and the target. But those two roles, play another act. A culprit and a detective. But in an environment where their roles are both students.
What will blossom between them? And… what weapon will be used? A gun? A knife? Or their words?
"I vow to solve every single case to find the culprits, as it is my duty as a detective to protect others."
"I make it my choice to kill, and kill as I must. To only protect myself. As selfish as it is, I will strike for only me."
~~~Assassinated Love~~~
A/N: This prologue looks more like a movie trailer than a prologue XD. But it's how I imagined it to be, and if you want to do some criticism go ahead. HOWEVER. Don't curse at me, don't call my story horrible without an explanation, and lastly, I will not listen to anonymous criticism comments (and authors who post nothing) because I need to make sure your advice/criticism is proven with your writing.
I don't want to take advice from people who don't have backup evidence and such, surely some of you will understand. HOWEVER I will take opinions from anonymous people and such because opinions are free around here, just don't curse in them or call the story horrible without a reason. (Duh)
I will update every two days. Chapter One will be up on 8/26/17!
Also remember, this is not like the original. Wayyy different, and the story will be much, much longer!
And lastly, I apologize once again for acting irrationally 2 years ago. I am remaking this story, to prove it's worth.
Thanks for reading! Stay tuned for more!