I do not own Twilight or this song. Stephanie Meyer owns Twilight, and the Jackson 5 and Motown own this song, which I suggest you listen to as you read...like seriously you need to listen to this by the JACKSON 5 or it won't flow right. Okay I guess I will let you read!
I got review saying I should fix this. So I tried to.
Hello, friend! My name is Renesmee Carlie Cullen, I am 16 years old. I have long, curly, bronze hair that goes down to my butt. And I also have perfect, pale skin like the rest of my family. I have Big brown eyes, and I am 5'3...and not to boast but I do have a killer body.
And at the curent moment I was sitting on the couch in my house crying my eyes out.
My daddy, Edward Cullen is a vampire. And he has been on a hunting trip for about three weeks. I missed him...but I knew that it was most likely for the best because my blood was so sweet smelling.
''It's okay, Nessie.'' my best friend Jacob Black said.
Jacob was about 6'1, and he was like...seriously buffed. He had buzz-cut black hair,russet skin, and big brown eyes.
''N-no it's not! I w-w-want my daddy,'' I wailed intothe couch pillow.
I want my daddy!
Suddenly, the doorbell rang. I wiped my eyes and went to answer it...and I could not believe who was standing there.
''Daddy!,'' I sceamed as I jumped into his arms and he held me close.
''Oh, angel, I've missed you,'' he said as he kissed my forehead.
''Why are you home so early,'' I asked,''not that I am complaining.''
''Your best friend needs to be thanked,'' he smiled.
I turned and glared at Jacob, who was smiling as he walked out the back door. Eh...I'll be mad at him tomorrow. Right now I am just glad my daddy is home.
''Daddy...can you dance with me? I've missed it,'' I said as I gave him puppy dog eyes.
He smiled and set me on my feet before going to the record player and popping in grandpa Carlise's old record.
He walked over to me,''Darling Renesmee...can I have this dance,'' he asked as he bowed like a gentle man.
I giggled and curtsied,''Why of course you may, Sir Edward.''
He put his arms around my waist and I put mine around his neck. Fortunately I dance better than my mom.
The music started and I smiled as my daddy started singing the song.
''You're my love
you're my angel
you're the girl of my dreams
and, I'd like to thank you
for waiting patiently
daddy's home
you're daddy's home to stay,'' he finished.
He twirled me around, narrowly missing Grandma Esme's prized vase that was on the side table.
''How I waited for this moment
to be by your side,'' he sang.
''To be by your side,'' I smiled as I sang with him.
''Your best friend wrote and told me
you had tear drops in your eyes,
daddy's home
your daddy's home to stay,'' he sang again.
He dipped me sightly and bought me back up.
''It wasn't on a Sunday
Monday and Tuesday went by
it wasn't on a Tuesday afternoon
all I could do was cry
but I made a promise
That you'd treasure
I'd bring it back
home to you,'' he sang.
Daddy turned me around again, and I smiled.
''How I waited for this moment
to be by your side (to be by your side).
your best friend wrote and told me
you had tear drops in your eyes.
daddy's home
your daddy's home to stay
daddy's home to stay
I'm not a thousand miles away
daddy's home to stay
and I'm gonna be here, come with me (come with me)
daddy's home to stay
I'm not a thousand miles away
daddy's home to stay
and I'm gonna be here,'' he finished the song.
''I love you, Renesmee,'' he smiled as he kissed my forhead.
''I love you,too, daddy,'' I smiled before kissing his cheek.
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