I would first like to say that I do not own any of the character in this fan fiction. I don't have anything to do with the movie Gladiator no matter how hard I try and I will say this every single time but I am not making any money from this the only thing I'm getting is the pleasure of reading all of your reviews.
Lucilla watched Maximus sleep his eyelashes that blinked even so slightly from time to time his chest morning up and down with each new breath of air, how she loves her husband. Lucilla through that it was such a shame to leave him sleeping so peacefully when she had to go out so early in the morning. Lucilla got up from there bed and went to change, a lavender dress would be perfect she through. As she changed she through about leaving Maximus a note but she decided not to besides if he knew were she was going he would go after her.
The warm sun was rising over Rome as Lucilla left but she didn't bother to look at its beauty there will be time for that later.
Maximus awoke when the sun was already risen. He rolled over to see that Lucilla was gone. He dressed quickly.
Lucilla dismounted off her horse and looked around to make sure no one had seen her he placed a covering over her head so that you could still see her face but it was dark and shaded so you couldn't see who it was very well. The gatekeeper let her in.
Lucilla
I wish to see Commodus Meridus right away.
Gate Master
This way my lady
Lucilla followed the gatekeeper down a long hall the only lighting was the lanterns hanging on the wall. There were men with their arms and legs hanging out of the bars, the men were crying to Lucilla to help them and let out. Lucilla did her best to ignore their cries. Lucilla approached a wooden door with only a slot to slide food through and a keyhole. The Gate Master opened the door and led Lucilla in.
There sitting on a chair looking down at the floor was Commodus. Commodus didn't even look up when he heard the door close.
Lucilla
Commodus…Commodus
Commodus looked up his eyes widen
Commodus
Lucilla…. I would of through you would be with that fool of a husband of yours.
Lucilla
Commodus do not be so fickle
Commodus
Me fickle? Are you madwoman? I spend everyday of my life locked away in a prison and I'm supposed to be pleased with that. Something has surely gone to your head; perhaps that man you crawl into bed with at night did it to you… Sister
Lucilla
Please Commodus I didn't come to fight
Commodus looked down then got up
Commodus
Why did you come? To see if I was alive or to get me out of this place
Lucilla walks over to Commodus and touches his face he turns his head away
Lucilla
It is not my fault your hear you put yourself in this position
Commodus
I put myself hea. Do you see I was forced hear by man and by sword. My own right did not place me hear.
Lucilla
You KILLED a man! You killed our father… The Empire you would be dead if it was not for Maximus
Commodus
Maximus is a fool why cant you see that. He put me hear and he will put you right beside me if your not careful.
Lucilla
Commodus I come hear only to help you not argue if you wont see that that then I must go
Commodus
THEN GO!
Commodus turned around Lucilla walks out.
Please r&r I will update when I get at least 2 reviews. Also I would love it if anyone has any ideas that might help this of any future chapter.
Lucilla watched Maximus sleep his eyelashes that blinked even so slightly from time to time his chest morning up and down with each new breath of air, how she loves her husband. Lucilla through that it was such a shame to leave him sleeping so peacefully when she had to go out so early in the morning. Lucilla got up from there bed and went to change, a lavender dress would be perfect she through. As she changed she through about leaving Maximus a note but she decided not to besides if he knew were she was going he would go after her.
The warm sun was rising over Rome as Lucilla left but she didn't bother to look at its beauty there will be time for that later.
Maximus awoke when the sun was already risen. He rolled over to see that Lucilla was gone. He dressed quickly.
Lucilla dismounted off her horse and looked around to make sure no one had seen her he placed a covering over her head so that you could still see her face but it was dark and shaded so you couldn't see who it was very well. The gatekeeper let her in.
Lucilla
I wish to see Commodus Meridus right away.
Gate Master
This way my lady
Lucilla followed the gatekeeper down a long hall the only lighting was the lanterns hanging on the wall. There were men with their arms and legs hanging out of the bars, the men were crying to Lucilla to help them and let out. Lucilla did her best to ignore their cries. Lucilla approached a wooden door with only a slot to slide food through and a keyhole. The Gate Master opened the door and led Lucilla in.
There sitting on a chair looking down at the floor was Commodus. Commodus didn't even look up when he heard the door close.
Lucilla
Commodus…Commodus
Commodus looked up his eyes widen
Commodus
Lucilla…. I would of through you would be with that fool of a husband of yours.
Lucilla
Commodus do not be so fickle
Commodus
Me fickle? Are you madwoman? I spend everyday of my life locked away in a prison and I'm supposed to be pleased with that. Something has surely gone to your head; perhaps that man you crawl into bed with at night did it to you… Sister
Lucilla
Please Commodus I didn't come to fight
Commodus looked down then got up
Commodus
Why did you come? To see if I was alive or to get me out of this place
Lucilla walks over to Commodus and touches his face he turns his head away
Lucilla
It is not my fault your hear you put yourself in this position
Commodus
I put myself hea. Do you see I was forced hear by man and by sword. My own right did not place me hear.
Lucilla
You KILLED a man! You killed our father… The Empire you would be dead if it was not for Maximus
Commodus
Maximus is a fool why cant you see that. He put me hear and he will put you right beside me if your not careful.
Lucilla
Commodus I come hear only to help you not argue if you wont see that that then I must go
Commodus
THEN GO!
Commodus turned around Lucilla walks out.
Please r&r I will update when I get at least 2 reviews. Also I would love it if anyone has any ideas that might help this of any future chapter.