This is my first story! Sorry, if it doesnt make any sense. This is just one of my newbie posts from a site. Creative Critism is appreciated!
Hanabi.Her sister.Her sibling.Someone that was ashamed of her like the rest of the family.She had been told to stay here and wait for her sister to get back from middle school.Hinatas eyes softened as she lightly pushed a pile of dirt she had made while she was waiting.Hinata closed her eyes and breathed in.The park was so tranquil.She wished she could there more often but her studies and training were in the way.So she didnt exactly have the time.
Hinata counted the leaves that fell.Autumn was here and winter was right around the corner.Strong winds and falling leaves were to come in the Autumn but snow and ice were to replace it in November.She scanned the park to see if her sister had finally arrived.Hinata was getting worried.Hanabi shouldve been here by now.She was usually punctual and did not like anyone to be tardy.
Many options occurred in her mind as to why her sister wasnt there.She couldve been lost.She couldve been mobbed.Robbed!She could be abducted!Or even worse...she could be dead.Hinata bit her lip and shook the thoughts away.She knew she wouldnt get anywhere if she was thinking of the worse.Hinata placed a single finger on her chin and thought.Where did Hanabi usually travel to get to school?The shortest way was around a corner to the left,make a right and shed be there.But Hanabi liked being late,saying that being fashionably late was better then being fashionably early.
Hinata sighed and sat at a bench.This was so...so frustrating.If she didnt frind Hanabi then father would disown her for sure!Shed also carry guilt around where ever she went.Hinata held her head.What was she going to do?
"Onee-chan...where are you...?"Hinata mumbled.