I am still bad at this writing so you don't have to be nice. Just would like some advice. This is my first story about just Lily and James and the Mauders. Enjoy.

"Lily! Breakfast!" Lily's Mom yelled from the downstairs. "Petunia! Breakfast! Come on, girls. Can't sleep all morning."
"Coming, Mom." Petunia yelled.
"Petunia, hun, wake your sister, please."
Petunia sighed,"Yes, Mother." Petunia walked to Lily's room. She knocked on the door, "Lily, mom said to get up."Petunia walked in to the room. She shook Lily hard. Lily didn't stir. "Come on weirdo,wakeup."
"Petunia, go away. School doesn't start for 4 weeks. I'll study later. I've got plenty of time," Lily said.
"Lily, school starts in 2 weeks and you still have the French- American, World War 1, WW2,Civil and Revolutionary War to study," Petunia said.
"HOLY CRAP!" She jumped out of bed and looked at Petunia. Her face expressed no surprise at the shock of Lily's jump. Petunia knew it would happen. Her dark brown eyes were full of hate for her only sister. Her long, light brown hair in a bun. She had a long nose and was waering to much makeup, as usual. She wore an ugly pink short-sleve shirt with a flowery horrid yellow skirt. She had always been jealous of the attention Lily got from their parents. "Tell Mom I'm not hungary. I got to go to the liabrary and get some books."
"Tell her yourself," Petunia said.
"Fine," Lily said getting out of bed. Petunia left. Lily got dressed and studied herself in the mirror. Lily had green eyes and flat, thin, shiny, red hair. She wore no makeup. She had put on a baby blue shirt and black flare pants. She grabbed her bag and ran down stairs and into the kitchen. "I not-Mom why's an owl in here." It dropped a letter and Lily caught it. "Mom, is Hogwarts a college of somesort?" Lily looked at her Mother. Her Mother wore a red shirt and a blue skirt. Her red hair was up in a bun. Her Mom had beautiful brown eyes. She had a pale, but not to pale a face.
"I don't know, Lily," her mom replied,"Open it. Henry, can you come here."
"Coming, Melay," Lily's Dad said, coming into the kitchen. Lily's Dad has brown hair and blue eyes. He had a long nose and was largly built. He was muscular. All the girls fell in love with him. She remembers her mom telling her how she used to hate her dad. 'He was always so immature, spoiled rotten, and he always had a girl watching his every move. ' "Hey Lily. Petunia. What do you have their Lily?"
"A letter. An owl gave it to me."
"Open and see what it says," her Mother said drying her hands. She had just washed her hands. Lily opened the letter as told.She read aloud:

Ms. Lillian Ella Evans
You have been enrolled to school at Hogwarts, Witch Craft and Wizardy, for the training of your magic. The Headmaster is Albus Dumbledore. Here you will learn transfiguration, potions, defense against the dark arts, muggle history, magic history,and much more. You will attend for 7 years. School starts in 2 weeks, on August 1st You will need the following.

A black cauldren
First Year Transfiguration
First Year Potions
First Year DefenseAgainst the Dark Arts
Ubeliveable Creatures
History of Amazing Magic
You may have a pet of any sort (no snakes)
No brooms for 1st years

If any Questions send a letter to me. Just give it to the owl. If you have no questions I will see you at Hogwarts. Please keepthis all quiet to muggles (nonmagic people).
Minerva
Mcgonagal

Their was a long silence. Finally Petunia said, "I knew it. I knew you were a freak. Iknew it all along."
"Oh, my Henry," Lily's mom said. She looked like she was going to cry. "Oh, Lily. We have a witch in the family. We better mail her back. Ask her where to get all this stuff and how to get their."
"Allright, Mom," Lily said still in shock. A million questions were popping through her head. She quickly wrote down the letter and read what she had down.

Dear Proffesor Mcgonagal
My parents and I wish to know where to go and how to get there. Please and thankyou. And what type of currency do you use.
Thankyou,
Lily Evans.

"Very good. Send it," her Dad said. Lily gave it to the owl. The owl flew off. It came back a few minutes later. Lily read.

I have asked Mrs. Potter to show you to Diagon Alley. Please be ready by 1PM tomorrow.
Mcgonagal

"I'm not going. I have a date," Petunia said.
"Very well, dear," Mrs. Evans said.
"We need to go enroll Petunia into school today." Mr.Evans said.