This is my first fict.
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto!
"thoughts"
Kyubbi speaking
"Talking to Kyubbi"
Quick Summary: Naruto is banished after failing to retrieve Sasuke at the Valley of the End
"I bet the demon brat didn't even try"
"He should be killed"
"Finally the elders banished him"
Naruto heard these comments as he heads to the gate to leave the village. At the gate Naruto meets up with the rookie 9 except Sakura (who is locked up in here room crying at the lost of Sasuke).
"It's not fair Naruto" Kiba shouted out.
"Ya, Sasuke was to powerful." Ino said.
"He would of killed you" Neji said.
"They blame me since I am a demon" Naruto said going through the gates.
"Wait where will you go?" Choji spoke out hand grabbing Naruto's wrist.
"Simple to a place where I'll be treated better then Kohana" Naruto pulled his wrist back making Choji release his hands.
Hinata broke into tears as Naruto walked out of the Village. Kiba put his hand on her shoulder to comfort her. Naruto looked back on last time to where he grew up and where his dream resides. "Goodbye Kohana" holding in his tears.
The Whirlpool Country
Naruto went to the Whirl Pool Country hoping he would fit in and no one would discover his secret. Walking down a street looking for a place to call home he accidentally bumps into a girl holding some boxes containing weapons she drops the boxes and falls over. "Oh, sorry I wasn't looking" The girl was saying as she got up. She was wearing a blue blouse with orange flowers and black jeans. Her hair was in a pony tail and her eyes were leaf green.
"Let me carry these for you"
"No I can carry them my self"
"I insist"
Naruto grabbed the boxes.
"Thanks uh…. What's your name?"
"I'm Naruto Uzumaki"
"I'm Shijimi I'm the daughter of Takumi we own the local weapon store please to meet you"
"Wow that's cool"
"Ya , but recently a gang of bad people started to threatening us to give them half of the income each month or else they call themselves the Spiral gang."
"Shouldn't you tell the guards?"
"They are the gang they went corrupt"
Her head faced down "Now we have no choice but to do it" she started to tear up.
"Don't worry I'll protect you" naruto said with a reassuring smile and a thumps up.
"Thanks, but I don't want you to get hurt." she said wiping away the tears "I'm sorry, but I never seen you around here"
"I'm from Kohana"
"Oh, why are you here?"she asked curiously.
"I..I..was..banished" he put his head down in shame.
"I'm sorry"
"It's ok you had nothing to do with it"
"Not to be rude, but why?"
"I can't tell you"
"Why?"
"Well..."
They reach the store only to see Takumi gone and the place in ruins.
"Where's my dad?" Shujimi asks looking for clues "who did this?
"What's this?" Naruto picks up a small note.
"Lemme see that" Shijimi quickly taking the note and reading it.
"Oh my, my dad he's been kidnapped by the gang."Shijimi continued reading"The only way to get him back is to give him the rest of the money, but my dad was supposed to pay them all unless..."
Flashback
"I don't have all the money work has been slow lately" Takumi said being backed up to a wall.
"I Know you have the money where is it!" said a masked man holding a kuni to Takumi's throat "If you don't have it I guess your daughter does"
Takumi cries "NO! not my daughter"
The masked man says "Tie him up and leave a note to meet us outside of town near our hide out"
End Flashback
"How am I am supposed to give him the money?" Shijimi asked with a worried face.
"I've got an idea how good are you in acting?" Naruto asked filling a small bag with metal. The metal made the clanking sound like gold. Naruto had a the"I-got-a-plan-face"
I made some changes. My next chapters will be much longer. Shijimi is not the same person as the fat girl that has the cat who runs away ALOT.