Well, this is my first Fanfic. Here goes nothing...
A loud, obnoxious ringing suddenly disrupted the relative peace of the abode.
"I got it! I got it!" yelled a high-pitched voice a room over. A yellow-and-black blur shot like a rocket through the doorway, a lamp, and a bookcase, before stopping at the source of the din.
"HI! Charmy here!" he blurted into the mouthpiece of the phone he had placed against his head.
"CHARMY!" bellowed a fairly deep voice, as its owner stomped into the now mostly demolished room. "Give me that!" Vector growled as he snatched the phone from the exuberant bee, only to realize that said corded phone was now very much cordless.
He sighed, "And yet you wonder why we don't get many cases."
Another typical argument ensued between the two, eventually leading to Vector making a futile attempt to catch the hyperactive bee.
***
Why am I here? I don't gain anything from this…
"SO WHY CAN'T I LEAVE!"
***
At the yell from upstairs Vector and Charmy froze. Espio was the only other person here, and he maintained calm through absolutely EVERYTHING.
The crocodile and bee slowly started unconsciously gravitating towards the staircase, "Espio? You okay?" Vector practically whispered, his voice shaking ever so slightly.
***
Oh no…
He had said that out loud, hadn't he…
***
Upon reaching the door to Espio's room, the duo heard a dull 'THUMP' from beyond the door. They looked at each other, wide-eyed, before slowly opening the door.
There was the purple chameleon, lying in the middle of his almost barren room, totally unconscious.
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Espio woke groggily, before sitting up and stretching his arms above his head and yawning. He then started. His eyes darting over his surroundings; white walls, white ceiling, white sheets. He was clearly in a hospital, but how did he get here, and why?
His eyes then landed on the green crocodile sitting in a chair opposite his bed. His bobbing head proved he was listening to something on his ever present headphones, but his eyes were closed tighter than normal, his brow portraying worry.
Vector's eyes opened a fraction, before flying open at seeing Espio. He rushed over to him, toppling his chair in his haste, and crashed next to the bed. Getting on his knees, he exclaimed, "Espio! You woke up! I was worried you would stay that way for years!"
Espio's brow creased downwards, "Years! Stay what way? What's going on!?"
Conveniently, the doctor, a falcon, made an appearance. "Goodness gracious! You're awake!" He exclaimed.
"WELL THEN CAN SOMEONE TELL ME WHAT'S GOING ON!" Espio shouted.
"Err… well, you see, you were in a coma for the past week. From our analysis, I didn't think you would ever wake up…" The doctor replied rather timidly.
"B-but... what…?" Espio mumbled, sounding rather confused.
"Last week, when Charmy I were downstairs, we heard you yell really loud. When we went to your room you were unconscious. We called the hospital and they checked you out, it turned out you were in a pretty serious coma." Vector explained.
"Okay, I think I get what happened… But where's Lydia?" said Espio
"Who?" replied Vector quizzically?
"You know, my fiancé."
End of Part 1
So what do you guys think of it so far? I'm not sure I should continue with it, what do you think?