A/N: First ever FanFic so I'm a tad nervous as to the reception of the story, any who, all criticisms, flames, or nice comments are welcome.
On with the FANFIC!
"CHIDORI!"
"RASENGAN"
If one were to look upon the Valley of the End at the moment, that person would see two figures rapidly approaching one another. One with long hair, Gray skin, hand-like appendages coming from between the figure's shoulder blades, and what looks like a large ball of electricity in the figure's hand. The other however looked to be covered in a red aura filled with hate and anger, while the figure inside the aura had wild, blond hair, fingers that slanted into claws at the end of them, and if a person got close enough, they would see red eyes with slit-like pupils, this person was holding an orange ball of pure energy, or so it would seem to an uneducated civilian. It was the Yondaime hokage's powerful technique known as the Rasengan.
As the two figures got closer to one another, the eyes of the figure covered in the red aura seemed to phase from the hate-filled red into a calming blue that seemed filled with sadness. And then, the two powerful techniques collided.
BOOM!
Once the smoke cleared the two figures were standing close to one another and the one with the hand-like appendages seemed to have his hand in the other's chest.
"Sasuke...why? I thought we were friends." softly said the blonde boy.
"Because I need to kill you to obtain the Mongekyo Sharingan and kill my brother." Replied the other.
"It's too late you're coming back to Konoha with me."
"Really Naruto ? How do you suppose you'll do that with a Chidori in your chest?"
"Like this!"
And with that the blond boy swiftly removed Sasuke's arm from himself and chopped the back of his neck, causing unconsciousness.
Later outside a place that could only be Konoha, a young girl with pink hair stood at the gate looking for her companions."I hope Sasuke-kun comes back." Thought the girl. And as she she thought that, two figures came into sight, one wearing a bright orange jumpsuit with blond hair carrying the other boy on his shoulder blocking the wound from view, but not the blood. When the girl saw the boys she began to run towards them, only then noticing the blood covering the boys.
"Sakura, I brought him back for you, just like I promised." Yelled Naruto.
"What? I asked you to bring him back alive you baka!" Screamed Sakura when she approached the boys.
"B-but Sakura he's fine he's just unconscious..."
"No I don't believe you, don't think I haven't noticed how jealous you are of Sasuke-kun."
"What? Jealous of that arrogant bastard? If I was jealous of him, why would I have brought him back?"
"Whatever, now give him to me and I'll take him to the hospital."
"Fine."
So Naruto gave Sasuke to Sakura and as she walked off he collapsed to the ground due to blood-loss, but Sakura did not turn around when she heard the thump, no she was too busy caring for her precious Sasuke-kun. Only when Hatake Kakashi walked out of the gates and saw Naruto crumpled on the ground did anyone notice him. As he rushed to his student's aid, he heard Sakura say to Sasuke; "Did that idiot hurt you Sasuke-kun?"
Once Kakashi reached Naruto, he picked him up and put him on his shoulder and began a sprint to the hospital, hoping to save his student in time.
Second A/N:
Well, that's the end of the first chapter, tell me what you think and I might continue it.
Sabaku no Kage out!
