Author's Note: Hello. Here is my first Song fic. Its Concrete Angel by Martina McBride. I don't think its the best, its kinda, werid. But I hope you guys like it. Please reveiw. I always like them. And I could use the Constructive criticism


She walks to school with a lunch she packed

Nobody knows what she's holding back;

Life hasn't been the same. It just hasn't been the same. Father is more angry, and mother is sick. Ever since the tragic accident, which caused me to lose someone, I love.

Nobody cares about me. They just think I'm the cold hearted ice queen. There was only one person who saw through my heartless act. Now, he is gone.

Wearing the same dress she wore yesterday,
She hides the bruises with the linen and lace;
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Ever since this happened, I get hurt more often. You know, dad gets angry. Sometimes I can't blame him though. I get in his way at times, and he gets a little irritated. You really can't blame him. He lost someone he loves too. Every now and then, I wish someone would come and help me. Then reality sets back in and I realize that would be the worst thing that could happen.

The teacher wonders but she doesn't ask,
It's hard to see the pain behind the mask;

Not a soul knows about his, about the past misfortune. They can never know. I don't need anyone's pity. I just need someone to care for me. Now that I've lost the only one. I guess people can sense that I am upset. I get offended easily nowadays. Yet, they won't ask me. They won't ask if I'm okay. That is all I need, Classmates or teachers asking me if something is wrong.


Bearing the burden of a secret storm,
Sometimes she wishes she was never born;

Through the wind and the rain,
She stands hard as a stone in a world that she can't rise above;
But her dreams give her wings and she flies to a place where she's loved.

Home in bed sleeping is the best part of the day for me. I can dream my perfect life. Where people care, and act on their feelings.

Then my beautiful dream turns into a nightmare. A replay of that night, when he gave his last breathe on the hospital bed.

Concrete Angel

Somebody cries in the middle of the night,
The neighbors hear but they turn out the lights;

I always wake up in tears after that dream. Knowing that he is gone, and he's never coming back. I've lost him. I've lost my only friend.

A fragile soul caught in the hands of fate,
When morning comes it will be too late.

Occasionally, I want to be up there with him. I want to see his face, and be near him again.

It seems destiny did the work for me. I didn't wake up that morning. Not physically. Instead I'm here, with my only friend, my best friend, and my brother up in heaven.

Through the wind and the rain,
She stands hard as a stone in a world that she can't rise above;
But her dreams give her wings and she flies to a place where she's loved.

Concrete Angel

A statue stands in a shaded place,
An angel girl with an upturned face;
Her name is written on a polished rock,
A broken heart that the world forgot.

I see my father. Staring at my stone. There are tears of frustration in his eyes. I could tell he's crushed. But soon he'll understand it was for the best.

I'm here with my brother Ryan. We are reunited at last in a place where we are both loved.


Through the wind and the rain,
She stands hard as a stone in a world that she can't rise above;
But her dreams give her wings and she flies to a place where she's loved.

Concrete Angel


A/N: OKay there it is. I hope you guys liked it. Like I said it was my first one. Please review. There so encouraging.

THANKS!