so I started this story out of inspiration from the movie the Jackals are coming (which I should have been studying for my tests but got distracted and watched instead. And I thought wow this totally fits Max's character so here is the story

I do not own Maximum Ride all rights go to James Patterson

I do not own Jackals are coming


Police Headquarters- in a dark conference room the projector on the wall shows the emblem of the police and in front stands a tall strawberry blond haired man with blue eyes (he is not blind)sitting in front of him are a group of police officers.

"Captain Iggy why are you calling us in for an emergency meeting on a Friday afternoon? I have got better things to do than hang around the Police station" bellowed the middle aged man in front of Iggy

" Yes sir, the serial killer Hyena, is well known for various gory murders and for framing them to look like suicide cases or accident cases an-"

"Iggy, we all know very well who Hyena is so why did you call us" interrupted the man

" Well sir, we recently received a note from Hyena saying that he will be at the plaza hotel at 12:00 tonight and ummm... I think it will be great boost to our stations reputation if we caught him there."

" Alright then Iggy you can form the group and let me know when you catch him, until then I will be at home enjoying my break. Oh, and before I forget, the Hotel is out of the boundaries for our police station so make sure you include someone fromm the local police station in that area in our group I want you to stakeout at the hotel until you caught him. Understand" announced the man as he stood up and walked to the door

" Sir ,yes, Sir" saluted Iggy


so what do you think? read and review please, and before i forget i have updated mask so check it and leave comments :)