Dawn of the Vizard Kitsune (tales of the Blood Storm Fox)
Chapter 1 Re-genesis of Naruto/birth of the storm
Normal speech "Ramen"
Thinking or thoughts "Hinatas' Hot"
Jutsu"kage bushin no jutsu"
Bijou talking "Away pissant"
Bijou thoughts "Get me out of here"
FINALLY, the raven HAS come BACK to FAN FICTION!
sorry I've been gone for so long but life has been a little ruff. but now i am back to writing with a few new idea's and hopefully this time I can post more content more often. so far I've redone Chpt 1-3 and will be posting them as soon as possible. but for now here is the new chapter 1
(Land of fire, forest of Konoha)[Night of the Graduation exams]
A lone figure lands in a small clearing by a rundown shed, the clouds above obstructing the moon's light and laying out the prefect escaping cover. The figure quickly stood up from their landing looking around trying to make sure he was alone. Feeling that he was in the clear he dropped the long four and a half foot cylindrical object he had just stolen. A large scroll, which he had carried here from the village leader's home. Kneeling down they undid the lock that held the scroll closed, before they unrolled it out on the ground hoping to learn something that would help him pass. For you see he had yet again failed his ninja graduation exam for the third time, at this was his last shot at full filling his dream of becoming a ninja. Lucky one of his sensei's had told him of an old secret exam that would let him pass.
Now contrary to popular belief the boy was no fool. No surely, in fact he actually had the makings of being a prodigy of hard work. That is if someone would actually teach him something, he was considered the blight of his village so no one wanted anything to do with him. Why? We'll get to that in a minute.
The clouds began to roll away letting the moonlight shine down. Revealing the figure to be a young blond boy with seemingly untamable wild spiky locks wearing, bright nearly neon orange jumpsuit whit bit of white and blue mixed in. his sky-blue skimming the scroll as his oddly whiskered birth marked face wrinkled in frustration at the first jutsu listed in the scroll. It was the same type of jutsu that caused him to fail his test a bushin jutsu; Three times in a row. Letting out an annoyed whine, he figured he would give the technique a try what could it hurt? Right?
[Two hours later]
The boy sat on the ground barely breathing hard, but he had learned the Jutsu, Even picking up a little bonus, having discovered that when the bushin dispels he gained their memories. A joyous feral grin set upon his face at his accomplishment, but it was quickly wiped away by a sudden surprise.
"NARUTO!"
An irate man shouted. The boy now known as Naruto quickly turned around and almost seamlessly switching back to his idiot mask hoping that his sensei wouldn't notice, as Naruto came to face the man.
"Iruka-sensei what brings you out here tonight?"
Naruto asked nervously rubbing the back of his head trying and hoping to look innocent, to avoid being trouble. The man walked out of the tree line revealing to be a tall 5'10 brown-haired person male in his late teens early twenties with a scar going across his nose. He was wearing a grass green chunin vest and grayish ANBU style pants with the standard ninja tobi sandals. Iruka Crossed his arms and narrowed his brown eyes at the boy, in responds to his lame act of trying to talk his way out of trouble again.
"Uzumaki Naruto! Don't even start that dumb game, the real question here is, why you are here and why in the heaven's name did you steal the forbidden Scroll!"
Iruka question in a loud and heated voice thinking that this was just another one of Konoha's # 1 prankster's stupid jokes. Naruto on the other hand was a little confused and surprised, he thought this was just a copy of the Forbidden Scroll not the actual thing. He knew then he was now in real big trouble, even more than last week when he painted the Hokage's Monument.
Naruto began to open his mouth to reply to his teacher but was cut off by a sudden rain of kunai aimed at the clearings to occupants. Both sensei and student dodge to oppose sides of the clearing, with Iruka towards the old shed and Naruto to the bushes. However, right as Iruka landed front of the worn down shelter he was immediately pinned to the outer wall of the structure with even more kunai. Moreover, as he tried to push himself off the shed's wall he found he was also bound tightly by chakra draining ninja wire that was quickly sapping his strength away.
Naruto found his self-rolling into the bush, a briar bush to be exact. Nevertheless, he ignored the thin needles stabbing into his clothing and skin, concerning his self-more with the origin of the hail of weapons. Looking out from in the middle of the bushes the boy saw a newcomer male land.
He was about the same height as Iruka only about an inch and a half taller; he had gray wild locks with pale skin and beady insane black eye. Dress in nearly the same attire only with lighter gray pants and a forest green chunin vest. On his back rested two large shuriken stars held there by a tan leather strap going across his torso. Naruto could see the dark and creepy grin that held upon the new man's face that he had seen before. Naruto knew exactly who the man was, the Very person that told Naruto about this so-called "test". Touji Mizuki was his name; Naruto's other Sensei from the academy.
Upon seeing Mizuki's evil looking grin Iruka Doubled his efforts of trying to break free, but the more he struggled the more chakra was sapped away. Mizuki seeing his "best friend" struggling could not help but chuckle darkly at his co-worker futile fight against his ANBU class Ninja wire the very kind they use to bind prisoners for transport.
"Well, well, well I've finally found you two. Now-"
Mizuki said pausing to turn towards the bushes where he saw Naruto dive over at.
"Naruto good job getting the Scroll, couldn't have done it better myself!"
He said in an arrogant tone
"Now Fox Boy, give me the Scroll or I'll Kill Iruka!"
He finished as he pulled one of the large shurikens from his back and held it up to Iruka's Throat. Naruto Sat frozen and wide eyed at the scene, not quite understanding just what was going on. How could anyone want to kill the winner of Konoha's Nicest Guy award six years running. The boy had no clue of what to, on one hand, he didn't want the teacher turned traitor to get his grubby tainted hands of the Village's archive of most dangerous Techniques'.
On the other hand, Naruto didn't want to lose one of the few people who actually treated him like normal, so moving from out of the bushes with the rolled up scroll in hand, fear and anger with in his eyes the teen glared at the traitor. However, Mizuki seeing this just laughed at the young boy attempt to look brave and the glare the 'demon' was giving him. A dark thought raced across Mizuki's mind as he took a few steps toward his former student beginning to spin the shuriken in hand
"On second thought, I'll just kill you both; you know save me some trouble. And I think I'll start with my old buddy! "
The man said turning about flinging the sharp star at the other teacher making the other two occupants go wide eyed at the action. Without thinking, Naruto pumped as much as Chakra in to his legs that he could as he pushed off disappearing in sudden burst of speed.
Iruka heard the projectile getting closer and closer but could not escape, so he just tightly shut his eyes waiting for the enviable. Hearing the sound of the weapon hitting flesh, but oddly no pain, no bright light; only Mizuki's Dark laughter ringing out. Opening his eyes his instantly wished he didn't as tears began to form in his eyes, for the shuriken did hit something, something Iruka wish it had not.
"NARUTO!"
The sadden teacher cried out as he saw one of the edges of the shuriken sticking in to the boy chest, and as if Iruka crying out was a comedians best joke Mizuki laughed even louder than before. The two men had thought that they had seen the end of the young boy, but little did they know that they were about to witness the birth of a legendary.
[Unknown location]
Naruto Sprung up spitting out water (he hoped it was) gasping for air. Looking down at his chest he was shocked and thankful the lack of a large shuriken sticking out of it. Shifting his eyes off his chest, he realized he was no longer in the forest any more, but what looked to be an extremely dimly lit sewer but because of the dim lighting, it was hard for him to tell. Rising up to his feet Naruto quickly noticed how dry he was especially considering he was just laying underwater. Deciding that the mystery of the insta-drying clothes was something that could wait, he began to look for a way back to Iruka and that lowly snake Mizuki. However, before the boy could even get four steps away from where he started a loud and strange disembodied voice cried out before Naruto.
"COME….COME TO US…, COME QUICKLY"
It said in a smooth and light yet loud tone accompanied with sudden a knock down blast of wind that swept Naruto off of his feet back under the water, popping back up with a gasp for air again he quickly gets back up turning to where he heard the sound originate peering fiercely in to the darkness
"COME to us IF YA WISHTA save your SENSEI"
Another voice said only much more rougher and male sounding without wind blast. Upon hearing the words "save your sensei' Naruto shot off in to the darkness towards the voices. Running as fast as he possibly could following the tunnel that laid before him, following all the twists and turns hastily making his way through the ankle high waters; until he made on final turn and found his self in a long straight-a-way with a near blinding light at its end. Wondering if he had made a wrong turn, Naruto was about to turn back when
"COME…..Naruto"
The Voices cried out together with a small gust of wind behind it, steeling his resolve he burst forth with all of his strength and his eyes closed in to the light as it swallowed him whole.
Feeling light fade away, Naruto opened his eyes to an even stranger place than he was before a dark room in which he could not see. Just as worry began to set upon him light suddenly burst from up under his self-spiraling outward looking as if birds were taking off. Peering down Naruto sees a strange massive stain glass looking floor under him, with a mural depicted upon it. It seem to be divided in to three different parts; in the center where Naruto stood was the largest sector of the design had a picture of a blond spiky hair man in a white cloak and a beautiful red haired woman in a red kimono fighting against the Kyubi. a picture Around the outside of the large picture was a border of medium circles going around it each one filled with a portrait of one of Naruto's closes people, like the Third, Iruka, the Ramen chiefs, and a few others. In addition, the last ring was the smallest and had a pattern to it, the leaf symbol then an orange swirl then another leaf then a picture of a blue and white wave. Naruto Could not help but stare at the floor mesmerized by the art, but he was quickly broken from his trance when sudden the floor began to shake violently causing Naruto to struggle to remain standing.
Just when Naruto thought, it could not worsen anymore suddenly the floor shattered beneath him plummeting him in to a black abyss. Falling further and further downward, Naruto was hoping this odd nightmare would soon be over as soon the blackness began to change to a sky blue color. Moreover, as if Naruto wasn't already questioning his sanity he really began to worry when he passed through a cloud
'What the hell is going on!?'
He yelled internally completely freaking out from what was going on.
Mmmmwarah!
Naruto heard behind him, looking back his eyes nearly popped out at the slight before them, a large odd-looking White dragon was racing towards him. The beast looked more like a wing flapping space ship than a fleshly beast (world of nothing from Kingdom hearts for reference). The dragon soars right pass him the wind from it knocking Naruto all about. Just when the teen had managed to right him, he saw the beast coming back for a second pass, only for it to stop less than 4 feet away from him. Jumping from its back was a human like figure with wings that quickly soared down towards Naruto as he yet fell. As a blur it quickly over took him, it grabbing one of his feet it flipped him with a giggle, and like magic when Naruto's feet came back around to their starting point Naruto stopped falling. It was as if he suddenly was standing on an invisible platform, turning around Naruto found his self-face to face with another his "savior".
She was quite tall in height of looking to be at lease 6'0 looking to be about in her twenties with long platinum blond hair that flowed in the wind, setting on top of a heart shaped face with a small button nose and mischievous but tempting yellow reptilian eyes. Her body was hourglass shaped with dangerous curves built in, graced with a pair of E-cup breast, sculpted waist and a sweet backside. She was clothed with a sleeve-less Gi top that looked to be struggling to contain her bust, and a long skirt that had a slit going up the middle of her right leg showing off her long smooth skin. She was the breathing definition of the word temptress. Naruto's brain had come to a complete halt at the full sight of her, and she knew it gaining a devious smirk upon her face she stepped closer to the young boy walking behind him wrapping her arms around his neck before whispering in to his left ear
"So I'm the first one huh? Hehehe we're going soooooo much fun"
She said in silky sweet and playful voice before she gentle biting his ear after saying the word fun switching over to his right side
"Do you wish to fly with me, master? Hehehe we could rule the skies all we want. But I need you to say my name first….can you hear it my beautiful name….Hm?"
She finished in the same tone. Naruto stood still and silent for a few seconds before saying
"Kaze…? Your name is Kazegafuku isn't it?"
The woman's eyes widen with intrigue at the boys responds as a smile dawn upon her face slipping around to front of Naruto she looks him deep in to his sky blue eyes
"So you do know my name…. It is Kazegafuku but you're not quite ready to know my command yet master… you're not ready to handle tame this 'wind' yet…but for being such a good boy, remembering my name and, being oh so handsome I'll give you a hand with this fight of yours….Okay?"
Kazegafuku said with her silky voice, but before Naruto could question her about what was going on the world blanked out with white.
[Back at the old shed]
It had been nearly over three minutes since Naruto had fallen and Mizuki was proceeding to slowly beat poor Iruka to death. The loving teacher looked like petrified crap, eyes blacken; mouth bloodied; jaw busted; ribs bruised, but he couldn't care less at moment, he had failed to protect his favorite student and now he was being beat to death by his former best friend. Mizuki was grow tried with Iruka he wouldn't even cry out in pain anymore, so the traitor reached down and pulled out the shuriken that was in Naruto.
"Hey Iruka I'm going to do you a favor I'm going to end you with the same shuriken that I kill the beast with."
Mizuki said in arrogant tone, little did he know that the instant he pulled out the bladed weapon the wound had completely closed up. Just as Mizuki was about to swing the edge across his ex-coworkers throat a powerful pressure suddenly sprung up from where the body of Naruto lied. Causing Mizuki to leap back thinking that the sealing was suddenly failing he pulled out the other shuriken from his back.
The traitors heart nearly popped out of his chest when he saw Naruto stand up like a zombie, rolling his neck around Naruto put his right hand up to his chest as a gleam of light began to shine from it and a hilt of sword was sticking out of it. Pulling out the blade, the two other ninja could not believe what they were seeing.
When the blade was fully out, it was revealed to be a long katana sword made of whiten steel. With a cloud shaped tsubasa and a golden hilt. Giving the sword a few practice swings before he smoothly slide into a sword stands leaning back on his right leg while moving his left forward. His sword held parallel to his eyes as his left arm held outward.
"Sora no Odori: Daiippo; Taberu ago"
Naruto said in a cold whispered voice before he suddenly reached back with blade in hand for deep swing that scraped the ground going in an upward diagonal path. As the sword swing followed through, A monstrous wave of wind came forth from the blade and quickly took on a massive maw like shape. The wind maw abruptly came upon, the traitorous teacher as his eyes suddenly widened in pure fear. It left forth a deafening roared, that caused Mizuki's bladder to lose control. All before the jaws of the maw snapped shut on him, and that was the last thing that Mizuki knew…
To be continued….
Okay when back through and fix what I saw was wrong tell me if I missed anything ok.
Translations
Kazegafuku- Wind Maiden
Sora no odori: Daiippo; Taberu ago- Dance of the sky: first step; the devouring Maw