Maximum Poetry

by smilecuznapoleondirtluvsyou

Story short:I write poems for the Flock.I post them while you get to figure out who is who except in the 2nd one . At the request,I probably will write a poem is want it. So just click on this, and see if you like it or not.Can be flames I don't care R&R

1. Chapter 1

This is my first poetry fic, so be nice. If you can guess who the people are, besides the person telling the story, I have somewhat succeeded. If you want another poem, review and tell me. Because I want to post one of my poems I worked on for awhile.

One day walking, I saw a girl,

Nothing special,

Until I saw her eyes,

So bitter and cold,

Like a blown out candle,

Hurt and alone,

Like a bird with a broken wing,

Waiting for someone to heal it,

I watched that girl,

Sober and quiet,

For days,

To make sure she was okay,

Then one day walking, I saw a boy,

Nothing special,

Until I looked in his eyes,

Tired and angry,

Yet sad and searching,

He saw the girl,

And the girl saw him,

For the first time,

She smiled so bright and warm,

It was impossible for the sun to do,

And the boy smiled gently,

Like a kindling flame,

Together, hands held,

They spread their wings,

And I knew that bird had been healed,

Soaring higher,

Their feathers shined,

Happy once again.

Okay. If you liked this poem and know who the girl and the boy is, please review and tell me how I'm doing. Thanks, guys: )