Hi everyone Plug here to give you my first fanfiction I'd like to hear any feedback you may give to make this better than it already is. Here's the story~
Jeremy - 15
Mike - 16
Jeremy's Pov
It was 15:35 just after school and I had just walked out actually and was just about to leave when- "Hey there you are Jer! I've been looking for you!" Mike. "Jer!" He ran over. Perfect. "Mike, you been skipping class again?" Yes, me and my best friend skips classes but then again we were only in high school after all so can you blame us? Although I do it rarely Mike does it a lot, then he gets caught and guess who has to give him an excuse? It's me. "That's not important Jer! I found out about this abandoned pizzeria and I-" Please don't say what I think you're going to say!. "Need you to come with me!" No! No, no no no never! I swore I'd never go back to place I- "Yeah sure I'll come, to make sure you don't get into any t-trouble right? Haha..." Fuck! Why'd I just say that!? "That's awesome man! Meet me at my house at 9 pm! Don't be late..." Then he cycled off on his bike- wait didn't he run over where'd that bike come from? But the way he said that last sentence sent shivers down my spine, I mean Mike normally is the kind of guy to do something like that but the way he just said that.. It was like nothing I've ever heard before, except that one- No. That wouldn't happen right? I-impossible. That I know wouldn't happen. Whilst standing there I began to ponder about the way he said and how he said what he said. I didn't even realize the time until- "Jeremy? What are you still doing here? Aren't you supposed to be going home, to your family?" That's Mr Miller but everyone just calls him BB standing for Balloon Boy, I still don't understand the boy bit very well. Is it because he's so childish? I might never know, anyway he's just called that because he like's balloons a bit too much, so much he give's them out to students. No one knows why, not even me. "Huh? Oh! R-right, s-sorry BB!" I was stuttering. Why was I stuttering? Did Mike really scare me that much? I-I'm not a scaredy cat "No need to apologize Jeremy just get home now I'm pretty sure you mother is worried about you right? Here's a balloon and you can just say that you were with me so you won't get into trouble~" He winked, passed me the balloon and then walked away. I swear that guy's going to get arrested one day if he keeps giving comments like that to kids! I then looked up at the yellow balloon he had given me.. Funny.. He doesn't normally give out bear head balloons! And what's weird about that you ask? It's yellow! Who ever heard of a yellow bear!? Eh whatever. I need to get home! I let the balloon head off in the atmosphere so it could be with the planets and ran home. The yellow bear balloon staring and grinning as I went. "Soon Jeremy soon..."
It was now 8:30 pm I decided to come to Mike early considering the threat he threw my way.. I can still remember it very clearly. 'Don't be late...' It sent shivers down my spine every time I think about it! Oh Mike.. Why do that to me? You're best friend? Just why? Do you not remember? But then again you DO do it a lot but that was just so fucking creepy! Too creepy for you even! Oh shoot am I starting to regret agreeing to Mike? I even had to sneak out just to come here! My dad's going to kill me so bad... I shivered though mum may just think of it as another phase of growing up, she's pretty weird like that. Then Mike's house started to come into view, my pace decreasing in speed as I got ever closer. As I was getting slower I started thinking, what if I went home? Mum and dad wouldn't even know I left, I would still get beaten by Mike.. But hey! Least I wouldn't go to that blasted place right? Right?! You will go if you like it or not! What the heck!? GO! Who the hell is that? Get out of my head! That's it I'm going ho- Wait why can't I move? What's going on!? Fate Jeremy you can't stop it, I need you with me. Now lets get to Mikey's house shall we? I didn't have a choice.. It was controlling my movements, forcing me to walk to Mike's house.. As soon as I- We WE got there I gained control although.. I was visibly shaking, sweating and trembling with fear of what might happen to me and Mike in the next hour or so... Even with that thing in my head, I sucked in my fear and rang the door bell, paling at that god damn tune. It was the Funeral march tune. You know dun dun da dun dun dun da dun dun it went a little like that. Now I'm using up all my self control just to keep myself from running right there and then. Then the door opened.. Fuck My Life! "Jer you're here That's awesome and there I was thinking that you would wuss out! Now lets- Hey are you alright? You look kinda sick.. Do you still wanna go or.." Yes! I'm sick now to- "I'm fine Mike, lets go already!" That bastard just used my voice, MY VOICE! Just to get Mike to think that I was fine and get me going. That son of a b- That's not nice Jeremy, behave or pay the price~ Shit. Mike grabbed a hold of my hand, I shrieked and pulled back. "Jer.. You sure you're okay and want to go?" Yes being controlled, not having a say in my own choices so... what do you think!? Also. I don't want to go! Oh how much I wanted to say all that, but I couldn't, not to my best friend.. Also I didn't just to save my own skin. (Probably his too) "I'm fine Mike! Never better!" I lied, not for him but for my own sake. "Then lets go Jer!" Mike shouted a goodbye to his mother and then dragged me all the way to the Abandoned Pizzeria.
After about 20 minutes later we had arrived. 20 mins went too quick for my taste! At least Mike's happy or happyish.. If only he knew how I felt... I sighed and stared in disbelief as he took out a key- "Whoa whoa whoa! Mike where the hell did you get that!?" He didn't steal it did he? Oh no.. He didn't find the guy who previously owned this place, forced him to give him the key then run off to find me and force me to come with him did he!? "Wow Jer calm down! Jeez you sound like my mother!" He laughed "Look Jer I got it from this person, don't know his name or him(?) for that matter, but he said it would be great if I could go achieve two masks or somethin' and he said for me to take my best friend Jeremy so.. Here we are Jer!" You've got to be kidding me.. That bastard.. "Mike you know we're not supposed to talk to and go on quests for strangers!" He's making me go through all this freaking torment for this!? "Jer I said calm down!" I flinched. There it is again.. "He said it would be safe and I trust him-" Yeah because trusting strangers is normal, for Mike anyway. "Besides he said he'd come find me if I didn't..." Find you? Does that mean he'd kill you if you didn't!? "Mike what the hell is that supposed to mean!" He had better tell me! "Jer you deaf or what? I said he's find me and tell me to do it and if I denied he would keep bugging me so yeah.." His voice was shaky but I didn't push it.
"Lets just go in..." I sighed this isn't going to be fun. Not. At. All.
Mike unlocked the door with his key and walked inside a hesitant me following him. This place, this damn place gives me the creeps of something awful! Thinking of awful I haven't heard from Mr Creepy lately maybe he's finally left me alone? But that just worries me more.. "Haven't been here in awhile huh Jer?" Ever since that incident you forgot Mike. "I know right? B-b-brings back m-memories..." I stuttered then we started wandering around getting separated in the process the place. After a while I started noticing some things here and there that weren't there before the incident. First of all there is dust and rubbish everywhere, gross. Second of all the walls are all cracked and broken with ugly kiddie drawings of what looks like.. "Hey Jer! Over here I think I found something!" Okay never mind I followed Mike's voice hoping to see him holding those masks he was talking about, but nope. Couldn't see Mike in my line of vision. What the? "Mike?" I was beginning to get worried believe it or not, Mike couldn't have disappeared, could he? "Found you Jeremy~" I screamed bloody murder. "AHHHHHHHHH!" It was him! He followed me I knew it! I need OUT! I ran towards the entrance from where I previously was: The kitchen. One I got there I started pounding on the entrance's double doors hoping to smash or open them up but they wouldn't move! Crap! Now what Jeremy!? That's when I heard laughing in the distance. "Hahahaha Jer you should have seen your face! Hilarious!" I'm going to kill him. But after I get the hell out of here. All that could be heard was my frantic bashing on the door and Mike's laughter till it faded being replaced by distant footsteps. But this door.. Why won't it budge! It should have broken into itty bitty pieces of shattered glass by now! Unless.. "AHHHHHhhhhhhhhhhhhhh..." I heard a scream that wasn't mine this time that must mean... There was a sound of someone falling to the floor. "MIKE!" I ran to were I think the scream was shed. I searched every crevice, every cupboard every oven EVERY PLACE A MIKE COULD FIT IN THIS DAMNED PLACE! But found.. Nothing.. "Mike..." I collapsed to my hands and knees. If only I warned him.. If only I had the courage to tell him no.. But I couldn't.. Wait. There was one room I had not gone in. My forbidden room. Shit. Mike I hate you. This must all be a trick! I got up then marched down the hall. Every stomp showed uncaged rage that echoed throughout the building. Till I reached that room that is. I opened the door and stepped inside finding an unconscious Mike on the floor. "Oh no.. Mike I'm sorry.. I-I though tha- Wait what's he wearing?" The thing on his head had a rotting gold kinda colour it looked somewhat like a rabbits head, doesn't look good but why is he wearing it? I looked around seeing if I could find anything to help him till my eyes set on a yellow bear head... Just like my airborne yellow bear balloon.. My sky blue eyes turned a deep black with pinprick white dots. Jeremy... It's me Jeremy... I began walking towards it unknowingly.. Wait a second I need to help Mike! Eyes turning Blue again I went over to Mike. "If only I knew what happened to you buddy..." Has it got something to do with this? I touched the mask but leaped back in shock. Fuck! My hand just got, wait what happened? It was like an electric shock or something.. Something I can't describe but damn did it hurt! I looked behind me to see the bear head(?) staring at me. Eyes turning back to the deep black and white dots. Jeremy... Mike and him did it... Why not us..? Who is him and what does he have to do with anything?You'll know later my brother come.. It's me Jeremy don't you want to do to me what Mike did to him? I guess I can give it a try. Brother.. I then put it on my head. Instantly regretting it as I gathered my senses. Oh no! What have I done! "Mi-" Images of a brown bear, a purple rabbit and the yellow bear flashed in my mind it was all I could see. I screamed. "AAAAAAHHHHHhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh..." Yes we are one... Brother.. Was all I heard before blacking out.
So? What'd you think? Like? hate? It doesn't matter~ See you next chap! It Might be out tomorrow.
