What is this you ask? Well, this is my first fanfic for your information!
I'm so excited 'bout this and I hope ya enjoy reading as much as I enjoyed
writing it!
~ the story and all that it holds! ~ Naruto sat on the ground and stared at the sky. His leg was wrapped in bandages, thanks to Sasuke who took the time to wrap up his injury, even though it healed pretty quickly. Naruto blushed quickly when he remembered that he fell into Sasuke's arms when he tripped and scrapped his knee. Sasuke, who was a handsome dude with some serious issues 'bout his older bro and 'taking revenge thingy', had an addiction on Naruto. It's weird to say this, but Sasuke just can't help it. Naruto may be bothered by this but when did Naruto ever stop him!? Well, anyways Naruto looked up at Sasuke and smiled, "thanks." Sasuke was a little shocked by his sudden mood swing but smiled back anyway. Naruto got up and brushed off his backside-which Sasuke watched intentively-and went to leave. Sasuke watched his friend/rival walk off into the sunset and felt a sudden urge to walk with him, so he went up beside Naruto and they both walked side by side.
Naruto felt a weird sensation when Sasuke neared him. Sasuke may not know it but he has some qualities that are well, attractive. (well, no!) And Naruto felt a smile tug at his lips when Sasuke decided to walk with him. He liked Sasuke, not a lot but just enough to.you know! So he stopped and stared into Sasuke's dark menacing eyes. Sasuke stared back at Naruto's clear blue eyes. Naruto opened his mouth to say something but the unexpected happened! Sasuke leaned forward and hit Naruto on the forehead with his own. (What were you thinking he did?)
"Ow!" Naruto shrieked. "Hahaha," Sasuke chuckled. Naruto stared with a fire blazing in his eyes. Naruto grabbed Sasuke by the turtle-neck and dragged him away to a clearing.
At the clearing Naruto stopped and let go of Sasuke, who didn't protest anyway.
Sasuke got up and looked at Naruto with an expecting expression. "Battle me!" was the first words that escaped his mouth. Sasuke stared and looked at him vacantly. ~ a couple hours later.~
Naruto looked at Sasuke with a very annoyed look on his face. "Sasuke get off of me and leave me alone," Naruto said. "But.." Sasuke started, but Naruto shoved him off of his tummy and sulked back towards his house. "So, what I lost would you not rub it in my face?" Naruto exclaimed. Sasuke smirked and clapped his hands together. "You are now to be my bestest friend!!" "Huh?" Naruto retorted.
"Naruto, you agreed to fight me right?" Sasuke stated. "Yeah." Naruto replied. "So if I won you agreed to do whatever I said right?"
"Yeah, but.."
"No buts!!!"
"But." Naruto started, but was muffled down by a kiss. Sasuke had pressed his lips against Naruto's. Sasuke broke the kiss and smiled, "This will be our secret sign of friendship!!" Naruto stared back with a blank face.
"Let's go get ya some ramen!" Sasuke exclaimed. "Oh yeah!!" Naruto screamed. "But you have to show me the friendship signal!" Sasuke retorted. "Huh? What friendship .." He was muffled, yet again, by a kiss, this time with more strength.
"Ahhhh!!!" Naruto screamed with Sasuke still attached. Sasuke was surprised by Naruto suddenly screaming into his face, "That's the friendship signal!" he replied. "uh." Naruto was lost by the two connections and didn't know what to say.
They got to the ramen shop and were slurping on ramen for a while. I wonder if Naruto understands that the 'friendship signal' is my excuse for my pleasure. Sasuke thought. Naruto noticed a pink haired girl walk by, "Hi Sakura" Sasuke turned around and nodded his head. Sakura walked over to Sasuke and Naruto "Hey, what are you doing?" "Eating ramen 'cause Naruto's now my best friend and I thought we'd celebrate," Sasuke replied. Naruto gaped at Sasuke and realized it wasn't all a joke. "Really? Show me proof," Sakura said. "Watch!" Sasuke exclaimed. "Naruto it's the friendship signal!" Sasuke whispered. "No not here and not in front of her! Ever!" Naruto retorted. "Never ever!" he repeated. "But you have to or she won't believe us!" Sasuke retorted "But!" Naruto exclaimed. Sasuke swiftly locked his lips with Naruto's and Naruto couldn't get away. Sasuke pressed against Naruto and Naruto kissed back.
Sakura stared at them in disbelief and when they broke the kiss 2 min. and 34 sec. later, she chuckled. "So you like Naruto now!?" Sakura screamed, with tears in her eyes. "Yup!" Sasuke exclaimed. Naruto was breathless and speechless. There was a pink blur and Naruto felt funny all over. Sakura pressed her lips to Naruto's with a great force and passion, he opened his mouth to tell her to get off but she found her tongue inside his mouth instead. She sat onto his thigh and squeezed his shoulders forcefully. She let go of him and got off of a very surprised Naruto. She went up to a devastated Sasuke and stared down at her. "Let's see who gets Naruto first. " she said.
~Well how'd you like it??? Was it too extreme? Should there be some more tweaks added to make the story better?? If I don't get more than 10 reviews I might not continue so please, all you good people please review!! It's not that hard to make a writer happy!! And 'member dis is mai first fic and I'm not used to this yet!!~
~ the story and all that it holds! ~ Naruto sat on the ground and stared at the sky. His leg was wrapped in bandages, thanks to Sasuke who took the time to wrap up his injury, even though it healed pretty quickly. Naruto blushed quickly when he remembered that he fell into Sasuke's arms when he tripped and scrapped his knee. Sasuke, who was a handsome dude with some serious issues 'bout his older bro and 'taking revenge thingy', had an addiction on Naruto. It's weird to say this, but Sasuke just can't help it. Naruto may be bothered by this but when did Naruto ever stop him!? Well, anyways Naruto looked up at Sasuke and smiled, "thanks." Sasuke was a little shocked by his sudden mood swing but smiled back anyway. Naruto got up and brushed off his backside-which Sasuke watched intentively-and went to leave. Sasuke watched his friend/rival walk off into the sunset and felt a sudden urge to walk with him, so he went up beside Naruto and they both walked side by side.
Naruto felt a weird sensation when Sasuke neared him. Sasuke may not know it but he has some qualities that are well, attractive. (well, no!) And Naruto felt a smile tug at his lips when Sasuke decided to walk with him. He liked Sasuke, not a lot but just enough to.you know! So he stopped and stared into Sasuke's dark menacing eyes. Sasuke stared back at Naruto's clear blue eyes. Naruto opened his mouth to say something but the unexpected happened! Sasuke leaned forward and hit Naruto on the forehead with his own. (What were you thinking he did?)
"Ow!" Naruto shrieked. "Hahaha," Sasuke chuckled. Naruto stared with a fire blazing in his eyes. Naruto grabbed Sasuke by the turtle-neck and dragged him away to a clearing.
At the clearing Naruto stopped and let go of Sasuke, who didn't protest anyway.
Sasuke got up and looked at Naruto with an expecting expression. "Battle me!" was the first words that escaped his mouth. Sasuke stared and looked at him vacantly. ~ a couple hours later.~
Naruto looked at Sasuke with a very annoyed look on his face. "Sasuke get off of me and leave me alone," Naruto said. "But.." Sasuke started, but Naruto shoved him off of his tummy and sulked back towards his house. "So, what I lost would you not rub it in my face?" Naruto exclaimed. Sasuke smirked and clapped his hands together. "You are now to be my bestest friend!!" "Huh?" Naruto retorted.
"Naruto, you agreed to fight me right?" Sasuke stated. "Yeah." Naruto replied. "So if I won you agreed to do whatever I said right?"
"Yeah, but.."
"No buts!!!"
"But." Naruto started, but was muffled down by a kiss. Sasuke had pressed his lips against Naruto's. Sasuke broke the kiss and smiled, "This will be our secret sign of friendship!!" Naruto stared back with a blank face.
"Let's go get ya some ramen!" Sasuke exclaimed. "Oh yeah!!" Naruto screamed. "But you have to show me the friendship signal!" Sasuke retorted. "Huh? What friendship .." He was muffled, yet again, by a kiss, this time with more strength.
"Ahhhh!!!" Naruto screamed with Sasuke still attached. Sasuke was surprised by Naruto suddenly screaming into his face, "That's the friendship signal!" he replied. "uh." Naruto was lost by the two connections and didn't know what to say.
They got to the ramen shop and were slurping on ramen for a while. I wonder if Naruto understands that the 'friendship signal' is my excuse for my pleasure. Sasuke thought. Naruto noticed a pink haired girl walk by, "Hi Sakura" Sasuke turned around and nodded his head. Sakura walked over to Sasuke and Naruto "Hey, what are you doing?" "Eating ramen 'cause Naruto's now my best friend and I thought we'd celebrate," Sasuke replied. Naruto gaped at Sasuke and realized it wasn't all a joke. "Really? Show me proof," Sakura said. "Watch!" Sasuke exclaimed. "Naruto it's the friendship signal!" Sasuke whispered. "No not here and not in front of her! Ever!" Naruto retorted. "Never ever!" he repeated. "But you have to or she won't believe us!" Sasuke retorted "But!" Naruto exclaimed. Sasuke swiftly locked his lips with Naruto's and Naruto couldn't get away. Sasuke pressed against Naruto and Naruto kissed back.
Sakura stared at them in disbelief and when they broke the kiss 2 min. and 34 sec. later, she chuckled. "So you like Naruto now!?" Sakura screamed, with tears in her eyes. "Yup!" Sasuke exclaimed. Naruto was breathless and speechless. There was a pink blur and Naruto felt funny all over. Sakura pressed her lips to Naruto's with a great force and passion, he opened his mouth to tell her to get off but she found her tongue inside his mouth instead. She sat onto his thigh and squeezed his shoulders forcefully. She let go of him and got off of a very surprised Naruto. She went up to a devastated Sasuke and stared down at her. "Let's see who gets Naruto first. " she said.
~Well how'd you like it??? Was it too extreme? Should there be some more tweaks added to make the story better?? If I don't get more than 10 reviews I might not continue so please, all you good people please review!! It's not that hard to make a writer happy!! And 'member dis is mai first fic and I'm not used to this yet!!~