Warning this is an imcomplete draft.
Synopsis: it was days after the battle with the site admins. Aya, now living a happy life with Tsuyuno Yatsumura, may have defeated the site admins since there recent encounter. However, they often meet the two magical girls ,Kayo Komura and Sakura Sakaki. They feared that Aya's sinister brother Kaname has come back to cause trouble.
Shinagawa, Tokyo
A young man with no clothes was walking harshly to the streets in a sunny day. He had blue hair and blue eyes and was wearing glasses. He was frustrated for no reason which led him to lie down.
"Oh my goodness." A woman looked at the injured young man in horror.
Shut up. He thought.
"He-help!!!" "Somebody called the ambulance.
"Honey?" This young woman open the door to her husband's room, she sees him drinking wine and alcohol. Her husband had gray hair with gray eyes, even he has less facial hair.
"Kaname, is he still not home yet?"
The wife sees her husband drinking alcohol. "Kaname is everything for me...Without Kaname I.."
The husband holds the can of alcohol and drinks it while the alcohol' substance were dripping down to his mouth. "There is no longer a reason to live."
"Honey, you don't need to drink just like it, our son is-"
"Shut up!" The husband hits her with his right hand like he was thwomping her. "Don't you see... Kaname wasn't our only child...Kaname.."
"Ka..na..me..."
Kaname Asagiri, 16, brother of Aya and a son of a couple. He had been relieving his stress when his father, who had wanted Kaname to meet up his expectations by taking him to a University of Tokyo, a college where Mr Asagiri went and failed, leading him into a jealous rage by lashing out on him along with his wife.
Kaname grew tired and anger despite his father never cared about his mental and erratic behavior since that. The only way Kaname would endure was torture his beloved sister Aya by beating her phsycally and mentally for "fun" as a stress outlet from his father. If he doesnt have a perfect score, he would yell and beat him every single day.
Several days later, Kaname discovered a website on his computer known as Magical Girl Site, that can only be accessed by those who are misfortunate or not. Obsessed with it, Kaname lured one of Aya's friends, Nijimi Anazawa, a temper young idol who uses the panties to control people. So, Kaname first murdered a fan of Nijimi and then Nijimi herself. Thus, there he was being tied up in a room full of magic sticks and was sodomized by a police detective named, Kichiro Misumi.
He lost a lot of blood and still in critical condition, but we managed to save his life.
"Thank goodness.."
"What in the world happened to our son
"The police are investigating, but from the look of it." "This possibility of your son being confined is quite high-"
Con-!
"And here." This thing fell from your son's hand.
"Panties?"
"Why is this thing..."
Im not quite sure why Ive seen a lot of emergency like this, but its the first time something like this happened. But one more thing..Your son was also holding a photo.
"Darling...this person.."
"Detective Misumi and then the girl who is standing besides him who is she?
"Aya, i would like you to meet the first girls i've met." Rina said.
Yep, Im Sakaki Sakura, 2nd year at the same school, my father allegedly got into an accident anfl drowned. Despite this, the police deemed it a suicide and thr case remains a mystery to this day.and this one here is Kayo Komura, 2nd year ar mitaka city 8th district middle school, After her little sister
Airi, was murdered in cold blood by teenager, her father enact vengeance on then and was given a death sentence. Her family fell apart and her mother became ill and fell into a coma.
Weve known about you girls for a while and weve been waiting for a chance like this to finally make contact
"Why"
All of you..know how to increase your lifespan, hasnt
How do you even know about that, huh.
Like i said weve known you fought the site admins but your battle is up until now.
"Hmm.. hold on. you look familiar. Are those middle schoolers who committed suicide
That means there ghosts.
"No, Kiyo-chan"
This is my stick that i can copy up to 10 abilities of magical girls i come into contact with. One of those powers were object replication, which i copy other sticks.
So we had to not choice but to disappear as a way to protect our family and friends from the admins. Thats how we faked our deaths and make it like a suicide.
And we werent just hiding. While staying hidden we were trying to figure our how to free ourselves from the magical girl site.
Then we found out that you were all battling against the admins. so we tried to make contact.
"Why now we were gathering information while we were hiding. And well to put it simply.
"We dont have much left."
You mean the admins were not here what is happening now.
"There are no sign of the site admins but there is something else coming.."
And Aya, for the first time, we-
"What are you
"Eh."
"What did she do,
"her memories were transferred to Ayas mind. This is the ability of teleportation. But since, She can able to transfer memories as well and life span.
"Transferred lifespan.
"These are the memories
Aya asagiri we wont let anyone die in vain. Lets fight together i dont know if things will go our way. but we are the ones that can end this. in order to release ourselves from this despair, we all fight together.
We cant ignore that these two would have join together.
Asagiri we leave it up to you. Are you sure your ok.
"You know to let them join us.
"Asagiri, they dont have much lifespan left. itd be pointless for us to bring them along like that.
"Can you please transfer my lifespan to them?
"Sayuki what are you."
Doesbt look like theyre lying yo us. Besides I suggest their power will improve to be important, its fine to take my lifespan. We have no right to choose on this matter, Aya is the one to share it with us.
Sarina sighed
We acknowledged your resolve. However we cant take your lifespan.
We can only have them from our comrades.
Comrades.
Of course.
You two dont mean.
"We will prove to you that were different from them.
Asagiri, You looked thought memories you probably realized.
"But, with the admins might be off the hook, I believe there we are the not the only magical girls to be there.
"I believe that Aya also had a broken family. His brother, Kaname often was sick and tired of his father's education. But, this abuse led him to villainy and murdered Nijimin in front of us.
"Ive seen terrible things to happen in our life.
"Asagiri i believed your parents are in grave danger once Kaname uses the panties, He will continue to fulfill his villainous ways.
"Kaname?" His father looked at Kaname while he is sitting at a strong plastic chair of the hospital. "Are you feeling better.
Kaname was speechless at some point. His father would always wanting him to study well and get accepted to a Tokyo University. He felt very tired of his goals and try to get away from him all the time. As studying was his own stress.
"i have a great opportunity to live up to your grades." Mr Asagiri said. "You're going work hard on it. I have higher expectations to take you to a Tokyo University."
"What are you talking about?."
Kaname notice his sympathy, even though his father always beat him up if he doesnt well. His father did went to the University of Tokyo and failed. "You know it's not the time to-" He tried standing up while hes in a hospital bed but, his father react by punching him with his right fist.
"Are you daydreaming or something, do you? Where do you think you're going?"
"Honey!"
That scum, how dare he hit me. As long as I get these panties, I'll kill him. I dont want him to go near mother. I was right about what i said of our dumb father, Aya, i have to hold my stress from now on.
"I know youve been giving me a hard time for this, ever since you try to get away from me." Kaname, with an angry expression try to stand up, felt surprised from his father, knewing how far his mental instability would become.
"So, Kaname..." Mr Asagiri walk to the hospital door as he was leaving."..Lets study."
No! Kaname discovered that he had used the panties.
Mama,"
"Aya, what took you so long."
Why is mom in Kaname's room
Kaname, what is he doing here.
"you must be hungry?"
"So, your father is inside at your brother's room, studying..." Aya looked at her mother with a despressed facial expression. "But ill cook something up to you, Aya.
"Ma, yoy dont understand your husband is using a magic stick."
"A magic stick..."
"Aya's home, of course." Mr Asagiri asked to Kaname. "So, Kaname are you studying hard?"
"Yes, father." His son said.
"Wonderful." He hold his pants where the panties are covered
As much as i have these panties, I can make Kaname study day and night... As long as I have these panties.
He looked at Kaname sitting in the chair and including those study books.
Kaname's grades will be fullfilled and nobody will know that he will get accepted into Tokyo University.
He combed his hair, smiling
Now on..my vision will finally come. As my child, it's your duty to fulfill your father's dream, Kaname...This is my fulfilment! Mr Asagiri closed his eyes, smiling as he hold Kaname's shoulders with his hands while studying
Go..Go... Kan-na-me" Then he "cheers" at Kaname with his left fist clenching up while his right hand was holding Kaname's right shoulder for excitement. "Go! Go! Ka! Na! Me! Go! Go! Ka! Na! Me! Go! Go! Ka! Na! Me!"
What's going on...!?
"Aya, don't go in there." She opened the door seeing her father "cheering" at Kaname.
Nijimi's stick!
Father became a Magical Girl!
"Aya..?"
"Listen carefully."
"Aya..." Her mother sees Aya and Yatsumura freezed and unable to move their bodies.
"Putting your nose where it doesn't belong, Aya.." He looked at her. "But, Listen carefully here."
"You're of no importance in whatsoever in this household, Aya...You are a nuisance to our 'family'."
What is he saying...
"I was when after Kaname was born, we were about to have another child that was a girl, perhaps." Mr Asagiri remember in the hospital where he was sitting at a chair to his wife's hospital bed. He once wore a scarf and a trenchcoat as he looked at his wife.
"However, your mother suffered a miscarriage and wasnt been able to bear children again. I am perfectly happy with just Kaname...but...several years later..she can't stop talking about adopting a child. This child was a girl, too as she thought about the daughter we lost, and she brought that girl home into our family and named her 'Aya'." Mr Asagiri remembered a nurse carrying Aya when she was an infant. She had black hair and was closing her eyes as she was sleeping
"Don't say it...!" Her mother yelled.
"Aya.. not ever our blood flows into our veins...You are..not our child." Aya is shocked, never noticing he was actually adopted after all. "You understand that, don't act like i care."
It's a lie...Why didn't they care about me?
Aya recalled having dinner with Kaname and his parents. While that she suffered torture from Kaname, who cannot stop caring about beating her because of their father, trying to live up to his expectations. Aya was right that she didn't take the mantle of the Asagiri name. She is horrified of the truth even her eyes were in tears.
All this time, Aya have been growing up as an outcast because of that. This is why she was as misfortunate than the "King".
So, her "mother" (who is upset of her husband's rejection to Aya) waves her left hand to her husband's face as she was trying to slap him for rejecting Aya.
"That's the first time." He said, when he controls her hand so that she can't slap him.
"Why can't i move?"
"DONT PLAY WITH ME!" He slapped her with his right hand. Her husband was very upset. He panted.
"Its not the first time you've hit me..." Mrs. Asagiri, who lies down along with Aya was panting and then her mouth opens wide, yelling "EITHER IF ITS ME OR KANAME! WHY COULD YOU HAVE PUT ALL THESE VIOLENCE ON THIS FAMILY! EVERY! SINGLE! TIME!"
"When I was pregnant with our second child..because of you! THAT CHILD IS DEAD!" Mrs Asagiri remembers the time she and Kaname suffered abuse from that all the time. Flash forward, she was being pregnant while her husband try to hit her child as a way her second child would be born. "YOU TOOK MY CHILD FROM ME!"
"YOU ACCUSE ME OF MURDERING OUR CHILD!" Mr Asagiri yelled in jealous rage. "WHY WONT YOU SHUT UP!"
My voice... due to the effects of the panties, she cannot speak only to thought.
"How in the world could I know, you hypocrite?!"
Aya, who can't stand the yelling, started to cry. Her "father" doesn't care
"You, you really think your even part of this family." He looked, standing down with his legs, at Aya. "So, why are you in tears for?"
"Look at him." "My Kaname is good boy who is in the top of his grades just like this, he will study hard for his future." Kaname was still studying while writing with his pencil to the left of his hand , still unable to break free from the panties.
" Can't you see that your very genes are nothing to his? That's why you're just as a lame, pathetic little child. You never have our own blood after all. Come now, and leave this house, you little outsider." He yanked Aya's hair, forcing her to leave the house. Suddenly, Mr Asagiri, as he's about to walk down the stairs to the door, turned and looked at his butt, which is bleeding due to the stick itself.
Why am i bleeding...
Is that because of the stick... Aya looked at the bleeding of the butt. She realized that those magic sticks are used to shorten their lifespan when they use it.
Ugh! Why...", Mr Asagiri had no knowledge of what the Magical Girl Site is. He was shaking as he closed his eyes, lay down with his legs and touching his head feeling dizzy. "My head it hurts...guh..."
"You see..." Yatsumura said. "This is one of those magic sticks that will decrease your lifespan when you use it. It has an emblem as if it fades away, you die."
"Lifespan.." Mr Asagiri had never have knowledge of the Magical Girl Site. He is mostly confused of what's going on to this world, but he never get it after all.
I don't understand... He began to feel frustrated and although he would never use the panties to have Kaname study.
"Youve never learn to have knowledge to Magical Girl Site and you stay away from Asagiri."
"Why..you.."
"Asagiri, Yatsumura, what's going on." Rina went upstairs and saw Aya's father using Nijimi's panties.
"Can't you see I guhh-" Then, Mr Asagiri's butt urinated with blood, like he was peeing on the butt in an unfunny manner. He stand down to the ground with his arms to the floor and his legs, which is like exercising. As that, he lied down, unconscious. When their eyes changed normally, as Aya, his adopted brother and mother, Yatsumura, from this old man's grasp.
"Honey,"
"It's one of the magic sticks and it will shorten their lifespan if they use it."
"Listen, your son used these panties to control people's minds and he murdered 2 people.
"Kaname, how..how could you..."
"You see he was giving your husband a hard time for that. Whenever your husband pushes him to study hard. Your own son would grow up to be the monster just like that. He also assaulted us and killed one of our friends.
"Do you really care."
"That old man here!" Kaname beaten that unconscious dumb father, after all these days he was waiting to get away from his father. "How dare you make me into a slave, I'll kill you! DIE YOU OLD MAN, DIE!
"Kaname, stop."
"Why are you stopping me mother!?" "That dumb father that cause both of you and I are nothing but pain! He doesn't deserve to live! He is better off dead to me! Just nothing to meet up his expectations."
"Now give me my panties back and Let's see how you like being a slave! And this is gonna teach you a lesson." Kaname unzipped his father's pants only to discover that the panties disappeared.
They're gone... Kaname was shocked, unable to use Nijimin's panties to control anything to get away from his father.
"You, I need these panties."
I'm not going to let you or dad do whatever you want anymore. But of course, I stole all the majority of your lifespan.
"I'm hearing her voice directly in my head. Don't tell me...did you lose your voice or something?"
"All I wanted is to get away from that old man." "Even I would go have gotten away with-"
"You you!"
"Huh." She looked at her mother seeing all the photos of Kaname.
At the moment, Mrs Asagiri, in tears, closed her eyes as she holds the rope on top of the ceiling. Her 2 feets in the couch takes down as it looks like it they're floating. Thus, she hanged herself with her neck choked to the rope and led her to her last moments.
"MOM!" Aya screamed.
His father is dead. Because his abuse with the panties made him to decrease his lifespan since he never learn the knowledge of the Magical Girl Site. He is a greedy man, only to desire what he wants in his life. Since then, Kaname is taken custody and confronted by 2 investigators to the interrogation room.
Differences from the manga:
There is no sign of the site admins because Nana (a member of the administrators), who has been communicating with the humans, was probably dead which led them to be absorbed by the King. Since it differentiates the manga, Nana still find out of their betrayal. There may have hints on the King's next plan.
In the manga, a site admin attempts to attack the Asagiri family, but Aya's father intervene by using Nijimi's panties. In the anime it was omitted.
In the manga, Kaname beats up his now dead father and try to find the panties, outside of the Asagiri house. In the anime, It only happened at Kaname's room.
In the manga, The site admin are still around killing magical girls and their love ones. In the anime, it was omitted.
In the manga, Kaname was still sodomized by police detective, Kichiro Misumi, who gives him food before Kaname could kill him with a shard. In the anime it was omitted.
In the manga, the detectives are investigating Kaname's kidnapping and the disappearance of Kichiro Misumi. In the anime it was omitted
In the manga, Nana confronts Kaname and tells him about the magical girl site at the hospital. In the anime, it didn't happen ever since Nana apparently died at a train crash by the hands of Aya and Yatsumura
In the manga, Kaname confronts his father about the site admins attacking families, in which his father declined of this. In the anime, it was omitted.
In the anime, Mr Asagiri coincidentally blamed Aya for Kaname's disappearance and aware that Aya had become Kaname's stress reliever.
In the manga, Kayo and Sakura first met the magical girls when they were about to be killed by the site admins by using a copied version of Alice's stick. In the anime, they first met them in the same place where Aya and her friends met Kosame's team.
In the manga Kaname was holding a picture of Kichiro and Alice
Trivia: it is said to be a possible epilogue to the anime, which only focuses on the subplot of Aya's family. This serves as a possible OVA (Original Video Animation).
It does not show that Aya and Yatsumura were twin sisters despite the foreshadowing between the anime and manga.
It is adapted from chapters 102-106