Hey everyone I hope someone enjoyed my first fan fiction. I consider this to be the sequel to Hope of the Light. I've got 2 more after this one but they are more upbeat……..i think. Any way's enjoy and please read and review.
Disclaimer: Seriously people you know and I know but I guess I have to say I don't own naruto!!
Eye's of Love
He's constantly kept a watchful gaze over her, making sure that no harm befalls her. Every time he see's her smile he knows that she is alright now.
I'm still fighting!
I'm still in pain! I don't want to fight anymore.
So much pain, it's gotten worse, and I still don't want this pain.
I haven't found her. I wish that I have.
I'm going into darkness. Only she can give me light.
Please! I need to see you, feel you! I need to see and feel those eye's!
I need those eye's of love.
And yet every time she give's him no regard it breaks away a piece of his heart. He makes all the sacrifices even though it still pain's him to see her with someone else. He can surely say that even though he isn't with her he want's her to be happy. As long as she has love in her eye's he will still fight.
So did every one like it, or hate it? Please be honest and give me advice. As much as I read the stuff I'm not that good at writing as you can see. Once again please read and review!!