Maximum Ride

Chapter 1:
We had left Dr. Martinez and Ella's house, well I guess it was kind of my house now too, technically. But we all had decided that we had to take a break, right beside our old school, Fang decided. Why, I don't know. He just kind of swooped down once we saw Anne's house and yelled, "Come on! Schools out!" So well all had to follow him, because you know, he can't go anywhere's without getting himself into trouble. He went straight up to the Red Haired Wonder, ugh, I think that he did it just to bug me because he looked back at me and smiled. So of course to get him back I started looking for Sam, so that I could apologize. I found him and started out by saying sorry for, I don't know maybe the 8th time in my life. He replied, "I know why you did it. You were in a really bad situation and you had to make a snap decision. And that decision could have been life or death for you. Oh, and by the way, I think that the wings are really cool." "Thanks," I said, really meaning it. He touched my shoulder and said, "I really hope that we can pick up where we left off." Then, he leaned in- to kiss me I think, and overreacting impressively like I usually do I snapped out my wings and flew up, up, up. That"s when I saw Fang, pressed up against the wall by Lissa, the Red Haired Wonder. I thought oh no not again, but this time she didn't lean in for a kiss, she started morphing, into an Eraser! "Fang!" I cried. Soon I saw I heard him scream, the eraser had scraped his stomach and I scanned the crowd of kids for the flock. I saw all of them flying towards Fang, ready to fight. I streamed towards Lissa and screamed at Fang to duck, and I slammed into her and the wall. Note to self: try to not run into walls. Fang had gotten out of the way and now he was hovering just above us, it was obvious that he wanted to let us fight this one out ourselves. I jumped back off her and she sprang towards me and I launched into a full scissor kick with my body totally of the ground. It hit her in the neck and she fell to the ground. I put my foot on top of her and she laid on the ground unconscious.

Sorry to let you know that my chapters will probably usually this short because I would rather read/write serveral short chapters than a couple long chapters. I want at least 1 review before I post the next chapter