Okay now Hi, umm this is a story that I had as a dream. Names have been changed and I hope you like it. Leave me a review giving me ideas for it or suggestions and opinions about the story because this is how it went while I was sleeping. Enjoy :P P.S. My other stories have nothing to do with this.
The Evil Within
Chapter 1
Location: Miramar, Florida
"Hey Kelly, wanna walk home together so we are not alone?" I asked, I was just a 7th grader. Who decided to walk home today.
"Sure, we live close to each other anyway." said Kelly
We walked all the way out of the community our school was in and crossed the road. To our right was the woods and to our left was the street and a community that we were walking past.
We carefully crossed the road at least two more times until I was at my stop.
"Well I could go home now but I might as well come with you, I'll just call my mom and tell her I'm walking home after I drop you off. If you did get like all hurt it would be my fault anyway"
"Okay, I'm fine with that."
We walked all the way to her house and I went inside. I quickly had some water and decided I should leave.
"Well bye, thanks for the water"
"Welcome, see you tomorrow"
"Same here!"
I waved at her and left, Once home i got my computer, did my homework and changed my status to online on skype. I ate dinner and since I was vegetarian I just had some salad. Then I turned on the TV and went channel surfing. I quickly went to a news channel because the headline was "Dog Bounces On Trampoline" but they went to an abduction that just happened.
"Kelly Ramirez was just abducted and the BAU was just called on the case" said the anchor
I put on Big Bang Theory and went to sleep.
The princess was locked high in her tower, and there seemed to be no prince to get her out. Day in and Day out her keeper came and gave her the same thing for a meal. He put bars on her windows and some how swallowed the key so she can get out. Amazingly he made a copy of the key just incase. When will her prince come. She felt like Repunzel, but her hair was short. Maybe she could sing to the animals like snow white but she sung off key, like Justin Beiber (no offense to you beiber fever fans). She could pretend to die and be thrown out. But everything was safe and she didn't want to risk it. She just had to keep thinking someday her prince will come.
The next morning I woke up to the sound of my mom yelling at me "Dianna! Get up, its 7:30!"
"I got up and got ready for school, at least I was able to see my friends today. I got to school and sat down. My friends soon came to me. "Dianna how are you?"
"Good, so hey what's up, you people."
"Nothing much, did you notice Kelly isn't here today" said my friend, Lara
"Yeah, pretty weird considering I walked home with her yesterday"
"Well maybe she was sick and she told Maya that she was" said Jenny, another friend
"Yeah"
We walked to Maya but sadly the reading teacher, Ms. Jones, came inside and told us that we were starting now.
Halfway through the lesson we were reading a passage called The Savannah when some people came in the room. It was the BAU. Everyone was there, Rossi, Reid, Prentiss, Morgan, Hotch, and JJ. Garcia must've been over at the office finding facts. I knew the team because they did a show from time to time (its my dream just go along with it.) The show's name was criminal minds. I really like the show and over the time I watched it I grew an attachment or at least liking to Reid fro how much he was similar to me.
"Umm, Ms. Jones can we talk to you for a second?" asked Hotch
"Yes, guys just keep reading" she said, she walked around the desks and went to the front.
I could hear them whispering but everyone was reading a paragraph and looking at them, reading and looking. My group, since the desks were arranged in groups of 4, started whispering among ourselves.
"So, what do you think thats about?" asked a kid
"I have no idea" I said
Then the teacher said, "Dianna, they need you" and she walked back to her desk "The rest of you keep reading, okay Jenny continue where we left off"
"Wait a second guys" I told the team, "Let me finish" I sped read through the rest and gathered my stuff. "Ms. Jones do we have any homework?"
"No, just go."
"Okay"
I walked out side the classroom and Morgan held the door for all of us.
"So, Dianna, do you know this person" Hotch said, showing me a picture
"Yeah" I said. We stopped in the middle of the hallway "That's Kelly, I walked home with her yesterday"
"Okay, well she was abducted yesterday at her house" Morgan said walking toward us
"What!" I said, looking in disbelief
"Yes, well we think you had something to do with it. Because your mom told us you were at her house before you came home and the unsub, abducted her after and the different time intervals would mean you had to have something to do with it because logically it wouldn't make any sense if you didn't know what was going on" said Reid
"Okay Reid, I like you but for now, shut up" I said then I turned my head to face Hotch "I didn't do it, I swear, sometimes I don't like her but seriously why would I abduct her?"
"Okay but can you at least come answer some questions back at the station?" he asked
"Sure, as long as it gets me out of my language arts teacher's class, Ms. Rodriguez" I said
Then we walked out and left for the station.