This is a trial. It may not come out like it sounds like it would. It may suck. It may be a big hit. Ya never know. Wish me luck. Here we go.
Journey To The Village Hidden In The Flames
Chapter 1
Sasuke's Sister
"Is that all?"
"Yes. Find Kakashi and his group and bring them to this village."
"Wait I thought you just wanted Kakashi? Don't you think that this will be dangerous?"
"No. It won't be."
She swallowed hard. "Yes sensei."
"Now go find them."
"Yes sensei." and with that the girl vanished from her sensei's view.
"Kakashi-sensei, when are we going to get there?" whined Naruto. "Shut up Naruto." Sasuke yelled back at him. Then suddenly a girl came running into their sight. She was tripping over herself. When she was about three yards away from them she turned around and made a hand signal for a jutsu. "Shadow clone justu." She whispered, then sent the clones into the trees and made another hand signal. This time she whispered, "Transform." And in the blink of an eye she was a dog. Then a man came running like he was chasing the girl that changed into a dog. He looked around furiously, then picked up the dog by its back. She growled and bit him on the wrist. He threw her down to the ground so hard that she yelped in pain.Then she gave out a very loud growl and bark one after another. Then the shadow clones that she sent into the trees came out and attacked him, and she changed back into a person. She reversed the shadow clone justu and and pulled out a kunai knife(sp?) (heck I don't even know how it is pronounced). She threw the knife at him then threw down a ball. To be accurate a smoke bomb, then turned and kneed him in the gut. She turned and stayed with her back to him. He collapsed to the ground and the girl was victorious. Wow she's as strong as Sasuke, has almost the same techniques as me and she is... she is... no she's not. I'm just imagining things, that isn't possible. Thought Naruto. "That'll teach ya." She said. She started walking away. "Wait right there. What is your name?" Kakashi asked her. "Mina. Mina Anuchi. Are you Kakashi? And is this your group of ninja?" Mina asked Kakashi. "Hi my name is Naruto, that is Sakura and that one is..." Naruto was interrupted. "Sasuke." Mina said. Naruto looked like he had just seen a ghost. Then Sasuke woke him up by saying, "And that one! How about and he is! Do ya like that better loser!"
"Where do you come from Mina?" Kakashi asked her. "I come from the Village Hidden in the Flames. And I was sent by my sensei to come and bring you there." Mina responded to Kakashi's question. "That is good news. We are heading there to do something. Can you lead us there?" Kakashi asked Mina. "Yes. I can, I will, and you can't stop me." Mina smirked.
"How did you know Sasuske's name?" Naruto asked her. "I'll tell you later. Now we have to get to my village."
When they got to the village gates suddenly someone splurted out, "Hey why doesn't our village have big gates like that?" Then all you heard was that person being smacked and birds flying out of the trees and away. "Thats because your village is well known, mine isn't. The gates are to keep out curious travelers." Mina responded. Mina put in a pin and the gates opened. As they walked in a villiger walked up to Mina."Mina there has been another mission for you. Your sensei has it back at your dojo." spoke the villager. "Okay thank you." Mina responed. "Hey what was your frst mission rank?" Naruto asked her. "Mmmm about a b, I think."
"B?"
"Yea, my village is really specific about this stuff. You?"
"B." Naruto just got showed up by a girl. As they headed over to the dojo, some how Mina thinks that Naruto and Sasuke got into a slap fight. She also relized that Sakura was staring at Sasuke with a really weird look and wouldn't stop. It kinda scared her. Well off the topic, Mina started humming something and Naruto thought he heard it before. Then they got to her house/ dojo. Almost automaticly someone cough Naruto cough cough called out, "Dang thats big. You live there?" Then Mina walked over to a sign that said 'dojo of hidden flame Mina and sensei' and has an arrow pointing to the left. Then underneeth it with an arrow pointing to the right it said,'Home' "Ohhhhh." everyone said. Then Sakura said, "Are you rich?" Mina gave her a look. "Does it look like I'm rich!" She parcticly screemed. Everyone knoded their heads at the question. Then Mina explained that she only lived on the top floor. the second floor was the guest rooms and the bottem floor was the living room, kitchen, main room and dinning room. She doesn't know why the kitchen is there though. She eats in her room and her sensei, as she belives, eats in the dojo. Then Mina brought everyone inside the house. While they were standing in the main room Naruto brought up that from behind, Mina's hair looks like a bush. After that she asked Naruto to follow her into the kitchen and while they were in the kitchen Kakashi, Sasuke and Sakura all heard a large amount of water hit the floor. Mina came out with a big grin on her face and Naruto came out all wet. Mina turned around and said proudly, "Thats what you get for insulting my hair." Mina turned around and headed up stairs and was up there for a while. she came down and had stright hair. "Insult my hair again and you will learn how hard it is to have curly hair. Hey i might show you how hard it is to have curly hair when you're a girl."
"Are you saying that you're gonna turn me into a girl and curl my hair."
"Damn right I'm saying that."
"Mina! Stop fooling around and show them to their guest rooms. Now!" Screemed someone in the shadows. Mina sighed. "Yes sensei. Follow me."
Mina brought everyone to their rooms and got them settled. Unfortunitly Mina's sensei kinda favors boys and only has a boys guest room so there seemed like a problem... But like most problems, Mina has it under control. She led Sauske, Kakashi and Naruto to their rooms. As for Sakura, Mina figured out. Baisicly because Mina's room was the whole top floor, she took something that she could use as a devider and devided the room in half. Also about the bed Mina used a jutsu she learned in the begining of her trining to bring an extra bed for Sakura up into her room. "Wow you have an answer to everything, don't you?" Asked Sakura. "No, not really. I don't have an answer to... Uhhh... I don't have an answer to to uhhh... I don't have an answer to why boys are such dopes!" Mina looked so proud of herself. "Mina... No one has the answer to that." Stated Sakura. Mina shruged, "So, what's your point?" They started laughing like they have been friends forever. After a good laugh or two, Mina remembered they had to go downstairs and to the dojo. So they headed down to get the boys. After that they all headed to the dojo following Mina. When they got there Mina's sensei stated, "Mina has been getting stronger and I don't know if i can handle her any longer. Its about time I have disposed of her..."
well do you think it is a good spot for a cliff hanger? Just do me a favor if you think it is good review. Just so you know this was the first time i wrote a story with my new reading glasses on so if there are any speling msitakes blame the glasses!